OS: Yeh Moh Moh ke dhaage - Page 2

Originally posted by: Mehersudha

Emi rasitiri emi rasitiri. Don't know you have this much talent. Beautiful story with ata and kachori..

😄 Thank you so much Meher. Glad you enjoyed.

Originally posted by: zerroo

I could literally envision the whole scene before my eyes....you write very well...I loved the one shot.pls. write more often .I would be eagerly waiting to read your next shot...

Thank you. I enjoy writing just as much. Just need to do a lot of time juggling to squeeze it in. And most times I want to write but lost as to what scene or topic to write on. I lose time and the chance due to that starting trouble. 😆

Originally posted by: Iforum435

Lovely!! Amazing OS!! It is so subtle and yet so intense.. amazing glimpse of the domestic life Abhi and Akshu.. please write more often

Thank you. Yes, will try.

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Hey Satya... what a great story... I enjoyed every bit of it.. please continue adn update soon.

Thank you.

Continue...? This is a single part OS. So it ends here with this scene. 😊

Originally posted by: SatyaVS

Thank you. I enjoy writing just as much. Just need to do a lot of time juggling to squeeze it in. And most times I want to write but lost as to what scene or topic to write on. I lose time and the chance due to that starting trouble. 😆

Originally posted by: tptwi

I'm already waiting for your next one dear 🤗

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Hahaha! Then help me with my starting trouble na. Suggest something that I can build on.

Wow... This was beautifully written.. 👏👏

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Wow... This was beautifully written.. 👏👏

Thank you so much

Beautiful piece Satya.. 🤩😍😍

This was soo lovely to read.