Drabble(s) - Four plus one (update part 5 on page 6 - 20/02) - Page 2

I just listened to Bawra Mann and I completely agree with you! This song is perfect for RaYa.

Loved the moments where Priya calls him Ram.. Waiting to read more.

You're an amazing writer.

Very well written I could see Ram and Priya while I was reading.

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

This is so good . Whenever she called him Ram , she was not in her emotionally controlled self. Both the times she forgot the world around and all that mattered was him. Probably that is why we find it more interesting .

The way she calls him Ram has a different rhythm. The one that you want to hear again and again.

Please share rest of the stories too. Would love to read. I just heard the song , you are right its beautiful. Eagerly waiting for your next write up.

Thank you for the lovely comment. It’s true, her saying Ram on the show always has a different rhythm and feel to it. I do still find it weird that she goes with Mr. Kapoor. I hope one day, she graduates to Ram completely.

Glad you loved the song, this is my ultimate rainy day song and the lyrics are so apt for these two.

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6

Love your writing. Both the instances were so touching. Thank you. You’ve left me with a serene and a peaceful feeling and not to forget a beautiful song that’s continuously playing at the back of my mind ever since i heard it after finishing reading your drabble :)

Thank you for liking it so much. I have an obsession with power cuts and the simplicity of what can be during the darkness and calm. It’s even better that our lead loves the rain which added to the serene feeling I guess.

As for the song, it has my heart always and absolutely fit these two.

Originally posted by: Clouds7

Oh my goodness this is GENUINELY so damn good !

Bestie you made me so emotional T_T

Both with the OS and these Drabbles

Ukn especially the second one

Like I don't ever think We can expect such beautiful emotional simple yet deep scenes from ITV

But thankfully you wrote it so damn beautifully that I could visualize everything thank you so much for that !

And Yesssssssi can't wait to read more

Post Soonish !! Waiting

--Riv🍀

Hi Riv,

Thanks for this absolutely lovely comment. I am so glad that you liked it so much. As for this being on tv, I do think that if for any week they didn’t have the pressure of traps, they would perhaps explore the slow pace and find more deep and meaningful scenes. Hope prevails.

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

@pink..My heart skipped a beat when I read out the song! There are lyric lines

“Bavre Se Is Jahan Main Bavra Ek Saath Ho

Is Sayani Bheed Main Bas Haathon Mein Tera Haath Ho

(specifically with all the neg characters around them)

Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho

Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho

Bavre Se Pair Chahen, Baavron Tarano Ke, Bavre Se Bol Pe Thirakna.” (Specially, when their loneliness complimented and mirrored in each other and a mad crazy yearning of someone to be theirs in each other )

@redbold.. I recently thought of this song and while I was s2n ing their rain sequence..I was listening to it from a couple of days as I am writing it and it is still on my mind! And you dropped this! Woman/man… this is just … a tug at my ❤️! One of my favs too… it evokes a sense of ..hope and longing that you didn’t know existed until you hear it !

Thank you buddy 🙏 ..also do continue soon! 👍

This comment! Uff….has given me wings :)

Thank you for taking the time and leaving such a thoughtful comment. The lines you picked, absolutely my favourite and fit these two so well. The entire song does that, that sense of longing..which is what I want to see manifest on screen with these two. That slow burn.

Thank you once again for this beyond sweet comment.

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

I just have one word "WOW"!!!!!👌

Aww thank you.

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Loved the Drabble

Also Baavra mann dekh ne chala is my favourite song and so true that it perfect for them .

Loved the line “Baare se iss jahaan, bavrasa ek saath ho, iss Sayani breed mein bas haath on mein tera haath ho”❤️

Thank you. Hope you’ll like the next part as well which has a nod to the above line.

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

I just listened to Bawra Mann and I completely agree with you! This song is perfect for RaYa.

Loved the moments where Priya calls him Ram.. Waiting to read more.

You're an amazing writer.

Thank you! Hope is she always calls him Ram. Principal thodi hai that she calls him Mr Kapoor :P

Originally posted by: Armansara

Very well written I could see Ram and Priya while I was reading.

Thank you, glad you liked it.