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Such a Beautiful story♥️

I loved how Shiva said "Jaan haazir hain par vo nahin"🔥

My heart broke for Raavi💔 This was such a traumatic experiance🤕

Loved this dear🤗

Great update.

I feel the ending was rushed a little but still a good one.

Originally posted by: Paru95

Such a Beautiful story♥️

I loved how Shiva said "Jaan haazir hain par vo nahin"🔥

My heart broke for Raavi💔 This was such a traumatic experiance🤕

Loved this dear🤗

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great update.

I feel the ending was rushed a little but still a good one.

Will surely look upto this in my further stories😇

This story is amazing!!!! No wordsfor this.

Waiting for your another idea.

I just want to say ur writing is fab❤❤❤

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

This story is amazing!!!! No wordsfor this.

Waiting for your another idea.

I just want to say ur writing is fab❤❤❤

It's just fabulous ❤️✨❤️

The way he said, Jaan haazir par wo nahi

The way she trust him..

Sucha lovely story

Originally posted by: Tanishao7

It's just fabulous ❤️✨❤️

The way he said, Jaan haazir par wo nahi

The way she trust him..

Sucha lovely story

Well written

Raavi's reaction in the end was so ro-the-point👍👍👍loved it.....

Loved the way you used the title 💖💖

Overall loved the story😘😘😘😘

Originally posted by: virangna2005

Well written

Raavi's reaction in the end was so ro-the-point👍👍👍loved it.....

Loved the way you used the title 💖💖

Overall loved the story😘😘😘😘