Aftershocks Of Love- AbhiRa TS- Last Part Page 10 - Page 11

I think this one can have a prologue where you write about Akshus family visiting Abhi's as planned by Mahima...so nice moments and lotsa romance! Plsssssssssssssssss.

Love n hugs!

Bluessss🤗

I hope you already know this but you write so so beautifully!! That was such a beautiful end to the TS, i absolutely loved reading it. my favorite part was how he was scowling and shaking his head when he remembered how she acted when he was trying to check her pulse, with his heart in his throat worried-sick🤣 How he had managed to fall in love with the most frustrating girl in the world was beyond him. LMAOOOO!!! this part was the cutest. I can legit see imagine his face as he said this to himself. Well, guess who's fault it was😳 *drumrolls* ABHIMANYU BIRLAAAAAA🤗🤣and this is just the beginning 😉

the bracelet scene had my heart melt

It seems to make its way to you anyway.

Yours, Gharelu Doctor.”

this was so adorable. it's like throughout all the things that have transpired between them, from the first meeting to the heartbreak to now the blooming love, the bracelet kind of knows how significant of a part it plays and had done everything to keep these two together, giving a reason to unite them every single time. and now that akshara finally knows and accepts her feelings - out loud- she makes sure it stays where it has always rightly belonged. It was like through the bracelet she accepted and admitted to herself and him that her heart indeed belongs to him. I loveeeeddd this part so so much❤️

LMAO the way he just made an appearance in front of Dr Ayush Bajaj when he asked her out for a coffee. "She is busy"🤣Achha? Kaise busy hai, zara mein bhi to sunu😆 so possessive and i love possessive MLs😳

the cabin conversation was another treat. these few lines have my whole heart:

“Do you know what I do for a living, Akshara?

I am a heart surgeon. Do you know what surgeons pride themselves the most on? Their control.

You make me lose all my control, Akshu, How do you think that makes me feel?”

what a dialogue. I love love loveeedd this part!! and i couldn't agree more with abhimanyu. Losing control - isn't that what had been happening to him ever since that trip? It is probably be the most frustrating thing for a surgeon - losing control. and yet, i don't think he would have it any other way. this is one thing that opposes his professional traits as a surgeon and he would embrace it with all his heart. because the person making him lose that control is Akshara...his akshu!

and finally the purpose of this TS is served. Akshu indeed does come to him. she confesses and tell him what he means to her. and he seals her last words with his kiss☺️

This was such a beautiful TS Blues. We are all so very grateful that we have a writer like you on this forum who can make our days with her talent. I hope you never stop writing and continue to bless us with more of your OS, TS, SS and FFs. 🤗

Originally posted by: arch112

Lovely story, I was able

To

Image each and every piece of your narration. Keep up the good work.and keep entertaining us especially such a relief from daily drama and sadness out these two are facing. Can’t wait to see happiness when they declare their love.

Thanks a lot for the wonderful reply!

This one is waiting very patiently here!

A ward boy delivered him a box. He opened the box and smiled. It was her bracelet. The note read:

It seems to make its way to you anyway.

Yours, Gharelu Doctor.”

I was already floored by how convincingly you portrayed Abhimanyu frustration and need to have a distraction... He wanted to have a moment for himself to wrap his head around Akshara and her actions. But here I lost my heart a little. He wanted peace and as always his Akshu was there to cocoon him into her warmth.

Then he remembered the last time he put this bracelet back on her wrist. She had called him” Koi Bhi.” All the pain and hurt came flooding back. His heart had burned that day.

But she not only brings peace, she also brought storm with her. She makes his heart flutter but if there was ever a race between heartbeat, his would win. He can make the world bow down for her and only her. His heart burns for her but she is the only one who extinguishes the fire.

The bracelet was a piece of him that would go everywhere with him from now on.

It played a significant role in tying them together and now once again, it's going to spread its magic to start their love story. And is not it beautiful how this bracelet has seen all the phases of Akshara and Abhimanyu love story as AbhiRa. Even before they met each other, they have the bracelet to be tied to each other. The first heart break during tilak to their first fall during his birthday to the heart burn during koi bhi sequence to finally back to the one who ruled the owner of the bracelet, this time, to remain with him forever, with love.

Akshara was on a mission- to win her man back. Just for the man she loves. She could not believe that she could claim herself his even in her thoughts. She was no longer monitoring what she felt or thought. Her Abhi had given her freedom to her wishes.

This... I totally stan this. I was just so so glad of how beautifully you showed Akshara realised that she don't have to think 1000 times before she wanted to do something /ask. That she have the freedom to do what she want and Abhimanyu does not bind her in anything. Ki Akshara ke paas poora aasman aur ab usko bas khul kar udna hai.

