ShiVi SS~Yeh Pyaar nahi toh kya hai....pt4-pg6*COMPLETED* - Page 5

I told ya to guess the thing everyone wanted 😂🤷🏻‍♀️❤️

Read this one too as you recommended

Dobi Raavi is complete Dobi here🤣

But I still love her in this Dobi version at least she had her own monologues

And what about Shiva.... He is giving Pre Shiva vibes than Soft Shiva vibes and finally we get romantic Shiva😳😳

Loved the entire story Short but completely matched to their exact personalities👏

Do tag me when you post new story I'll be waiting for it

Beautiful ending👏💓

The confession was beautiful ❤️

What are u saying 😭😭 khatam?? Kyuuuu 🥺🥺🥺 i want to read more 😤😤😤

Amazing one ❤ aa always but i want to read more 😭😭😭

Already finished 😲

This was a very sweet sa short story Janu.

Write more stuff ❤️

Loved it! Haha Raavi said it the best! She's truly a dobi for not knowing it after so many hints. But it was so cute!

Do write more!

Very cute ending! ❤️

Finally Shiva made dobi Raavi realize in his own style.. followed by rain dance and confession.. I loved it! 😍

Originally posted by: Iktara22

I told ya to guess the thing everyone wanted 😂🤷🏻‍♀️❤️

AND OFCOURSE I DID THAT TOO...🤣🤣

OS ka waaada karke 4 episode ka choonaa lagaya tunay mujhe .. I had to wait for so many days to read the end 😭

But BOY am I gladdd .. cuz thanks to your 4 episode choona .. I got a much longer story than I had hoped for ☺️

As much as I love your long angsty stories ... I think I may love your chotu sa cute sa pyaara sa romcom type fics like this more

The wayyyy you took a simple prompt about a song that got Dobi Raavi all crazy and jealous and weaved that into a wholeass plot is 👏

I think my favourite part was when they were singing in the rain and Shiva that moment of doubt and insecurity about whether or not his feelings will be reciprocated in equal measure by Raavi, if at all🥺 That part was so well written 👏

That last part when she kisses his cheek and Shiva khud pappi de ke khud hi laal ho jaata hai ... its the cutessst thing ever .. and so quintessentially ShiVi ☺️

More of these pyaara chotu rom com fic please .. I know eik tu his hai jisse mai aise demands kar sakti hoon 🤗