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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChhalkiSyaahi

Amazing update. If I would not have been in love with Abhi, this update would have surely made me fall for him. He is a walking example of an ideal partner.

Akshu is becoming naughty day by day but u like this part of her. I so love her.


How in the name of seven hells do the CV's manage to keep them away and torture us in the process??


I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.


How can you not be in love with Abhimanyu, He is just ❤️

@ Bold- Ain't that a million-dollar question!


Thanks for the reply.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Abhimanyu reached the hospital, both relieved and irritated at the same time. He was out of his mind worried about her, and she was being cheeky. How he had managed to fall in love with the most frustrating girl in the world was beyond him. As he crossed the surgery board, he saw that he did not even have any surgeries scheduled. It looked like his Aunty had cleared his schedule as he needed to be home on time. He desperately needed a distraction today as just his patients were not going to be enough.

He threw this bag onto the visitor chair and turned on his computer. He was going to catch up on all his paperwork today. As he was reviewing reports, there was a knock on his door. A ward boy delivered him a box. He opened the box and smiled. It was her bracelet. The note read:

It seems to make its way to you anyway.

Yours, Gharelu Doctor.”

Then he remembered the last time he put this bracelet back on her wrist. She had called him” Koi Bhi.” All the pain and hurt came flooding back. His heart had burned that day. He took a deep sigh and, feeling helpless at the hands of his heart, and shoved the bracelet in his pocket. It was going to be its permanent place. The bracelet was a piece of him that would go everywhere with him from now on. His phone beeped. Abhimanyu checked his smartwatch. Akshara’s message flashes- Did you eat? He ignored the message and then, cursing himself, made his way to the cafeteria.

Akshara was on a mission- to win her man back. Just for the man she loves. She could not believe that she could claim herself his even in her thoughts. She was no longer monitoring what she felt or thought. Her Abhi had given her freedom to her wishes. She would always be grateful to him for that. Akshara knew that no matter how angry he was with her, there was no way he would be able to resist her voice. So she made her way to the hospital where her love worked. She enlisted the help of the kids in the pediatric wing. He will at least not yell at her in front of the kids for showing up here while he had told her to rest. She, as usual, felt him before she could see him. She sang to pacify her love.

Piyaa, Piya mose, Piyaa aaa, Mora piya, Mora piya, Manat nahi

Mora piya mose bolat nahi, Mora piya mose bolat nahi

Dwaar jiya ke, Ohhh, Dwar jiya ke, Kholat nahi

Mora piya mose bolat nahi, Mora piya mose bolat nahi

After keeping his promise to eat, Abhimanyu went about his day. The hospital was abuzz with activity. A neurosurgeon visited the hospital to consult on one of his Uncles cases. The staff was all about how charming this young doctor was. All Abhimanyu wanted was this day to just pass. He went on his rounds, checked on his patients, and finished all his paperwork. The goal was to keep busy so that he did not lose his mind thinking how easily Akshara had disregarded him. He made his way to the ER, hoping to catch a case that would take his mind off his misery when he heard that voice that was his salvation.

Abhimanyu bedeviled himself for having such an unruly heart. He followed her voice like a charmed man follows his pied piper. She was in the pediatric ward, guitar in hand, and surrounded by kids. She noticed him the minute he entered the children’s ward. Abhimanyu felt his temper rise. She was supposed to be resting. As their eyes met, and as usual, his heartbeat increased. She was always beautiful to him, but today she took his breath away in her pink saree. Her Kohl layered eyes expectantly looking at him. They melted his heart. To keep his resolve, he looked away.

Today she had taken special care to dress up, just for the man she loves. He loved her in sarees, so that was her outfit. He loved looking into her eyes, so she layered them with Kohl. He loved to caress her hair off her forehead, so she opened them. Her bindi was signifying his claim on her. Her bangles chanted his name while her anklets reminded him of her existence. Love shone in his eyes, and then they stormed in anger.

Darpan dekhoo roop niharoo, Aur solah sringar karoon, Aaaa

Pher najariya baitha bairi, Kaise aankhiyan char karoon

Koi jatan ab..Hoo koi jatan ab kaam na aaye,Use kachu sohat nahi

Mora piya mose bolat nahi

He smiled at her words in the song. She is smart, his lady love. She knows that he cannot resist her voice. The pull is so strong that she could sing from the other side of the world, and he would feel the tug. Today she had dressed up for him. Abhimanyu’s heart soared at the thought. It was the first time she had done something just for him. She was simply magnificent. His Akshu once again has managed to overwhelm him with her love. She was surrounded by doctors, nurses, patients. His lady love was irresistible, so he could not blame them. Then his eyes caught a man from the other side of the room admiring his Akshu. Abhimanyu saw green when that man came and sat in front of Akshu. Before he could react, her following words pulled him back to her as she finished her song.

