ShiVi SS~Yeh Pyaar nahi toh kya hai....pt4-pg6*COMPLETED* - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Both the parts were great.

Really like how Shiva was pulling raavi's leg.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

AHHA...RAAVI IS SO DOBI...*NOT THAT SO*😂

LOVINGGG IT...❤️


AND YOU NOW WHT I WNT RIGHTTTT.....


HINT~

Yeh kaali ghani raatein

Kuch raaz h ism chupe ..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

1st of all sawan barse is one the best rain romantic song . ..I love it


story is beautiful and m loving it so so much 💖 💗

I thought 3rd page pe 3rd update hoga😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

It's so good jaanu 😍😍

Loved it ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Part-3



"Arre Shiva ruk!!!", Raavi stood up with a shoot but on not getting any reply with laid silence, she got scared, and as if whispering she repeated, "Shiva...tu chala gaya kya...shi.." and thud, she crashed in stiff hands, tough body.. ofcourse it was Shiva but as they fell down..they were so close to each other that they were able to feel the warmth in each other's breathe; he had protectively put one of his hand on her waist, breaking the silence and making her stand, Shiva said, "Tu andhi hai kya..jab dekho girti padti rehti hai...tere se achhe to sharabi hote hai...", irritated on this she replied, "Andhere mein na sab andhe hojate hai sab teri tarah ullu nahi hote aur vese bhi mai to sirf apne Dev ke pyaar mein andhi hona chahti hu"... Shiva got furious he pulled her towards himself and said, "Pyaar karti hu usse????...pakkaa?", To which she had no reply and kept gazing into his eyes even in utter darkness, as she got goosebumps and was not able to answer anything she remained silent.He pushed her away and that seemed so rude,he started walking but as he felt pair of hands which wrapped up on his arms and she went and glued herself, Shiva smiled to himself as he started walking...he started whistling to the tune and as he saw a smile crept over her face, he started singing again, though the same song, just because he wanted to see what she reacts this time...

"Ek hasina idhar dekho

Kaisee bechain hai

Raste par lage kaise

Usake do nain hai

Hoo ek hasina idhar dekho

Kaisee bechain hai

Raste par lage kaise

Usake do nain hai

Sach puchhiye toh mere yar,

Dono key dil beikhtiyar

Beikhtiyar hain pahalee bar,

Pahalee bahar mein..."


And he stopped, as he saw her with slanting eyes, he saw her gazing like he watched her gazing him in utter amazement, he literally skipped a heart beat, she was watching him so peacefully, so purely...how can one not fall in love with this girl he thought to himself, ofcourse he had fell for her but it was all of sudden, wasn't it?Or maybe it wasn't sudden, only the realisation was...as Gaumbi said, they had been more connected to each other since they were kids and even as enemies never did they fail to protect each other, and how pure she was, and no doubt he had fell for sereneness inside her...As she noticed him go silent all of sudden, she tried to sing bare lyrics which she had remembered while listening in the evening, she as if continuing started,


"Sawan barse tarse

Dil kyon naa nikale ghar se dil

Barkha me bhee dil pyasa hai,

Yeh pyar nahee toh kya hai?"


And he came out of his chain of thoughts as he listened to her sweet voice,which he was finding annoying since all these years, and as she sang the last line, 'yeh pyaar nahi toh kya hai?' he back-questioned her, "yeh kya hai Raavi?", this made her skip a beat and blush went over her face, she questioned herself internally, exactly in his words,"yeh kya hai, Raavi?" to which her head added, "tu toh dev se pyaar karti thi na fir Shiva ke sath tujhe itna achha kabse lagne laga?"..."Raavi...chod", ave came back to reality as she heard him say that, she said, "Nahi Shiva mai tujhe kabhi nahi chodungi...tere bina toh zindagi hi adhuri hojayegi..."Shiva watched him in amazement and startled, he was asking her to leave his hand so that he can check the fuse but he smiled to an unexpected answer...did she...did she actually said that she can never leave him...and her life was incomplete without him..it was such a big thing to confess and she said that with so much ease, he fumbled as he said, "Mai...mai haath chodne ko bol raha tha...tu kya samjhi?", to which she also said stammering, "haan...haan...voh..mai...voh..kuch nai sorry...",as he raised himself on toes and checked the fuse which was okay so there was electricity cut out, so he said,"fuse toh thik hai shayad lights hi chali gai hai...chal fir candles jala ke khaane bethte hai mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai", to which she nodded as they went back there and he kept whistling the tunes.


They shifted to aangan as it was a full moon day so moon was beaming up its white light, enhancing the beauty of sky...he lit the candles and they sat to eat, as they finished eating talking about random stuff and as if she was waiting for a perfect opportunity to ssk this question, slowly asked, "Ek baat puchu...bura toh nahi maanega?"...to which he said,"Kyu na bolunga to nahi puchegi?", "nahi esa nahi hai puch toh lungi par fir bhi puch rahi hu.."; "Haan puch.."...to which she replied, "Voh... voh kesi dikhti hai... khubsurat dikhti hai kya...mujhse bhi pyaari dikhti hai kya?", And now as she finally questioned this, she felt somewhat relieved and sighed a little.But now he didn't know how he was going to answer this because explaining how she looked that too her and in a way that she doesnt directly know this...it was such a difficult task to do, he sighed and started, "Voh na bilkul...bilkul bachhon si masoom hai,itni Chanchal hai ke tujhe bhi piche chod de, uski aankhein badi badi aur usme gehriyan samandar si,chini ki bori jitni uski baatein mithi hoti hai,samose jesi mast naak,gulab jese hoth,uska dil jharne ke paani jitna saaf aur....aur dhara bhabhi ki 2nd copy...bas...yeh hai meri chip....mera matlab tha ki...jo mere chips khaati hai...aur bohot pyaari hai voh", By then her eyes had become a faucet full of years as if one more word he would say about that chudail and it would start like anything...she noticed that all the qualities were present in her but it was someone else, probably someone who had this qualities more,that too in enhanced versions.She immediately got up and turned but wasn't able to go because he had already held her hand and pulled her closer, and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, and gently caressed her cheek and said, "Aur haan uske baal...na ekdum mulayam hai aur gaal toh rasgulle jese soft,laddoo jesa pyara pyara chehra hai uska...ab bata aur kuch jaanna hai...?", She rudely pushed away his hand which had held her hand and said "nahi" and walked away.As the lights came, she ran away in order to hide her tears and slept in Dhara's room, weeping her self to sleep.He smiled and slept with a strange contentment peacefully on the cot.



I hope you guys like it!!!!


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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Loved it ❤️ update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

This one is so damn cute 😍😍🥺🥺❤❤

Loved it alot

Waiting for next one

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Tell me this doesn't end here? Tell me there are more parts to this!


I love how he described his Raavi 😭❤️ so masoom my babies are ufff❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Loved it❤❤

This was so cute😍😍

Cont soon❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

My babies are so cute!! Lovely update!

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