ShiVi TS: Humraah - [Part 3 - Pg 9|12/01/22|Complete] - Page 2

mumaaaaaa i want this on the show 😭😭

but nahi milega and hence gracias for writing this

i cant wait for the next part

Raavi is so cute

Loved it

Shiva showing nakhre before coming to the room😆

Ending has my heart... together forever

Can’t wait for part two... will Raavi get her Kamaal?

Wow

You are such a gifted writer ❤️

All the dialogues and scenes were so close to how the audience imagine them, yet they were so different…makers can learn from you 😊

The story was soothing (couldn’t find a better word, your story brought a smile on my face)🤗

💕🥰Amazingly beautiful….just love ❤️ these two

Oh Wow blissyyyy! How beautiful was this! I was so upset about not being a Shiva moving back in scene and I’m so so so Happy the way you showed it! My #ShiVi heart feels better after reading this! Waiting for update!

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I'M. IN. LOVE.

GIVE. ME. NEXT. PART. NOW. PLS.

Coming soon! Maybe tomorrow!❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Blissyyy ❤️❤️❤️

This was so so good. Can the show exactly copy this scene? 😭😭

I loved how it had the shivi nok jhok element, the softy shiva who cames out when raavi is even slightly hurt and finally the haq with which raavi takes him back to the room.

The last scene was Beautiful! The way she keeps her eyes open scared that he will go away once she shuts it and finally shiva assuring her and himself that he will never let her go. ❣️

And this is a TS , waitingg for next 😍

Aww thanks Pixie 🤗❤️

I don't mind if the show copies this exact same thing, I won't even sue them! Muft mein de rahi hoon!😆

They have yet to show where Shiva sleeps and if he has moved back! I really hope once they return from jail, we get to see him back in their room as well!

Originally posted by: Barkhaa_JB

Shyna yaar .. kitna pyaara likha hai 🤧❤

The wayyy this gave me the warm and fuzzies 😭😭

I wish they'd cuddled though .. sonay se pehlay 😒

Eagerly waiting for the last part ☺️

Aww thank you Barkhaa!❤️

I'm super happy you enjoyed this one 🥺

I know cuddle nahi kiya 😭 but shayad next waale part mein kuch aur mil jaye 😉

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Reswa!!!!!!

Edit:

Shyna🤗! You know I love it when you get carried away, don't you😆? And so it should come as no surprise that I loved it!!!!

Her melting at his apology but not wanting to give in was so Raavi! Mostly it's just for the enjoyment she derives from annoying him, but there's also that very subtle fear you've woven through things that's actually very deep seated.

Her amusement at his way with words, her finding him cute. I can't wait for Shiva to realise all of this! I'm pretty sure no one else has truly seen and acknowledged these parts of him that make him so uniquely him!

So, she makes a plan to annoy him, and then she wants him right beside her? Reminded me too much of pre wedding Shivi for a moment! Loved the haq with which she was questioning him, then pulled him into the room. And her melting at his concern? I'd actually say it's one of the reasons her feelings for him turned romantic on any scale.

Yes, she truly deserves so much better, it feels so good that she's realised this! And this changed Shiva is just the beginning of that!

Both of them missing sleeping beside each other? Kaash aise scenes tab milti jab MU chal raha tha! But, I hope we get to see something of this sort when Shiva eventually moves back to their room on the show. Also, you've captured Raavi's innocence so beautifully with those last drowsy sentences! This is the childish Raavi of old, her abandonment issues, and all she needed was one word of assurance from him to stay peaceful...

Hope you're happy with this essay!!! 😆

Sathiii! First of all, itna lamba comment dekh kar mera dil ekdam khush hogaya!😆

As for Raavi's fear, I thought of weaving that in at the very last moment because the show never explores Raavi's fears and I know they never will 😭 Have to make-do with our own imagination!

Raavi trying to annoy him is what sparked the idea of this TS hehe and you're right, it gave me pre-wedding shivi vibes issliye I wanted to write this! I really wish they show some of my khayali pulao and desires in the show *sigh*

Both of them realizing they deserve better and that they can be selfish was something I wanted really badly, again. While I love their selflessness in the show, it breaks my heart that no one else cares about them the same way they do. Hope they have this realization someday and chase their own happiness.

Shiva moving back to their room is one of the most-desired moments! I really hope the makers do not suffer from amnesia and actually show the process through some conversation and not just show him lounging in the room one night 🤪

Thank you for this wonderful comment! You know I love reading them and the way you perceive my work ❤️ Sometimes you pick out details that I might not have even consciously written in there!😆

Great start Shyna! ❤️ I’m glad you decided to flesh this out instead of writing a single paragraph (why would you even think of doing that )

I loved how Raavi finally called Shiva back to their room after their typical banter. Raavi as usual giving Dobi excuses to Shiva and he catching her 😆

My fav was the parallel here! Raavi didn’t want “ek ladki and ek ladki” to be alone in the room earlier, and now she doesn’t want “ek ladki” (herself) to be in the room alone (mujhe yeh show mein dekhna hai Chaubey 🤡)

Shiva’s concern for Raavi is always beautiful.. and I loved the end where he decided to give his all for the marriage ❤️

Continue soon!!