BHAIYA YA PHIR SAIYAAN! - a story on future track

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This is on future track. I wish pakki marries ishaan . A new woman comes into Agasthia's life. Then pakhi gets to know ishaan's dark side and leaves him . Returns to Agasthia's life but he already moved on.


Bhaiya ya phir saiyaan - a story on upcoming


A week after pakkhi married ishaan

He was devastated and surrendered to drinking. I will never ever get true love in my life. He tried to stop his best friend from marrying the guy she loved but his efforts went futile .

He was aware that she never loved him yet he was adamant that he desired to spend his life only with her .

" Boss, i can't see u like this. I stabbed him but he survived. I didn't know Tanya would expose u . She said she will leave the city with her mother. I am so sorry boss". Yug apologized folding his hands and crying.

He continued, " Tanya told pakki everything about you and pakki eloped with ishaan. She knew u won't allow her to marry him. They tied the knot secretly and i tried my very best to locate them from my sources but still no news about their whereabouts".

He was heavily drunk and whispered " U know why i spared u. Why u are still alive? Coz i still have humanity in me. Just leave me alone".

With a heavy heart , yug left his emotionally wrecked boss all alone in his bedroom wrapped in his own neverending sorrow.

He went to the nearest temple and prayed to lord Ganesha.

" Baapa, main bahut bura aadmi hun. Lekin agar maine zindagi mey kuch acha kiya hain toh mere ache karmon ka phel boss ko dena. Pls bappa. Unki kushiyaan lotado "

Little did he realize that a miracle was on the way . Bappa granted his wish He indeed did a very good karma . He spared Tanya's life which would eventually bring the good fruit into Agasthia's life ".

Kehtey hain ki insan ka aek gun uski sor gunah ko maaf kardeta hain. ( When a human performs one good deed, his hundred other evil deeds are forgiven)


Two days later

Agasthia was on his way to his office for an urgent business meeting which he couldn't avoid. A client was cancelling his deal. He wouldn't tolerate loses and decided to meet that individual personally. A massive traffic ahead. He was getting impatient and instructed his driver to use any short cuts. The latter complained that some roads were blocked. They had no choice. He was annoyed. He opened the door and started walking towards his office which was approx 3 kms away from the location.

Just then,

A grocer came up to him offering some veges which she carried in a basket.

" Saab, sabzi lelo tazi tazi . Vitamin c milta hain . Ap sevast( healthy) rehoge".

He replied angrily while still walking as she tagged along, pleading him to make a purchase.

"Nehin chahiye".

She didn't give up and kept requesting till he exploded

He snatched the basket full of veges and threw it on the hard ground of the roadside and walked away. She was upset and picked up the veges. Some were destroyed.


Three hours later after the meeting in front of his office

As he walked towards his car, an auto rickshaw guy named Akash called out to him while still seated in his vehicle

" Saab, aaj apney us ledki key sath bahut bura kiya. Bechari bahut gerib hain saab. Baap nehin hain. Maa bimar hain. Do chote bhai hain. Apne uska nuksan kardiya saab. Kisi gerib ki baddua nehin leni chahiye".

He stopped at once and walked towards the guy who just taunted him. He was affected with his words. He took out a cheque book and handed over a blank cheque.

" Us ledki ko bolo ismey jitna paisa chahiye likhde aur cheque cash karlena. Ab tum jao yahan sey".


The next morning at 8 am

His security guards kept calling him. He was furious. These people just can't let me sleep peacefully.

" Kya hain" he answered his phone finally.

" Sir, a woman wants to meet u. She said u gave her a blank cheque yesterday. She is very stubborn sir. She said she won't leave until she meets u".

He was pissed. God, why are women so complicated.

He was amazed. She was pretty. Long silky hair tied in a pony tail. 5ft 6, slim , fair complexion , approx 50 plus kg, . Clad in a blue salwar kameez , she looked more like a model than a grocer. He didn't notice her appearance when he saw her the first time at the road side.

He was wondering her reasons to see him as he took slow steady steps towards her.

"Perhaps she wants to get laid with me just like other women or she wants to work in my office. Maybe she wants me to accept her as a model and be my brand ambassador. God, these women, are always having bad intentions when they see a hot charming guy like me"

He was proud of his personality and the fact that women adored him.

" Maybe she's a gold digger. I showed kindness and she's taking the opportunity to ask for more. Perhaps she wants to tackle me".

