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hey guys reema this side... I'm starting with a new story that is pyaar ka manjha hope you all give love and support to this story....

so this story will start after shivi gets apart due to misunderstanding....

there will be 6 years of leap

raavi who is now known as a best jewellery desingner of delhi where as now shiva has open two new branches of pandya industeries

and gaura adopted a baby boy named kunal as rishita also gives birth to a baby boy name aditya they both are very close to shiva

where raavi only lives for her daughter ruhi

yes raavi has a daughter its her and shiva's daughter after getting apart she got to knew about her pregnancy

so lets see if destiny will allow shivi to meet once again

this is for the introduction stay tune for the next update soon you will get it till then take care and stay safe

THANK YOU

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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART 1

hello everyone so this is the first part of PYAAR KA MANJHA hope you all like it so without wasting much time lets get started

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6 YEARS leap

in Delhi

girl :- oh god aaj bahut late ho gyi mummy bahut dategi.. haye somnath us hitler se mujhe bacha lena nhi toh aaj meri kher nhi

lady :- haan... haan aaj aapka school ka first day hai aur aap late ho toh mumma aapko daategi dhodi na apko toh pyaar karegi na ( sarcastic way )

girl :- sorry mumma

lady :- arre mai hitler hun aur hitler ko kaun sorry bolta hai

girl :- sorry na mumma aage se nhi bolungi voh vedikha massi nai mujhe late uthaya tha isliye mai late ho gyi

vedika :- arre maine toh jaldi uthaya tha but she was saying massi 5 min more pls

lady :- vedika tumne hi bigad rakha hai ruhi ko

vedika :- arre raavi yeh sab baad me baat karna pehle esse school chodne chalte hai uske baad humme office mai bhi jana hai aaj toh bahut important presantation hai mr. sharma ki beti ki shaadi hai toh usme saare jewellery humare side se hi jayegi '

raavi :- arre haan mai toh bhul hi gyi thi tu dono na mujhe itna pareshan kae dete ho na ki mai aaj ki inti important presantation bhul gyi

vedika and ruhi chuckle

raavi :- ab tum dono yhi khadi muskurati rahogi ya chalo gi bhi

vedika / ruhi :- haan chalo

( vedika is the only person who gives support to raavi after coming to delhi she is with her at every moment she also handle raavi mood swing in pregnancy they both are just like sister even she also gives her shelter in her house and provide her job because raavi wants to be independent n vedika know all about her past what happen with her she is only the support system of raavi as she is also not connected with her massi and maus pa ; she is there with her at every moment if she cry , happy aur at the delivery tie at that time only she become massi of ruhi because she took care of ruhi like her 2 mother )

AT Somnath

dhara :- arre ruk jao kyu bhag rhe ho tum dono

rishita :- dekho na bhabhi yeh aaditya toh meri sunta hi nhi hai kab se bol rhi hun khuch kha le par himmat hai kisiki jo usko khana khila sake

dhara :- kunal... aaditya kyu pareshan kar rahe ho pls ruk jao na kuch kha lo mumma ki baat nhi sunoge

kunal :- nhi mumma humme sirf shiva chachu se khana khana hai nhi toh hum nhi khayege (while running )

dhara :- kunal aapko pata hai na shiva chachu ki meeting hai aaj toh voh jaldi nikal gaye the

rishita :- bhabhi voh toh 6 saal se yhi karta a rha hai subhe dukan jaldi jana aur raat ko late aana voh sirf aur sirf kunal aur aaditya kai saath kush rehta hai nhi toh humare saath toh essa lagta hai jaise hum koi paraye ho raavi ki yado se picha chudane kai liye usne din raat ek kar di aur de aur aaj voh 2-2 branches ka malik hai '

tears roll down from both rishita and dhara cheeks

dhara :- vese saari galti meri hai agar mai raavi se voh sab na khehti aur na hi shiva raavi mai jhagda hota aur na hi raavi hum sab ko chod kar jati aur na shiva essa hota

rishita :- nhi bhabhi aap guilt feel mat kijiye nhi toh aapki firse tabyat khrab ho jayegi

dhara :- kaisi na karu rishita agar aaj raavi humme chod kar gyi hai toh voh sirf meri wajah se

rishita :- bhabhi humme toh yeh bhi nhi pata ki voh zinda hai ya.....