Humri ek muskan pe woh to, Haan humri ek muskan pe woh to

Apni jaan lutata tha, Jag bisra ke aathon pahriya, Mohre hi gun gata tha

Bhaa gayi kya, Ho bhagayi ka koi suatan okhe, Mora kachu bhawat nahi

Mora piya mose bolat nahi

The room roared with applause as Akshara finished the song. Abhimanyu smiled at the applause. How right was she? Abhimanyu wondered. He would move mountains to put a smile on her face. But, everyone and everything faded for him when she was in the room. This woman finally realized that she was his world. He stood at his spot, deciding not to move. He did not trust himself at the moment. He would just give in a gather her in his arms.

Akshara only had eyes for one man as the applause broke out. His face was still stoic though his eyes had softened a little. She would have given up anything to know what was going on in that stormy brain of his. Akshara put her guitar aside; got up to make her way to him. She stopped mid-step when a hand held out to her.

“Hello, Dr. Ayush Bajaj, Neurosurgeon.” The man introduced himself, “You have the most soothing voice in the world.”

“Akshara,” Akshara smiled at the compliment, “Thank you,” she replied politely. Then, her eyes met another gaze that was ablaze with anger.

“I am visiting the hospital to assist Dr. Mahima on one of her cases,” Dr. Bajaj continued. “Do you come here often to sing?”

“No,” Akshara replied, “Today is a special occasion.” Then, Akhara saw Abhimanyu make his way to them. The look on his face made her toes curl in worry.

“Well then, let’s celebrate the special occasion, and let me buy you a coffee,” Dr. Bajaj said, “This is the least I could do for you after you touched our souls with your voice.”

Before Akshara could reply, Abhimanyu did, “She is busy,” He looked straight into the eyes of Dr. Bajaj, making his intentions clear. Then, Abhimanyu took Akshara’s hand and took her out of the wing, and only stopped when they were in the safety of his office.

Abhimanyu locked the door and turned to her. He took a step towards her. However, he did not trust himself, so he shoved his hands in his pockets.“Do you know what I do for a living, Akshara?” Abhimanyu asked her, frustrated with himself, her, and the world. “I am a heart surgeon,” he replied for her. “Do you know what surgeons pride themselves the most on?” He asked.“Their control.” Abhimanyu answered.

“You make me lose all my control, Akshu,” Abhimanyu said. “How do you think that makes me feel?”

“I was trying to get away from him,” Akshara said.

Abhimanyu groaned in frustration, “It is not about Dr. Bajaj. I had made my peace with the fact that your voice would bring many men to you, like moths to a flame. Hell! I am one of those moths. I hate it when they look at you with adoring eyes, but I am also proud of you. You deserve every bit of that adoration. Meri Jaan, if it were up to me, the entire world would adore you as I do.”

Now Akshara was confused, “Why are you so angry then?”

“She is asking me why am I so angry?”Abhimanyu ran a frustrated hand through his hair. This woman would be the end of him. “I have a list for that.” Abhimanyu continued, “ For now, you were supposed to be resting today. But since when have you listened to anything I have said?”

“How could I rest knowing that you were angry with me?” Akshara dared to counter.

Abhimanyu replied, “Just like you continued with your life after you declared you did not love me.” Abhimanyu warped his arm around her waist and pushed her closer. “Just like you thought it was okay to participate in Aarohi’s lie.”

“She is my sister, Abhi. So how could I break her heart.” Akshara defended.

“So, you decided to break my heart. After all, I am just a Koi Bhi,” Abhimanyu taunted. “I fought with everyone for you, Akshu. I did not care about my family, reputation, and mother, while you did not even bother to look at me.”

“I was just trying to keep the peace between our families Abhi,” Akshara replied, hoping he would understand.

“Family, sister, brothers…do you even see me, Akshu?”Abhimanyu asked. He had now cornered her against the wall. “You made me believe that you left me to die in that fire. Do you have any idea how many deaths I have died since, thinking that my existence does not even matter to you? You so much as sneeze my heart stops.” Abhimanyu accused, more upset with himself than her.

“It was not easy for me too,” Aksharashot back, “I was in pain too, Abhimanyu. I was suffering too. But, you at least were able to express your anger. I did not even have that luxury.”

“And whose fault is that?” Abhimanyu countered, banging his other hand on the wall, “I asked, begged, pleaded, even yelled at you, but all you gave me was your silence.” Abhimanyu closed his eyes and took a deep breath to calm himself. “Do you know that your silence is deafening to my ears? A little faith Akshu that is all I needed from you. A little faith in me, and I would have made everything you want possible. There is nothing in this world I would not do for you.” Abhimanyu said, touching his forehead to hers, hoping she would understand. She was crying, and it was his heart that was bleeding. He had no more fight left in him, “I can fight the entire world for you, but I am incapable of fighting with you. I am defenseless in front of you.”

“I am so sorry, Abhi,” Askhara said as she hid her face in his neck.

“I don’t want your apology Akshu,” Abhimanyu whispered, drained from all the fighting. She was asking for solace, and how could he not give that to her? He gathered her in his arms, and she took the opportunity to wrap her arms around him, “Loving you is second nature to me. Know this, my love, no matter what happens, you are it for me. You are my first and last. There is no room for anyone else. All I ask from you is to have faith in me.” Abhimanyu reassured her.