Thousands of questions in his mind as to why she was adamant to speak to him

" Kya baat karni hain, main janta hun maine tumhara nukhsan kardiya lekin paise bhi toh diya Aur kya chahiye". He enquired harshly.

" I won't give her a chance to tackle me. No way, that too a sabzi bechene wali". He thought to himself waiting for her response.

Surprisingly she was silent. He smirked.

" aha, she didn't get the chance. I shut her up before she could say anything".

Seconds later, she spoke with a smile on her face and showed him the cash that she received after depositing the cheque into the bank. Only one hundred and ten rupees.

He was shocked. She demanded such a small amount of money on a blank cheque.

" Saab, ziada nukhsan nehin hua".

He interrupted sarcastically.

" Toh kyun ayi ho. Kuch aur bhi bechna(sell) hain".

She smiled .

" Nehin saab, kuch dena(give) hain".

He replied angrily. " Main sabzi nehin kahta (eat)".

" Nehin saab kuch aur hain". She stated happily. He was puzzled.

Then she took out a red decorated string from her purse . He was shocked.

A rakhi !!

" Saab, main apko rakhi baandna chahti hun. Mujhey ap key andar aek bhai dikhaideta hain. Ap mere bhaiya benogey".

Oh my god, is this woman crazy. She wants me to be her brother. He moved a few steps backward as she approached him to tie the string on his wrist.

" Saab , kya hua. Aap ghebra kyun rehe ho. Rakhi hi toh hain. Saap( snake) todhi na hain".

He ran towards his bedroom and locked the door instantly. Sweating from head to toe

Unbelievable.

Women out there wanted to make him saiyaan but this was the first female who desired him as bhaiya.

He stared at his reflection in the dressing table mirror.

Was something wrong with me. Have i lost my charm . Why the hell she called me bhaiya.


Agasthia didn't sleep full nite. He was restless. Her thoughts distracted his sleep. His male ego was butchered badly. Couldn't tolerate a beautiful woman wanting to tie him rakhi.


At the guardhse, the next morning

Yug burst out laughing when the security guards naratted the incident. A woman wanted Agasthia to be a brother. Willing to tie rakhi as well.

Somehow he felt that bappa was giving some sort of signal. What could it be? He wondered. There was definitely something coming up soon related to her

Seconds later his phone rang.

" Where the hell are u? ", Agasthia's angry voice.

He knew his boss was affected. His ego was crushed . Women wanted him as saiyaan but not bhaiya.

He pretended to be upset, trying to control his laughter

" Boss, calm down, security walon ney mujhey sab inform kardiya. Ap chahe to usko goli mardeta hun. Uski yeh himmat. She called u bhaiya".

Agasthia interrupted" nehin, goli mat marna. I am not bothered at all".

Yug replied, still trying to control himself from laughing. " Acha boss, why u sound tired. Raat ko neend nehin ayi kya. Ap ka ego hurt hua hain boss. I have been with u for many years. How dare she call u bhaiya ".

He was irritated. " Can u stop repeating that word".

Yug nervously, "Sorry boss"

"Tell the driver , i will be down soon, get the car ready. I am leaving for office early today", he instructed firmly .

Yug smiled to himself. Last nite was the first time boss didn't surrender to liquor. He knew there was definitely something about that woman. Bappa was giving the signal.


An hour later

As soon as he reached his cabin he attended a few business calls . His secretary walked in and stated .

" Sir, a woman insisted to meet u. She has no appointment.. "

He was shocked. Don't tell me now she is stalking me. " Idk , is she fair , pretty and around five ft 6? He enquired nervously.

" Yes sir, she's waiting outside". The assistant answered politely.

Oh no! What is she upto now. He stood and walked towards the door to peep if she was the same woman. As he was about to open the door, she barged in falling into his arms.

That pair of dark eyes. He explored them . For a moment he was lost in the pitch darkness of her beautiful eyes

" Sir". He was interrupted by his secretary.

" Tum thik ho". He enquired nervously still wondering the attraction that he felt seconds ago. There was something about her .


" Saab, ap bahut busy ho. Sorry maine ap ko disturb kiya. Vo actually ap ki office mey koi job milsekti hain. For part time. Morning mey sabji bechti hun, afternoon mey free hun. Socha extra paisa mil jaiga". She requested politely .


" What is ur qualification?" He enquired still couldn't believe his ears. Is this woman for real? First calls me bhaiya and now wants to join my office".

" Saab, only twelve standard pass. Mere pas college mey admission lene key liye paisa nehin hain".

