ZDMN OS ~ Isi Umar Mein - Page 2

Originally posted by: Angel_Diya

Can you please continue this?? This was so different.. I would love to read more on this❤❤ plzzz🙏🙏

I can try 😳 I mean socha tha lamba karungi but bohut alsi hoon main 🤣

Originally posted by: Chir-Cute

Interesting take on love by each character... Ek aur chapter banta hai boss... make it a TS, please. 2nd chapter on perspective change maybe?? 😉

p.s. Aap ne bhi cheating kar di... show ne waise hi Faizi ko bagal kar diya hai aap ne bhi KoeZi ko nikaal feka... itna bada dhoka 🤣🤣

Popular demand 😳 I will give it a shot!

arre yaar lamba hota toh koezi ka character development hota, zabardasti cameo nahin karana tha 😆 fikar not, you’ll get more of them jald hi 🤗

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Thanks for the tag!!

I loved the use of rain here to add depth and the open ending

Glad you noticed that! 😃 Will keep more coming ❤️

Niiiice, different one.

As many have already told, continue it to let us explore your take on each of them.

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Niiiice, different one.

As many have already told, continue it to let us explore your take on each of them.

Will try definitely ❤️

So karan finally falls in 💕💕.

Loved it very good attempt.❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

So karan finally falls in 💕💕.

Loved it very good attempt.❤️❤️❤️

Not exactly but 😉❤️

Beautiful OS.

I liked the start and the end more because you added nature's beauty in those scenes and also that you kept it open ended.

Wow! You changed characterization of the characters yet it felt magical ❤️

Loved it! ❤️