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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: FIREMYSOUL

That's the new story writer of udaariyaan pata nahi kaunse nashe main udte hue😳 So far both her episodes have been bekaar let's c aage kya pakati hai ye.

She put of status Fatejo is back. Time to watch UD. Fatejo to wahi ke wahi dikh rahe mujhe. Kone ne pade hue😆

Btw i feel with Tejang angle getting focus. Fatejo love story will be more in limelight now. That's what she meant. Coz till now whole focus was on Jasmin and her revange drama woth Fatejo as team fighting her out, which has failed miserably .

I will be all happy be she somehow minmises Jasmin Jasrik.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

She put of status Fatejo is back. Time to watch UD. Fatejo to wahi ke wahi dikh rahe mujhe. Kone ne pade hue😆

Btw i feel with Tejang angle getting focus. Fatejo love story will be more in limelight now. That's what she meant. Coz till now whole focus was on Jasmin and her revange drama woth Fatejo as team fighting her out, which has failed miserably .

I will be all happy be she somehow minmises Jasmin Jasrik.

she loves to confuse viewers

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SaoirseRZ

Probably didn't encounter it when you did.🙃

Yes matlab ek time tak to inke pass story thi. now they have been driving around like a drunk at night Idhar Udhar without a sense of direction

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Posted: 3 years ago

"ouchh Fatehhhh!! It's hurting" winced Tejo while almost tearing Fateh's shirt.

Fateh , slowly blowing air over her wounds , "bear for few more seconds Tejo and the dressing will done" . His heart was sobbing seeing his lady love cry in pain as she burnt her back while saving her evil sister who could only pray for Tejo's death.


He put the ointment and carefully dressed her back so that she doesn't feel any discomfort.

He was about to let her go while Tejo held him more tighter. He held her from her lower back with his left hand and started to stroke her head gently with his right.

"Everything will be alright Tejo , she will back home soon , you have done so much , must be tired , don't think much and take rest"

With teary eyes , Tejo's lips drew a small smile , "aren't you tired Fateh? Even you were injured badly and yet were running here and there for everyone's help. I got so scared with all this that I didn't even bother to ask if you are ok" saying so Tejo broke the hug and looked into his eyes. Yes , he did miss her care. She stroked back his hair and saw her man's face lit up.


"I'm fine Tejo , I just want you to be out of danger. You heal , I heal" and he bend forward pecking her forehead.

He got up and set a pillow so that Tejo could sleep on her stomach and avoid the surface from touching her burnt back. Tejo slowly crawled over the bed and lay down still looking at Fateh.

" Now it's time to sleep , keep your mind calm and sleep sound , the medicines will anyway put you to sleep though" smiling Fateh was about to leave when Tejo held his arm while looking deep into his eyes and pouting a puppy face.


"Does she want me to stay here with her? With her, in the same room? " While Fateh was busy wondering why Tejo held his hand , his trans broke when she asked if he could sleep beside her.

He could hear the bells ringing in his heart.

Tejo could clearly see her hulk like man smiling stupidly like a child who got offered a Candy after eating some bitter pills. She could only admire him until she realised that he has already set himself on the bed.

They looked at eachother with a smile of completeness and Tejo slowly closed her eyes.

"Tejo..." Fateh called her while scratching her button nose , she looked at him , he wanted her to 'yes' for something probably.

"What happened Fateh?"

He put on a awkward smile and slowly crept his right arm under Tejo's head and paused until Tejo adjusted herself to lay her head on his chest.

Her eyes smiled and she closed them without saying a word.

Hadn't it been months that he took her this close to his chest. He felt lighter , his soul was probably flying in the air out if joy.

He locked his lady love between his strong arm and bulky body , close enough to not let air in , tight enough to feel her breath but careful enough to not cause any pain to her wounds.

He switched off the lights and dozed off dreaming of the life that he wants to give her.