"Ok, submit ur resume and certificates to HR office. I will see what i can do." He replied impatiently. Wanted to get rid of her before she called him bhaiya

" Thank u ,bhaiya". She smiled happily and left.

Miss lata, his secretary' , burst into a laughter and then stopped suddenly when he eyed her fiercely

" Are we done?" He enquired sarcastically to which she nodded and left the cabin hurriedly.

As soon as she came out of the room, she couldn't stop laughing and then passed on the news to other staffs


He couldn't sleep the whole nite. Three times, he rang yug and enquired if he was still charming. Was he handsome and hot.

" Arey boss. U are a hero. Hot piece. Mast ekdum".

He even explored his reflection in the mirror. Am i still the wanted man or have i lost my charm".

He was restless throughout the nite. Her thoughts haunted his distraught mind.


Yug took out his diary and noted happily

Second day in a row boss didn't consume alcohol.

Bappa was definitely giving a signal. He was sure about it.


The next afternoon in his cabin

He was shocked to see her certificate. 98 percent in twelve standard board exams. Straight distinctions. Woah!! She's a genius. She could get admission anywhere. Even scholarship as well. He was puzzled. Why did she not continue college. He rang the HR division and checked with the manager who interviewed her that morning.

" Sir , her father passed away at that time and mother diagnosed with cancer. That interrupted her studies. Two younger brothers' school fees still pending. If she continued studying how could she feed her family"

He was annoyed. An intelligency and education opportunity wasted due to family issues. He sympathized her condition and instructed the manager to hire her instantly but the guy reported there was no vacancy at the moment.

He decided to keep her as a cook. That was the only available position . Salary 50, 000 rupees monthly with company car and driver as well as free medical . . The manager complained that it was too much for a cook. He replied harshly. " Do as i say".


9pm Agasthia's living room

He opened a bottle of vodka and was ready to take the first sip when his phone rang.. The guards were calling.

" Sir that lady again sir. The one u gave blank cheque. She wants to see u ".

Oh no , not again. Why did she come now. The HR had already informed her the details of her job and that she could resume work the next day itself. Perhaps she just wanted to say thank u


" Ok , send her in", he instructed his guard

Clad in a purple saree, she looked fabulous. He couldn't take away his eyes. Apparently she was back from her friend's wedding reception. She had a beautiful figure.


He tried to take a sip of the liquor from his bottle waiting for her to speak for the reason she turned up again and almost choked himself when she blurted excitedly.

" Thank u saab, aaj apney sabit kardiya ki sab aurat ko apkey jaisa bhai milna chahiye. Yeh dekho aaj main aek ki jegah do rakhi lai hun".


He couldn't take it. Now two rakhis. Oh my God. Pls spare me from this strange woman. She moved forward to tie him the string and he ran into his bedroom without looking back.

Seconds later, a knock on the door.

" Saab, andar kya ker rehe ho. Bahar ajao. Rakhi hain saap(snake) nehin hain". She called out sweetly

He didn't respond. Laid on his bed quietly. Pretended he was asleep. He texted the guards. Take the woman away . Tell her i am asleep. Do not disturb. I have a meeting early tmrow.

She left feeling puzzled after the guards ushered her to the front gate. . Why did he go to bed out of sudden. I thought he was drinking vodka.


He was restless. Couldn't sleep whole nite.


Yug was happy when he found out from the guards. Took out his diary and jotted down.

Three days in a row , no surrendering to alcohol.


This woman, ritu verma was definitely an angel sent by Bappa. Thank u Ganesha, he prayed silently.


The next morning.

He was up early but didn't proceed to his office. Grandma was back home finally after spending four days at her daughter's place taking care of her ill grand daughter who was missing her badly.

She was shocked to see Agasthia's condition.

" What happened boy, u look tired. U didn't get enough sleep".

He lied , " idk, lot's of work in the office. Today i took a break".

Yug smiled to himself.

Liar. Afraid to go to office coz she would be there. Bhaiya bulaigi and now she will come after him with three rakhis


His grandma was confused when he refused to leave for work for a week. Just loitering at home.

" Don't u have meetings to attend". She was confused.

" Idk, i work from home, dadi" he blurted nervously.

Something was defo wrong. She wondered. She decided to check with Yug. She couldn't control her laughter when she found out the truth

" Oh my god, his ego must be crushed badly. I know him. Poor thing. ".

The fact that a young beautiful lady wanted to tie him rakhi and make him a brother was too much to handle.


