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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for tagging ani

superb os

loved this sarcastic tejo complete turnaround from tejo from show

lolz fattu what he always been😆 and her outburst to sandhu's and virks dadi fainted😆 it reminded me someone's os written drunken tejo not remembering now whose.

and all thanks for this to angad maan👍🏼

good rupi supported her

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Posted: 3 years ago
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@thunderbird

your herapheri siggies are apt and made it more funny😆

thanks for posting them👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Who would be chor and who would be sipaahi in your show 😆

yeh me having same question 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

Hi ash,

How are u ?

Have u joined office??

I wrote a short one here on future track. Can read if u get the time

I will read ur short story in while. yes joined office not getting more time. How r u?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ani.. you are awesome 😍

This was so funny🤣🤣 I am so stressed these days with work and other stuff.. this was a stress buster.😆 I just want March to end soon😵


Toy plane hi afford kar sakte hai.. ye Sandhus😆

But Virks🤣 they have to witness chronicles of Jasmine everyday🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ketty84

I will read ur short story in while. yes joined office not getting more time. How r u?


Hi ketty .


Good to know u are busy . At least that will take away your mind from torturous UD land. U used to rant about tejo. I guess now u moved on.

Anyway I am fine tq and moved on from this sh** as well 😁😁.

If they show a strong tejo like how i have written here, them i might rewatch.

Otherwise tata bye bye.

Just want to know are u continuing ur Tejang story and btw jasrik marriage has happened.

Kvg still in the show. Now latest update, heard they are going for tejang and fatejo.

Too late i guess. Those who wanted tejang moved on . I was not really keen on tejang coz i knew he was only a cameo . I only wanted a beautiful friendship journey between tejo and angad.

After facing two betrayals how he supports her etc. I wanted the strong tejo with kvg positive closure.

Not turning him evil just to make the ML look good.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: thunderbird

Aree sometimes i feel they do deserve each other she is itna mahaan ki no one can do anything and i got irritated of her before leaving the show

Im sorry but even if tejo is a goody too shoes she is not a great charecter, way too forgiving , trusting. why on earth did she need to do fake engagement for those 2 idiots who insulted her, after EMA she should have left Virks, on top of that she expects everyone to be as forgiving as her.


I disliked her from the fake engagement onwards.

Her selfless is mere hypocrisy. No woman in real would do that

During her face offs with jasmin she clearly told her off numerous times that she doesn't care what jasfa does and she won't interfere.

Says something else does smtg else.

Made use of angad coz she knew liked her

Anyways trps soaring. UD lost its charm. That's all

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wah u are so creative.😁😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was damn good!!! 😂😂 I wanna read more of it!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Who would be chor and who would be sipaahi in your show 😆


Sorry delay in reply. Was busy. Didn't come to IF for two days.

My kid was not well. Had first vaccination of covid.

Gov stated five to eleven yrs to be vaccinated. Pfizer biotech for kids

Lots of them getting infected. Really scary.

I stopped her school as well. She's in kindie.

Next year will be primary one

Now i teach her myself.


The chor would be Ankit and sipaahi will be Kvg.

Ankit will nail on grey character.

The chor will be like olden day bandits. ( Daku)

Suggested a name. The famous one.

Daku Mangal Singh

With turban, moustache and a big mole on the right cheek. Old hindi movie type bandits😁😁

But he is a good chor. Steal from the rich donate to the poor. Robin hood type wala chor.


The sipaahi will be corrupted police officer. ( Kvg)

Personality like the seventies hindi style. Doesn't wear uniform . But jacket and bellbottom style wala pant. With moustache . Carries a revolver and stylish like Rajnikant.

He is a good man. Takes bribery but donates to the poor

Both men same quality.

Kind and generous despite their grey shades.

Storyline will be written by me


Two heroines. .

For the chor is a modern type wali rich career ambitious woman.

One day he robbed her hse then saw her and fall in love at first sight. Tries to tackle her by learning to speak English . Trying to be a gentleman.

For the sipahi is gaun ki chori. Something like Imlie. He likes her but she likes the chor instead.

The rich girl that the chor likes will fall for the sipahi instead .

Cross angle love.

The chor's mother likes the village girl and the sipahi's mother likes the rich girl.

Family drama.


I need a financier.

Full on entertainment and drama

Story will be bombastic. I am so creative. That u all know

Aek chor aek sipahi😁😁

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