dhara :- nhi rishita essa mat bol

rishita :- toh kaisa bolu bhabhi aapne shiva ko dekha essa lagta hai jaise uske andar ab kuch hai hi nhi... bejan sharir lagta hai pata nhi kya hoga uska

aaditya :- muma aa tai ji se kya baat kar rahe ho

rishita and dhara quickly wipe there tears

dhara :- kuch nhi beta... hum toh bas esse hi... arre dekho chachu jaldi aagye

kunal :- shiva chachu.... aapka din kaisa tha aaj ka?

aaditya :- aapne kuch khaya ?

kunal :- deal final ho gyi kya chachu ?

aaditya :- aap aaj bhi apna khana chod kar aaye ho ?

shiva :- arre shant ho jao tum dono .. bander kahin kai aur aaj ka din bahut acha tha deal bhi final ho gyi hai maine apna sara lunch finish kar diya ... ab tum dono batao tumne khana khaya

rishita :- tumhe toh pata hai na shiva jab tak tum inhe nhi khila dete tab tak yeh nhi khate

shiva :- hoo aap dono nai khana nhi khaya

both nodded negatively

shiva :- chalo mere room mai ... mai aap dono ko khana khila deta hun.. bhabhi ek baar plz aap in dono ka khana mere room mai bhijwa dijiye

rishita :- thik hai

other side

raavi comes out from conference room with a sad face

vedika :- raavi kya hua tumhari meeting kaisi gyi.. but she looks at her face; koi baat nhi raavi mr sharma ka appoinment nhi mila toh kya hua mr chava ka bhi hai

raavi start laughing which made vedika confused

raavi :- sorry.. sorry.. mai bus tumhe dara rhi thi... vedika.. mujhe..yeh ..offer mil gya hai

vedika :- what ( excitment )

raavi hugs vedika

raavi :- thank you so much vedu meri zindgi mai aane kai liye mujhe itna suport karne kai liye

vedika :- raavi tu pagal hai yeh sab toh maine apne liye kiya hai

raavi :- apne liye ??

vedika :- aur kya mujhe massi jo banaya tha tune

raavi :- lekin apni pregnancy mai bahut pareshan kiya tha na maine tujhe

vedika :- lekin usse badi khushkhabri bhi toh di na tune mujhe mera crime partner jo de diya

raavi laughs

raavi :-acha chal ab tujhe hospital mai bhi toh jana hoga na ... docter sahiba

vedika :- haan jana toh hai lekin ehle ruhi ko pick up karege uskai baad tu mujhe hospital chod kar ghar kai liye nikal jana

raavi:- aaj vese teri kitni appoinment hai

vedika :- zyada nhi hai bas 4 - 5 hi hai.. 2 ghante ka hi kaam hai hai... oh haan

raavi :- kya hua

vedika :- kyu na hum log tujhe offer milne ki khushi kahi bahar khana khane chale

raavi :- vedu .. ruhi tujhe pata hai na usse bahar ka khana digest nhi hota

vedika :- aur nhi toh kiya apne papa per jo gyi hai

listing this raavi smile vanished n vedika notice it

vedika :- i.. iam sorry raavi mera voh kehne ka matlb nhi tha..

raavi :- koi baat nhi chal ab

vedika :- arre bahar chalna hai na khana khane

raavi :- vedika

vedika :- tu tension mat le usne 2 mahine sai kuch bahar ka nhi khaya toh isliye uska digestion system mai koi gadbad nhi hogi toh hum abhi ruhi ko pick karke hospital chalte hai vahi se hi kahi chale jayege

raavi :- thik che.. chal ab

so aaj kai liye bas itna hi and comment below that you also have same friend as vedika in your life who is always with you at every circumstances

hope you all like this part n apologize for the error in above text

comment your reaction in the comment box

chalo take care and have a nice day

THANK YOU

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely start to this story👏, wonder the May was about since Dhara is blaming herself, can’t wait for your next update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART 2

so hello everyone I am back with the next chapter hope you all like it so without wasting much time lets get started.....