He will at least not yell at her in front of the kids for showing up here while he had told her to rest. She, as usual, felt him before she could see him. She sang to pacify her love

How much she has progressed? How much love has changed her? How much did she actually come to understand Abhimanyu? She knew his primary concern would be her health and everything else, his own hurt would come next. And you have beautifully showed that growth.

After keeping his promise to eat, Abhimanyu went about his day.

He is just immune to ignore her. He just can't bring himself up to ignore her.

Abhimanyu bedeviled himself for having such an unruly heart. He followed her voice like a charmed man follows his pied piper.

Can I say thank you? Even if you say no I will. Thank for writing this. This you know pretty much sums up why Abhimanyu fell in love with Akshara. He is a surgeon and doctors take pride in controlling their emotions as they should. But here comes Akshara, who makes him loose himself in her ocean orbs. He lost himself but he have never found himself until then either. She makes him go out of his way... He gets uncomfortable so that she should be comfortable (in show we can see that his decision of marrying Aarohi). So I really really love this part.

Abhimanyu felt his temper rise. She was supposed to be resting.

Daant khana kisi ko nahi pasand par aisi daant ke liye log taras jaate hai. I don't know why but this made me emotional a little. I don't know if there was a more pure form of love. His love for her is heartwarming, something that gives you tickles in your stomach and make you smile wide as happy tears descend down your status

Today she had taken special care to dress up, just for the man she loves. He loved her in sarees, so that was her outfit. He loved looking into her eyes, so she layered them with Kohl. He loved to caress her hair off her forehead, so she opened them. Her bindi was signifying his claim on her. Her bangles chanted his name while her anklets reminded him of her existence. Love shone in his eyes, and then they stormed in anger.

What should I say about this part? This is just my favourite favourite part and I am in just awe of your writing. Here, I would have become your fan, if I was not already. But yes, I fell in love with the writing a little more... Bas thoda aur ❤️

I loved loved how your just made everything related to her about him. I don't know... But here something is so so special Amnu, that it felt like I was the person who is loved.

The pull is so strong that she could sing from the other side of the world, and he would feel the tug.

And I remembered all the times he ran when he heard her voice.... He ran towards his solace ❤️ his home

Abhimanyu’s heart soared at the thought. It was the first time she had done something just for him.

Thank you for making him happy and telling him that he is loved by the person he loves

The room roared with applause as Akshara finished the song. Abhimanyu smiled at the applause.

Once again, how beautifully you have sketched Abhimanyu... What a beauty. He is possesive par jab taaliyon ki gargarahat uske Akshu ke liye hongi toh usse zyada khush duniya mein koi aur nahi hoga

She would have given up anything to know what was going on in that stormy brain of his.

Ek baar muskura do, dil kya banda pighal jaaye 😳

And the whole jealousy part... He was such a cutie and yet the roaring tiger. His command yet the warmth he have for his Akshu will always warm my heart up. Dr Bajaj, I hoped you noticed how these two have heart eyes for each other only and you are now in AbhiRa ship, ship?

Life does not always give us what we want ... Sometimes because it gives us better and what we deserved and sometimes something worse so that we learn the value of the best and earn it and AbhiRa had earned the beautiful, beautiful confession you gave us... And loved loved how you made Akshara take the first step of intimacy and how you made her into such a strong, sensitive, flawed yet beautiful and better human.

I am in awe of you with every word I read and the way you shaped Abhimanyu and Akshara.... I just so wish, waise mohabbat karne walon ki love story main saamne se dekh paati or atleast show mein and once again, send your cv to Rajan sir ❤️❤️

And I am being rendered speechless and that's why the reply might come off a little messed up... Sorry for that but I don't know how to appreciate the beauty of jealousy and confession part... Just know I have read it so so many times ❤️❤️

Also you song selection is all love, love 🤗

Blueee 🤗

am finally here with my comment

ufff maza aagya read karke

I can totally imagine abhi doing the same that you've written

specially in the last update

your portrayal of abhi was so good

even better than the writers

now write more OS phast phast

Oh my god! I m so reserving this and coming back to comment on this update tomorrow ❤️❤️ It’s beautiful beyond words.

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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

It is updated now!

I left my comment there :') (Page 11)

They didn't let me tag you though :/

What is the new way if replying in parts?

I want a reply

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

What is the new way if replying in parts?

I want a reply

It was getting longer and I was not able to tell properly of how I felt... So work with this for a little until I complete the others.

Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. Intezaar Karo balike 😌