Moments that break (PART- III pg 11) - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Hayee! This whole piece is so pyara❤️

You have penned it down so beautifully from Raavi's emotional outburst to her yearning for love and acceptance and fear of trusting Shiva again, from Shiva's apology to his way of standing up for Raavi.

I have to say this I loved the way you write emotional parts one can feel for the character while reading it. I had tears in my eyes while reading Raavi's complaints to her parents.

Loved it 😍❤️

Keep writing more girl🤗


(P.S. -Sorry I don't know your name hence used 'girl' hope you won't mind.)

thank you so much for reading and liking my work❣️❣️

You can adress me as Amrit........

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was sooo beautiful 💕

I loved it ❤️

The part in which shiva supported raavi was superb 💕

Loved it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: YummyXteddy

It was sooo beautiful 💕

I loved it ❤️

The part in which shiva supported raavi was superb 💕

Loved it ❤️

thanks for reading🤩🤩

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