Saba is writing for Udaariyan - Page 2

I have noticed you are always making posts for writers. You seem to work for similar background. I don't know the details. I am just putting my thoughts from my liking of the serial perspective.

You get so much concerned now and then for writers..oh now this writer has come, it will be not good for serial. It should be this, some writers previous serial was flop so he will do the same here. Only this writer can take serial in better position.

Is serial all about writers? What about direction and execution? that also matters.

e.g. 1) Let say the writer is writing this line which we didn't like "Kaisi ho na tum" I don't see anything wrong in this line. 2) all so called baby romance...I feel for all these are more of directors mistake to tell them for softness..Those dialogues can be executed normally also or as required.

Also, I am not sure how writers work. Is the writer for each actor? or for all? I know there is common plot of story and further major breakdowns of the plots. It's only Abhira's scenes we have problems??? But Abhira's scenes are written by Utkarsh from the beginning. Is the director changed? I will question that first.

With all these news constantly, not able to enjoy the serial as it is.

Originally posted by: DiamondLife

I have noticed you are always making posts for writers. You seem to work for similar background. I don't know the details. I am just putting my thoughts from my liking of the serial perspective.

You get so much concerned now and then for writers..oh now this writer has come, it will be not good for serial. It should be this, some writers previous serial was flop so he will do the same here. Only this writer can take serial in better position.

Is serial all about writers? What about direction and execution? that also matters.

e.g. 1) Let say the writer is writing this line which we didn't like "Kaisi ho na tum" I don't see anything wrong in this line. 2) all so called baby romance...I feel for all these are more of directors mistake to tell them for softness..Those dialogues can be executed normally also or as required.

Also, I am not sure how writers work. Is the writer for each actor? or for all? I know there is common plot of story and further major breakdowns of the plots. It's only Abhira's scenes we have problems??? But Abhira's scenes are written by Utkarsh from the beginning. Is the director changed? I will question that first.

With all these news constantly, not able to enjoy the serial as it is.

The serial is about the tracks and how the director, editors, actors perform.

Total production value goes for a toss if there is no proper frame work.

Utkarsh is in charge of the main plot along with Dheeraj Sarna.

Bhavna brings in life to fictional characters via screen play

Dheeraj makes a difference with the dialogues

The directors are shuffled. Yes mainly they are not able to get a firm grip of the script.

The scenes are handled by Bhavna and not Utkarsh. He has the capacity to execute everything in his way but has his limitations.

I made a post because Saba wrote YRKKH for 8 years. She can be consistent and has a say over her characters.

The current team is scattered.

Overall everyone is not doing a great job and it reflects on the final product.

Time will tell.

Again my POV won't match yours. I suggest you watch without getting into these details.

Originally posted by: DiamondLife

I have noticed you are always making posts for writers. You seem to work for similar background. I don't know the details. I am just putting my thoughts from my liking of the serial perspective.

You get so much concerned now and then for writers..oh now this writer has come, it will be not good for serial. It should be this, some writers previous serial was flop so he will do the same here. Only this writer can take serial in better position.

Is serial all about writers? What about direction and execution? that also matters.

e.g. 1) Let say the writer is writing this line which we didn't like "Kaisi ho na tum" I don't see anything wrong in this line. 2) all so called baby romance...I feel for all these are more of directors mistake to tell them for softness..Those dialogues can be executed normally also or as required.

Also, I am not sure how writers work. Is the writer for each actor? or for all? I know there is common plot of story and further major breakdowns of the plots. It's only Abhira's scenes we have problems??? But Abhira's scenes are written by Utkarsh from the beginning. Is the director changed? I will question that first.

With all these news constantly, not able to enjoy the serial as it is.