His words gave her the courage she needed. Akshara raised her toes so that her lips reached his ears and said the words that righted Abhimanyu’s world, “I love you. I love you with everything I have, Mere Abhi,”

Abhimanyu felt a calm wash over him. That was all he needed from her, her acknowledging her love for him. He can do the shouting from the rooftops as long as she keeps whispering her confessions in his ears. “And that is all I ever wanted from you, Meri Jaan, to love me back. So you know there is no going back now, right Akshu,” Abhimanyu said, breaking the hug and backing her against the wall again.

Akshara nodded in agreement, “Love and Trust. In this lifetime and all others.” She saw the emotion change in his eyes, and her heart raced. He smiled as if he had been handed keys to heaven. The air sizzled.

One hand around her waist, he moved the hair away from her face. Abhimanyu loved doing that. “Looks like someone dressed up for me,” Abhimanyu whispered in her ear as he traced his fingers over her bangles and up her arm.

“Abhima..”Akshara began, but he put the finger on her lips to stop her. He nodded negatively. His hand went around her neck, cupping her face. “You know I wanted to punch him in the face,” Abhimanyu said simply. “Mine, You are Mine.” Abhimanyu brought her closer, and she leaned into his hand. Inches apart from each other, their breathing was also in harmony.

“Yours,” Akshara said, not breaking eye contact. She could not have been able to pull her gaze away from his intense eyes if she tried. Her skin was on fire, yet his touch was sending shivers down her spine.

“Remember what I said, Akshu. It was your turn to come to me.” She was finally in his arms. His love, his life, his world had claimed him. His own personal miracle. His burning soul has been given the balm that it needed. She may hold his heart in her hands but today was her turn to beg. It took all the control he had to not give in to what her eyes and his heart demanded.

“Kiss Me,” Akshara said, and he did. Gentle and soft first; possessed and demanding after.

This man was her universe, and she vowed to protect him with her everything.




My apologies in advance for the length and errors. This is finally over. I am not completely satisfied with this one but at this point I am too tired.


Chappals and Comments are welcome.


PS:I love lengthy replies!


Love,


Blues

Edited by Eternized_Blues - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Blues 💙

You have my whole heart and soul. I stalk the forum quite often, waiting for a story to drop, a part to come my way. I've always wanted to write something, but I have no confidence. Hence, I read. Read so that my thoughts get words. And, you're one of those people. You create a painting with your words. We see your world. It may not satisfy you at times, but it leaves a lasting impression on us :')


Your Abhi and Akshara make my world spin. I say yours, because you created these gems. You gave them a life that they deserve. A world that is theirs and yours only. And oh how I loved them. How I felt his frustration when Abhi questions the universe as to why he fell in love with this cheeky girl xD How I understood the significance of symbols, because her anklet, her bindi and her bangles all screamed his name. You make love so natural, so honest and something that we should all treasure. Sometimes, I felt jealous of the bond Abhi and Akshu have xD


The green eyed monster raised its ugly head for a quick second. And for some reason, my heart beat picked up xD idk, I like the jealous Abhi, the possessive Abhi. The one who wants Akshu to himself, and yet knows that this beauty deserves all the adoration in the world.. Meri Jaan, you attract all the moths xD hayyee ❤️❤️


I can't believe Abhi kept his world. Till the end. He wanted her to come to him. Beg for him. Want him from her whole heart. There's no going back. And Akshu did it. She won over her man. It's very simple actually, if you love, you'll find your way to each other. And these two did :')


Thank you, thank you for sharing this with us. For writing a story that'll stay with us forever. I'm gonna read and re-read (already have actually, but still).

Love and love

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Edited by sheet_leher - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Reserved for when you update xD


It is updated now!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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My heart is melting🥰🥰🥰 Absolutely love your Abhira. Favourite line has to be:

He can do the shouting from the rooftops as long as she keeps whispering her confessions in his ears.

and its absolutely fitting. All Abhimanyu needs is her admitting her love and he will take care of everything else💕 loved reading this!!


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Posted: 3 years ago
#77

I loved every bit of it ❤️❤️

Amnu!!!! I want him to call her”meri jaan” in the show too.

That kiss☺️

I had goosebumps while reading this chapter. Please come up with something new. I want to read

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Res... I am writing the review and it's kind of long ... :)

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alia.q

My heart is melting🥰🥰🥰 Absolutely love your Abhira. Favourite line has to be:

He can do the shouting from the rooftops as long as she keeps whispering her confessions in his ears.

and its absolutely fitting. All Abhimanyu needs is her admitting her love and he will take care of everything else💕 loved reading this!!


Maardalo hume e story se . Serial mein time lagega e sab hone mein .
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for tagging me. I read all the 3 parts at a go.😊. Loved all the parts. Loved how he gets restless on hearing about her illness and going to check on her. Then his over possessiveness when a certain Bajaj offers her a coffee date☺️. Loved the entire last part convo between them. I was imagining it all in my head.

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