This is my very first attempt , if it's not good then just lol at it. If any mistakes kindly excuse I'm lazy for proofreading😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is the first thing I am reading in the morning... What a day Maria. I love you sooo much my ishq❤️

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Omg they're sooo sooo cute.... I almost died. When he's scratching her nose.

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And them sleeping together.. God it needs to happen. They've been soo soo bothered and troubled about everything, it's been so long. Theyre gonna sleep like puppies

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It's soo sooo soo good. I've written so much worse stuff. I loveeeee you.

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Edited by Bluekohl - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

This is the first thing I am reading in the morning... What a day Maria. I love you sooo much my ishq❤️

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Omg they're sooo sooo cute.... I almost died. When she's scratching his nose.

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And them sleeping together.. God it needs to happen. They've been soo soo bothered and troubled about everything, it's been so long. Theyre gonna sleep like puppies

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It's soo sooo soo good. I've written so much worse stuff. I loveeeee you.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: 08_maria

"ouchh Fatehhhh!! It's hurting" winced Tejo while almost tearing Fateh's shirt.

Fateh , slowly blowing air over her wounds , "bear for few more seconds Tejo and the dressing will done" . His heart was sobbing seeing his lady love cry in pain as she burnt her back while saving her evil sister who could only pray for Tejo's death.


He put the ointment and carefully dressed her back so that she doesn't feel any discomfort.

He was about to let her go while Tejo held him more tighter. He held her from her lower back with his left hand and started to stroke her head gently with his right.

"Everything will be alright Tejo , she will back home soon , you have done so much , must be tired , don't think much and take rest"

With teary eyes , Tejo's lips drew a small smile , "aren't you tired Fateh? Even you were injured badly and yet were running here and there for everyone's help. I got so scared with all this that I didn't even bother to ask if you are ok" saying so Tejo broke the hug and looked into his eyes. Yes , he did miss her care. She stroked back his hair and saw her man's face lit up.


"I'm fine Tejo , I just want you to be out of danger. You heal , I heal" and he bend forward pecking her forehead.

He got up and set a pillow so that Tejo could sleep on her stomach and avoid the surface from touching her burnt back. Tejo slowly crawled over the bed and lay down still looking at Fateh.

" Now it's time to sleep , keep your mind calm and sleep sound , the medicines will anyway put you to sleep though" smiling Fateh was about to leave when Tejo held his arm while looking deep into his eyes and pouting a puppy face.


"Does she want me to stay here with her? With her, in the same room? " While Fateh was busy wondering why Tejo held his hand , his trans broke when she asked if he could sleep beside her.

He could hear the bells ringing in his heart.

Tejo could clearly see her hulk like man smiling stupidly like a child who got offered a Candy after eating some bitter pills. She could only admire him until she realised that he has already set himself on the bed.

They looked at eachother with a smile of completeness and Tejo slowly closed her eyes.

"Tejo..." Fateh called her while scratching her button nose , she looked at him , he wanted her to 'yes' for something probably.

"What happened Fateh?"

He put on a awkward smile and slowly crept his right arm under Tejo's head and paused until Tejo adjusted herself to lay her head on his chest.

Her eyes smiled and she closed them without saying a word.

Hadn't it been months that he took her this close to his chest. He felt lighter , his soul was probably flying in the air out if joy.

He locked his lady love between his strong arm and bulky body , close enough to not let air in , tight enough to feel her breath but careful enough to not cause any pain to her wounds.

He switched off the lights and dozed off dreaming of the life that he wants to give her.






This is my very first attempt , if it's not good then just lol at it. If any mistakes kindly excuse I'm lazy for proofreading😆



OMFGGGGGGGGG! THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFUL MORNING!!!


This is SUKOON. I feel SO content. Even mysoul is flying out of my body right now!!! ❤️


Make this wonderful girl and her ishq writers of UD right now 😭

And this is all I will think of for today,

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

I'm glad you liked it😳 Thank you for pumping me up🤣

I thought to add more but didn't want to make it longer so😆

If this has really made your morning a happy one then I'm happy too🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

yeahh pls let them sleep together😭

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