I totally agree. Frankly speaking the regular viewers who watch the show on tv don't even read the names of the people associated with the show. They don't care if the writers are changed or not. All they need is drama and entertainment and as long as they're getting that, they'll watch it. This show has been running for years. Trps keep going upar neeche. It's not something new. After 2 weeks decline this week trps increased slightly. Now Abhira shaadi track is going to start and I am sure the viewers would definitely watch the track. After all, shaadis are the trademark of this show and trps will rise. As long as trps are good, we shouldn't care. Yeh sab writing department, direction department hum viewers ke haath mein nahi hai so iske baare itna sochke kya faida? As viewers hum kyun tension le? Let the channel and ph take this tension. Humko toh bas drama and entertainment chahiye.

On topic, my thoughts.. yeh rishta style of romance has always been the cutesy, cheesy kind… karthik and naira characters were in there early 20’s and such stuff worked.. and also kaira had a proper love story. And if am not wrong the credit for the kaira love story also goes to garima and bhavna only.. ofcourse when u have to run a couples story for years, the characters and story will go for a downfall and it happened with kaira as well with the same garima and bhavna at the helm..

the issue with abhira imo is that the same kind of cutesy stuff which they feel is a hallmark of the show doesnt seem to work for the online audience i feel. This is just my observation..

actually abhimanyu was introduced as an intense character and this cute volteface is not being accepted by fans i feel. Also again harshad’s body of work also has been more of the intense, serious, sombre kind that he is not being accepted like this by fans..

As for trp dip, i think its the lack of a basic story that has caused issues. The trp audience was excited to watch abhira come together but now there is no curiosity because they feel the love story is over…

Originally posted by: Lonelythots

On topic, my thoughts.. yeh rishta style of romance has always been the cutesy, cheesy kind… karthik and naira characters were in there early 20’s and such stuff worked.. and also kaira had a proper love story. And if am not wrong the credit for the kaira love story also goes to garima and bhavna only.. ofcourse when u have to run a couples story for years, the characters and story will go for a downfall and it happened with kaira as well with the same garima and bhavna at the helm..

the issue with abhira imo is that the same kind of cutesy stuff which they feel is a hallmark of the show doesnt seem to work for the online audience i feel. This is just my observation..

actually abhimanyu was introduced as an intense character and this cute volteface is not being accepted by fans i feel. Also again harshad’s body of work also has been more of the intense, serious, sombre kind that he is not being accepted like this by fans..

As for trp dip, i think its the lack of a basic story that has caused issues. The trp audience was excited to watch abhira come together but now there is no curiosity because they feel the love story is over…

True.

Kaira's love story was beautifully penned by the writers. Obviously the credit of their journey goes to Garima and Bhavna. However they are trying to change core traits of Abhira by suddenly getting S2 and S3 together.

We saw a firm, shy and coy Akshara in the beginning. Off late she is borderline rude. There is a sudden evolution in Akshara which is volcanic. All pent up emotions are coming out in one go.

Similarly Abhimanyu wasn't childish at all. He is somewhat Alpha Gamma. This guy threatened Akshara with dire consequences and ultimatums. A very hot tempered personality without patience or reasoning.

He became a soft toy in February.

I do contribute to trps and yeah do not like the changes.

The story got over after confession and is unable to sustain solely due to everyone responsible for production value.

Originally posted by: Salutethearmy

The serial is about the tracks and how the director, editors, actors perform.

Total production value goes for a toss if there is no proper frame work.

Utkarsh is in charge of the main plot along with Dheeraj Sarna.

Bhavna brings in life to fictional characters via screen play

Dheeraj makes a difference with the dialogues

The directors are shuffled. Yes mainly they are not able to get a firm grip of the script.

The scenes are handled by Bhavna and not Utkarsh. He has the capacity to execute everything in his way but has his limitations.

I made a post because Saba wrote YRKKH for 8 years. She can be consistent and has a say over her characters.

The current team is scattered.

Overall everyone is not doing a great job and it reflects on the final product.

Time will tell.

Again my POV won't match yours. I suggest you watch without getting into these details.

Was Saba part of YRKKH season 3 anytime since the show started?