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Posted: 3 years ago
#91

Dono part abhi padhe


It’s awesome as always Pragya 👏

This story is so interesting with lot of turns and twist..


Thanks for updating it so quickly ..


Loved it..


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Posted: 3 years ago
#92

Thank youuuuuuuuu meri jaaaaN for updating loooooooooveeeee youuuuuuuusmiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31

Kitna badhiya tha yaar yeeeeeee sachmain mera maan karta hai main padhti jaaon padhti jaao basss aaj to sacchi itna acha chapter tha hayeeesmiley9smiley9

Kalyani kitni thoughtful biwi hai yaar mujhe to badi achi lagi ismein kalyani smiley4

Atharv this man doesn't know how to even respect a woman pata nhi businessman ye ban kaise jaata hai sacchi Had hai iss insaan ki smiley7smiley7smiley7

Malhar aaaye haaayyee kya marar mere sher nein issein go malhar go beat the hell out of him chodna maattt iss insaan ko isne hi tumhari biwi ki jindagi nark bana rakhi thi

Chalo finally sabki pata chal gaya ki kallu mallu pati patni hai hayye dil ko sukoonsmiley31

Atharv ki band do do baar bajii sahi hai kallu nein bhi kya badhiya band bajayi vahan malhar sie pita aur vahan public sein bhi pitta smiley37smiley37

Hayye kya hot dikh raha hoga mallu exercise karte huein maine kuch nhi dekha sorry kallu 🙈🙈🙈

Vaise i am naraz ye scene humein nhi mila jab kallu behosh hoke giri aur mallu nein ussein apni bahon main pakadke uski sewa paani ki ..galat baat hai humein aise ahe scenes chahiye we want more ...smiley9

Jaldi sein next update de Dena hum issi jagah phir milenge hayyyee mera maan garden garden ho gya issien padhkein smiley31

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Posted: 3 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Thank youuuuuuuuu meri jaaaaN for updating loooooooooveeeee youuuuuuuusmiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31

Kitna badhiya tha yaar yeeeeeee sachmain mera maan karta hai main padhti jaaon padhti jaao basss aaj to sacchi itna acha chapter tha hayeeesmiley9smiley9

Kalyani kitni thoughtful biwi hai yaar mujhe to badi achi lagi ismein kalyani smiley4

Atharv this man doesn't know how to even respect a woman pata nhi businessman ye ban kaise jaata hai sacchi Had hai iss insaan ki smiley7smiley7smiley7

Malhar aaaye haaayyee kya marar mere sher nein issein go malhar go beat the hell out of him chodna maattt iss insaan ko isne hi tumhari biwi ki jindagi nark bana rakhi thi

Chalo finally sabki pata chal gaya ki kallu mallu pati patni hai hayye dil ko sukoonsmiley31

Atharv ki band do do baar bajii sahi hai kallu nein bhi kya badhiya band bajayi vahan malhar sie pita aur vahan public sein bhi pitta smiley37smiley37

Hayye kya hot dikh raha hoga mallu exercise karte huein maine kuch nhi dekha sorry kallu 🙈🙈🙈

Vaise i am naraz ye scene humein nhi mila jab kallu behosh hoke giri aur mallu nein ussein apni bahon main pakadke uski sewa paani ki ..galat baat hai humein aise ahe scenes chahiye we want more ...smiley9

Jaldi sein next update de Dena hum issi jagah phir milenge hayyyee mera maan garden garden ho gya issien padhkein smiley31


Haaye...inna sohna comment. Behen Aaj raat bade acche sapne aayenge mujhe. Fikar not mast romantic scenes honge is FF me. Tere koi suggestions ho to batana.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Dono part abhi padhe


It’s awesome as always Pragya 👏

This story is so interesting with lot of turns and twist..


Thanks for updating it so quickly ..


Loved it..



Thanks a lot Priyu.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


Haaye...inna sohna comment. Behen Aaj raat bade acche sapne aayenge mujhe. Fikar not mast romantic scenes honge is FF me. Tere koi suggestions ho to batana.

saree to ye roj hi pehenti hai abb go short dress Mai. Bhi malhar nein dekh liya varna ek baar haaye vala reaction to maare ye band use dekhke khadoos😆
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Posted: 3 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Phlo004

saree to ye roj hi pehenti hai abb go short dress Mai. Bhi malhar nein dekh liya varna ek baar haaye vala reaction to maare ye band use dekhke khadoos😆


Chal. Done. Next chapter me Malhar will be bharoing thandi aahein on seeing his wife

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Posted: 3 years ago
#97

Thank you Pragya for considering and using my idea..

The whole update was awesome..

Kalyani bringing in the files...

They are extremely professional in their work place... I like that a lot.

Atharv barges in as usual mannerless guy..

Like Kalyani I also loved that Malhar considered protecting her dignity higher than his pain. 👏👏

Bloody Atharv stilk tried to put them down

Aww... Singham ne atharv ki pitayi ki.. 🥳

Loved the way Kalyani made Atharv say sorry.

And Malhar's instincts have kicked in..


Mujhe bohot acha laga..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Thank you Pragya for considering and using my idea..

The whole update was awesome..

Kalyani bringing in the files...

They are extremely professional in their work place... I like that a lot.

Atharv barges in as usual mannerless guy..