Finally after nine days sitting at home, he left for office one fine afternoon due to an emergency. A break in took place the previous nite. The staff notified the authorities.

He was shocked to find out that she resigned out of sudden. Her mother passed away and she decided to move into another city. Ritu received a luxurious job offer as a brand ambassador. Many told her to apply for modelling and she tried her luck. It clicked. She received a call from an agecy and took off to Mumbai rite away for the interview.


Somehow , he was relieved. Now i would be spared from her sibling love. Thank god no bhaiya and no rakhi.

Yug recorded in his diary happily .

Twelve days in a row, no surrendering to liquor.

Boss didn't realised he stopped drinking and thinking of pakhi. His mind was distracted with ritu verma. The woman who tagged him as bhaiya. He was really affected so much so that he forgot his sorrow. Thank u Bappa. But ritu has gone to Mumbai. What now. He was confused. Bappa definitely had some plans


The next evening,

He received a phone call from an event organiser who requested him to chair a charity event in Mumbai. He nodded in agreement. It was for disabled kids and he adored children. So he couldn't resist.


He left for the Metropolitan and was amazed with the wonderful preparations done by the committee. He wanted to meet the person in charge of the arrangements. What a wonderful job.

He was shocked when he saw her. Ritu was involved in the charity function as a host and also brand ambassador for the organization that was sponsoring the event.

Thankfully, she didn't mentioned bhaiya. He was relieved. She addressed him as sir throughout the event.

That nite , he couldn't sleep as well. He rang yug .

" I can't sleep".

Yug was nervous. " Kya hua boss".

" Arey yeh puch kyun nehin hua". He replied harshly.

Yug was confused. " Matlab"

" Us ney mujhey aaj bhaiya nehin bola. Can u believe it".

Yug sighed.

Yeh boss bhi na. When she called him bhaiya, he couldn't sleep, now when she didn't, same problem. Unnecessary disturb my sleep.

" Toh u should be happy na, she didn't tag u bhaiya".

" Arey that is what i don't understand. Why suddenly like that". Agasthia was puzzled.

" Ok boss, tmrow u go ask her why she didn't call u bhaiya". Yug replied sleepily.

" Oi idiot, how can i ask her". He stated harshly

" Boss , be happy and go to sleep". Yug was getting impatient.

Line disconnected.


The next day, the same occurred. She addressed him as sir. The bhaiya flew away from the window. He noticed that there were changes in her. She maintained her distance and was not as friendly as she was earlier. Is this the same woman. He was puzzled.


The third day , a dinner and dance was organized for the VIPs. She attended as she was the host. Throughout the function , he eyed her closely. The black saree exposed her feminism in an appealing manner that he was finding it difficult to concentrate during the conversations with his fellow peers.

He was offered a glass of wine . He took a sip and then suddenly realized that he didn't consume alcohol for three weeks in a row.


After the party

He gave her a lift to her hotel. As she reached her destination , he finally enquired .

" Tum mujhey bhaiya nehin bulaigi. Irada bedel liya kiya".

She was silent .

He was nervous. God , i shouldn't have asked her . Don't tell me she brought Rakhi in her handbag.

He shifted uncomfortably in the back seat as she was just beside staring at him after being asked the one challenging question.

She approached closer and whispered into his left ear

" Bhaiya bolti hun toh aap bhag jate ho , toh soch rehi hun saiyaan benalun". And pecked him on his lcheek.

He sat in silence. Speechless. Promotion from bhaiya to saiyaan. Somehow he was relieved. Finally he hasn't lost his charm. She was attracted to him just like other women but this time it was different. He felt the same for her.


A new feeling emerged. He could feel the joy of life once again. Ritu ! Ritu! Ritu! . He closed his eyes and whispered her name three times.


Finally after three weeks, that nite, he slept well. Ready to venture into a new journey of life. The morning sunrise would mark the new beginning.


Yug was fast asleep when a message popped up on his phone awakening him . It was from his boss. He frowned. Now what. She called him bhaiya again??


"U must have definitely done a good karma that i am blessed. I like her. I am going to propose her tmrow. She tagged me saiyaan. I am still charming"


He smiled and looked up at the dark sky from the roof of his home. Thank u Bappa for fulfilling my wish.


The end


Ps

Those tagged can read at ur leisure. No hurry An idea popped . I decided to share on future track.

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If u get the time, can read this . Its on future track. An idea popped in mind. Decided to share.

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This is future track. Shared an idea. U can read when u get the time. No hurries

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Tq dear 😍😍

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So sweet and adorable 🥰


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