raavi: chal tu jaldi se bhar aa mi itne gadi nikalti hu phir chalte hai....

vedika: haa tu chal mai aai.....

raavi went to the car and started till then vedika also come and both rode the car to ruhi's school to pick her up....

pandya niwas

then the shiva start feeding both aaditya and kunal

shiva: chalo mere dono babies ne toh khana kha liya ab aap dono niche jao or apni mumma se kaho ki voh apke hand wash kara de....

aaditya/kunal: ok chachuuu....( and ran from there )

shiva: aree aaram se gir jaoge tum dono....( then shiva phone rang and its gombi's call and he picked up)

shiva: hello ji gombi

gombi: hello shiva mujhe tujhse ek baat puchni thi ....

shiva: ji gombi puchiye ....

gombi: shiva jo pandya industries mai jo company hai jisse teri meeting thi kya usse teri baat bani.....

shiva: ji gombi ho gyi deal final unhe kuch chize change karni hai bas uske baad kaam shuru ho jayega....

gombi: aree wah yeh toh bahoot achhi baat hai vese kya naam hai jinke saath deal final hui.....

shiva: ji unka naam mr.raichand sharma jinki beti ki shaadi ki deal final hui hai or unki company ka naam sharm industries hai or unhone yeh kaha hai unki kisi ke saath jewellery desinering ki aj metting hai uske baad dekhte hai agar voh final ho gyi toh shayad hamara saath mai uthna baithna bhi ho

gombi :- acha thik hai maine yhi puchne kai liye call kia tha ab mai rakhta hun

shiva :- thik hai gombi

as shiva hang up the call he went bathroom for changing his clothes ..... he came out and searching something in his cuboard when he find shivi picture where shiva is helding raavi from her waist and raavi 's hands are around shiva's neck and both of them looking to each other and smiling ....a tear rolled down from shiva's checks he sats on the floor and said.....

shiva: kha ....kha hai tu raavi mai tujhe bahut yaad karta hu essa ek bhi pal nhi hoga jisme menne tujhe yaad nhi kiya or tujhe pata hai ...yeh tera bhootnath ne padh likhkar pandya store ki do nayi branches kholi raavi tu jha per bhi hai vaapis aja ...teri kasam tujhe kabhi nhi chodunga or tujhe yeh bhi batana hai ki hum chacha -chachi ban gye mai tujhe bahut yaad karta hu raavi vaapis aaja plz aaja mujhe meri gaalti ka ehsas ho gya hai plz aaja apne bhootnath ke pass and kissed the picture ans kept the picture close to his chest and fallen asleep there.........

in Delhi

raavi and vedika reach the school where ruhi come and hug raavi....

ruhi : mumma aap aa gye mujhe lene....

raavi: haa mera bachha chale ....

ruhi: yha se seedha ghar jayenge...( with puppy face)

vedika laugh : nhi miss beautiful aaj cafe chale vahi khana khayenge....

ruhi: sachi vedu ( looking towards raavi n she nodded ) yeh! hum bhaar khana khane jhange aare vedu iss hitler ko kisane manaya ....hmm

raavi: ruhi mumma ko sab sunaaye de rha hai ....

ruhi: sorry mumma chale vedu....

vedika: yes miss beautiful ...chale raavi

raavi: hmmm....

three of them went to the cafe and order their food and start gossiping.... till then food arrive

vedika order spiciest food because she love spice food and raavi and ruhi order neither too spicy nor too sweet.....and they start eating their food......

while eating food some women are talking about their husband who are sitting next to raavi's bench......

women-1: aree haa tumhara pati toh tumse kitna pyaar karta hai.....

women-: haa unhone mujhe sabke samne i love u bhi bola...

women-3: oyee hoyee ....aree tumne sunna hai humari dost hai na mrs tiwari unki naned ke pati ne usko chod diya...

