ShiVi SS~Yeh Pyaar nahi toh kya hai....pt4-pg6*COMPLETED* - Page 6

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

OS ka waaada karke 4 episode ka choonaa lagaya tunay mujhe .. I had to wait for so many days to read the end 😭

But BOY am I gladdd .. cuz thanks to your 4 episode choona .. I got a much longer story than I had hoped for ☺️

As much as I love your long angsty stories ... I think I may love your chotu sa cute sa pyaara sa romcom type fics like this more

The wayyyy you took a simple prompt about a song that got Dobi Raavi all crazy and jealous and weaved that into a wholeass plot is 👏

I think my favourite part was when they were singing in the rain and Shiva that moment of doubt and insecurity about whether or not his feelings will be reciprocated in equal measure by Raavi, if at all🥺 That part was so well written 👏

That last part when she kisses his cheek and Shiva khud pappi de ke khud hi laal ho jaata hai ... its the cutessst thing ever .. and so quintessentially ShiVi ☺️

More of these pyaara chotu rom com fic please .. I know eik tu his hai jisse mai aise demands kar sakti hoon 🤗

Ese chunayy lagte rehne chahiye na...???Lol honestly uk how detail-oriented I'm so even if I plan an os it stretches upto to 3 parts😭😂

But I'm glad you liked it, coz the prompt you gave undoubtedly was innovative and beautiful...and I thought why not to add more enhancement to it...

Also, give me more prompts phast phast💓

This was such a cute story❤️

Pre wedding Shivi have a special fan base and I am glad you wrote about them❤️

Dobi Raavi and smartie Shiva...Loved how Raavi finally realised that she was Shiva's girl..Shiva made the right move and made her jealous!!

This was super adorable!!

ME LIKEY PRE WEDDING SHIVIIIIII

Dobi Raavi- Dobi as usual 🤣

Shiva thooooo 😉

Loved it!!! ❤️

This is just flawless. The way you capture their essence so perfectly. I'm specifically taken by your style of ending stories, be it os or ss. It's just so beautiful yet so subtle and peaceful kinda way. And special mention goes to the way Shiva had fun teasing his chipkali. Will come back again to reread this one in near future.

MY PERSONAL FAVORITE ❤💃

Watch me have a meltdown again