Like Kalyani I also loved that Malhar considered protecting her dignity higher than his pain. 👏👏

Bloody Atharv stilk tried to put them down

Aww... Singham ne atharv ki pitayi ki.. 🥳

Loved the way Kalyani made Atharv say sorry.

And Malhar's instincts have kicked in..


Mujhe bohot acha laga..


Thanks a lot Rekha. Your suggestions helped a lot to deal with writing block.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#99

Vanshu ji this one is especially for you:


"Sampada, tum samajhti kyon nahi ho," Kalyani was exasperated, "Kyon kar rahi ho ye sab? Mujhse badla lene ke liye ya Malhar ko jalaane ke liye?"

Sampada smiled bitterly, "Nahi Kalyani. Mujhe tumse problem nahi hai. Magar Malhar, maine kitne saalon uska intezaar kiya hai aur vo kucch ghante nahi ruk sakta. Usne ye tak jaanne ki koshish nahi ki main kahaan hoon, kis haal me hoon, bas tumse shaadi kar li kyonki tum moti salary laakar uske ghar me dogi."

"Chi," Kalyani said, "Itne saalon ke pyaar me bas itna hi samajh paayi tum Malharji ko. Agar tumhe Malharji ki sacchai par hi bharosa nahi hai to fir sach bolun you didn't deserve him."

"Kya?" Sampada said, "Aur tum deserve karti ho use? Agar tum DM na hoti to kya haisiyat thi tumhari? Atharva ki rejected ex wife?"

"Sampada, tumhari bakwaas main isliye sun rahi hoon kyonki agar main tumhe kucch bolungi to Malharji ko accha nahi lagega. Varna acche se jawaab deti tumhe."

"Malhar ki life me to ab bura hi bura hone waala hai. You just wait and watch," Sampada designer saari aur sunglasses me kisi heroine ki tarah lag rahi thi aur Kalyani ko pehli baar life me kisi se itni jalan ho rahi thi.

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14th Feb:


Pata nahi kisko aaj ke manhoos din hi Alumni meet rakhni thi.

Tabhi ek ladki jo Sampada aur Malhar ki common friend thi, uske paas aakar boli, "Kya baat hai Malhar aaj akele akele aaye ho? College me to tum aur Sampada ek minute ke liye alag nahi hote the. Vaise Sampu madam hain kahaan?"


Tabhi Sampada ek magenta gown pehne Atharv ki baahon me baanh daale vahin aa gayi, "Are nahi nahi Anjali. Mera pati Malhar nahi, Atharv hai. Vo kya hai na, Malhar me vo charm aur class hai kahaan jo Atharv me hai?" Sampada fiddled with Atharva's diamond studded wristwatch.


"Magar Sampada tum aur Malhar to ek doosre se..."


"Time sab kucch badal deta hai, darling," Sampada said watching Malhar furtively, "Jab sab badal gaya to maine bhi khud ko badal diya. Abhi hi dekh lo mujhe aur Malhar ko. Koi match hai hamara. Malhar jaise boring old fashioned aadmi ke liye to koi behenji..." And then Sampada started being lovey dovey with Atharva.


"Malhar, tum yahaan ho?" Everyone turned at the voice. Kalyani was standing there in a red bodycon with her hair in curls and big hoops in ears. Her scarlet lipstick made her look more alluring.


Without giving the curious gaze of all men and women any attention, Kalyani came straight to Malhar and kissed him on his cheeks. Malhar was stunned.

"Tumhe pata hai na sweetheart, tumhe main ek pal bhi na dekhoon, to everything feels so dull," Kalyani said, "Arre yahaan to tumhari ex bhi hai? Hi Sampada. Lagta hai Atharv tumhara dhyaan theek se nahi rakh paa raha tabhi to mere pati ko taunt kar karke tum apni boring life ko ittu sa masaaledaar banana chahti ho."

"Kalyani!" Sampada was furious.

"Chalo na baby, let's dance," Kalyani said, "I'm feeling so bored looking at SamTharv's sade huye faces."

"Kalyani, ye sab kya hai?" Malhar said, softly. But when Kalyani didn't listen to him, he shouted, "Kalyani!"


Kalyani turned back. Why hadn't he noticed before that Kalyani's eyes had the same innocence and grace like a gazelle's? And her lips...they were just like a siren's. Malhar slided a lock of hair from Kalyani's face and touched her cheek. Kalyani's skin burned with that touch. Then Malhar kissed her on the eyelids.


It was only when he heard the jeering of his college mates, Malhar got out of the trance. Mortified at what he had done, he stormed out of the room.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ohhh my my Kya likha hai Meri pragyu thank you Soo much darling for giving this kalmalicious episode hayyeee kya update thi🤗🤗🤗

Kalyani kitni achi hai sampu ki baatein Tak suni sirf malhar kein liye 😊

Aur sampada nein apne asli rang dikhane chaloon Kar diye yahin hai ye daayan dikha diye apne rang ..😡

Malhar ko suna rahi thi par aagayi malhar ki patni band bajane 😳

Haaye Kya lag rahi thi kalyani aur malhar haayye yahan hamara ladka pighal Gaya

Hayyee kiss uff...Kya gift Mila mujge Valentine's kaa thank you so much pragyu for updating this ff today and giving this update ...🤗🤗

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