women-1: achha.... yeh toh burra hua uss bechari ke saath

women-2: haa bhai....pati ke chodne ke baad usko uski yaad bahut aati hogi na ....

women-3: haa ...ab kar bhi kya sakte hai futi kismat uss bechari auraat ki....bahut yaad karti hogi apne pati ko aur mene sunna hai ki voh apne pariwar ki khushi mai kisse ko batati nhi par andar se puri tut chuki hai voh....

after listening all this raavi felt heartbreaking and she start eating vedika's food and tears start rolling down her eyes n start coughing.....ruhi get panicked while seeing her mother and hurriedly give water to raavi and start patting her back....

ruhi: mumma aap thik toh ho na ....ap apna bilkul bhi dhyan nhi rakhti ho.. kya zarurat thi aapko vedu massi ka khana khane ki.. apko pta hai na aap itna spicy nhi kha sakti... lekin nhi aapko toh khana hi hai ......

vedika: princess relax mumma ab thik hai dont worry.....

ruhi: kese relax karu vedu massi dekho na mumma ko kesse royi ja rhi hai.... oh ab mujhe samaj mai aya mumma apko un aunty ki baat sunke papa ki yaad aa rhi hai na aap chinta mat karo papa jaldi ayenge apne hi toh mujhe bola tha ki papa ek bahut important mission pe gye hai or jab tak unke boss unhe na bole tab tak voh nhi a skte apne toh unhe dekh bhi rakha hai par mene toh aaj tak apne papa ko nhi dekha jab bhi mai thodi roo rhi hu mujhe pata hai papa jaldi ayenge ab app jaldi de chup ho jao plz.....

after listening ruhi's words raavi hugs ruhi tightly and said....

raavi: haa mera bachha papa bhaut jaldi apse milne ayenge or dekho ab mumma roh bhi nhi rhi hai na chalo khana khaliya toh chale ghar....

ruhi: mumma aap pakka thik ho na.....

raavi: haa mera bachha pakka thik hu ....( while kissing her checks) chale ab ghar

ruhi: ha chalo....

vedika with her eyes ask raavi that she is ok and raavi nodded....

raavi: vedika mere mai ab bilkul bhi himmat nhi hai kya tu gadi chala legi .....

vedika: haa raavi kyu nhi... chale princess piche betho....

ruhi: nahi vedu massi mai mumma ki godi mai bethungi mumma kya mai apki godi mai baith jao kyuki mujhe thodi si neend bhi aa rhi hai ( with puppy face)

raavi: ( she smile) haa mera bachha bilkul ....ajja mumma apko huggy karke sulayegi....

all settled in car and ruhi drifted sleep in raavi arms....

raavi in mind: kyu shiva ....kyu tune humme akela choda panch saal ...pure panch saal se apne papa ki rah dekhti hai teri betti usko kesse samjhatya hai yeh sirf mai janti hu or mere liye yeh 6 saal kese bette yeh bhi sirf mai hi janti hu har ek ek pal tujhe yaad kiya hai mene jab ruhi mere peth mai thi na jab teri purani voice recording sunti thi or essa lagta tha ki janat mil gyi ghut ghut ke jeeye hai mene yeh chheh saal maan karta tha apni jaandedu mere jeene ka koi vajud hi nhi hai par teri or meri pyaar ki neeshani hamari beti ko dekh kar nhi kar pati thi mene tujhse bahut pyaar kiya hai shiva par usse jyada mai apni beti se pyaar karti hu or kissi ki vajhase usski ankho mai ansu aye yeh mi bardaash nhi kar paungi or aaj teri wajah se meri beti royi hai mai tujhe kabh maaf nhi karungi shiva kabhi nahi.....

and they reach house....

chalo bhai aaj ke liye bas itna hi manna thoda emotional tha par khushi chahiye toh thode dukh bhi toh sehne padenge

precap: shiva receive the call from sharma industries.....

sorry for the mistake in above text and comment your reaction that how you feel about this part

till then take care and stay safe....

THANK YOU

Edited by reema_195 - 3 years ago
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