Gaura and shivi: Ts : broken hearts part 4 (completed) updated : pg 8 - Page 3

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Part 3 :

Ravi broke the hug.. and made him sit on floor ...

Shiva: ravi tu yeh kia kar...

She make him silent with her fingure touches his lips..

Ravi : shhhhh...

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

aj tujhe ek kahani sunati hun shiva... sunay ga... ?

Then she stared his expression and he nodes...

Humari kami tumko mehsoos hogi

Bheega dengi jab baarishe

Main bhar karke laya hoon

Ankhon mein apni

Adhoori si kuch khwahishe

Then sits next to him n then made him lies on her lap... and cares his hair..

Ravi : tujhe pata hai shiva bachapan s le k hamre shadi honay tk dev s piyar kun karti the mn ?

Shiva : ravi plz ...

Ravi : nahi shiva mn kehna chati hn ... Batana chahti hn tujhe ..

She interwined their hands in assurance.. and shiva ask her with wide fixed eyes on her face...

Rooh se chaahne wale aashiq

Baatein jismo ki karte nahi

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Shiva : kun ?

Ravi : teri waja s ..

Shiva with confused tone...

Shiva : meri waja s..?

Ravi : han... Jb tu mujhe bar bar bura bhala kehta tha to dev tere samnay a jata tha .. mujhe protect karnay... R mn pagal us protection ko pyar smjh bethi...

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Shiva : ravi dekh tu.. ek bar phr soch le...

Ravi : ab sochnay smjhnay k kabil kuch raha kab hai shiva... Phr mere dimagh p ek bhoot sawar tha... tijh s apni izar karwanay ka... Tere dil mn apnay liye piyar jaganat ka... lakin tb mn nahi janti the k hm ek dor k 2 eleda eleda siron mn khare moti ki traha hn ... Jin ko akhir mn ek sath a k takrana hota hai... dhiyan s soch na shiva hamra bachpan ... Kesay lartay jhagartay thay lakin miltay hamesha sath thay ...

Shiva lost in their childhood memories smiles little

Shiva : han hamesha ....

Ravi : ase lartay jhagartay kb hm bare ho gaye pata hi nahi chala ... dev to hamre rishtay ki ek serhi the ... Asal mazil to hm dono ki the na shiva hamesha s ... Jb dhara di n tera purposal samnay rakha na mere ... To mn n janta hai han kun boli the...

Shiva : kun ?

Ravi : kun k mn janti the k tere is chatan pandiya wale avtar k peechay ek bhola bhala insan chupa hai... sirf r sirf is liye ki the mn n shadi tujh s... R rahi bat mere high class doston ki ... To shiva mijje shadi un mn s kisi s karni hoti to mn tere perpisal ko hi mana kar deti... Kun k mn janti the un k man mn kiya chalta hai ... Wo tere sanskar teri achai k samnay buht chotay thay shiva islye ki mn n tujh s shadi ... Dhara di tujhe heera bulati the ... R mn us heeray ki chamak dekhna chati the....

Tears start escaped from her eyes....

Ravi : phir tu n divorce papers bhej diye .. asa laga mujhe kuch mere ander kuch asa toota hai jo ab kabhi nahi jur skta ... mn jahan dekhti the sirf tu hi tu nazar ata tha... Mujhe asa laga jesay meri rangon s bhari duniya k rang hi ur gaye hn ... Michi s bhari yadain besuad ho gai hn... Kehna chati the tujhe batana chati the k shiva... Naho reh paon ge in besuad yadon k sath mn ... Achi chahye buri mujhe bs tere sath yadain banani hn apni... Tujhe apna banana hai r mujhe tera hona hai... Chahye lar jhagar ghusa utar mujh p lakin tu bs mere sath reh hamesha hamesha k liye... Lakin use pahle tu n mujhe divorce papers bhej diye shiva....

Ans she start crying uncontrollablely...

Shiva sits beside her and hides her on his embrace..

Tears also start escaping from his eyes... Ravi hides her face in his cheast...

Ravi : kuch smjh nahi aya kia karon kia na karon ... Kahan jaon ... Kise bolon... buht dard tha mere ander... apna ander ka dard kise ja k dekhaon...

Shiva tighen his grip arround her and place a kiss on her head .... he can felt her pain in her words... And she hugs him with equally force... And sobs for sometime in his arms...

On the same time

Here gombie come to his room and sad beside dhara holds her hand

Gombie : dhara meri bat sun ... mn manta hun Yeh sb jo hua hai wesa nahi hona chahiye tha lakin...

Dhara dekh, mujhse naa ye berukhi bardaarsh nahi ho rahi hai, tujhe mujhse ladna hai, jhagdna hai, maarna hai, toh maar le, lekin please abb yeh chuppi tod de"

Dhara took her hand away ...

Here shiva break the hug and cups her face in to his palms... And about to say ... they both heard the noice and rush toward downstairs...

Dhara slap gombie hardly...

Dhara : how dare you gombie.... tmhare himat kesay hue mere bachay ka nam lenay ki....

Gombies tries to move forward but dhara stops him...

Gombie : dhara lakin wo bacha mera bhi...

Dhara holds him from Collar gombie unable to match her eyes...

Dhara : lakin kia gombie .. kehna kia chahtay ho tm han ... tm n mujh s itni bari bat chupai hai gombie... itni bari bat... ab tmhn mera bacha yad a raha hai... Han...

And she pushes him away

Gombie was helpless, broken shiva can relate his pain ...

Dhara falls on swing both shiva n ravi rushed toward her and sits beside her...

Dhara : khali hath reh gai mn gombie khali hath...

Ravi notice some injury in dhara hand she run to got firstaid...

Here shiva sits in her feet lies his head in her lap and puts her hand on his head ...

Dhara moves little...

Here ravi comes back bt stop to notice the shiva gester and dhara movement...

Shiva : ap ko pata hai bhabhi kabhi kabhi na hm jo smjh rahe hotay hn na wesa nahi hota... hmn lagta hai shyad hm dusray ki achai k liye ek kadam utha rahe hotay hn lakin ... Wo kadam dusray ko andheray ki traf dhakel raha hota hai... Mn manta hun bhabhi gombie s ghalti hui hai buht bari ghalti shayad wo is ghalti ki kabhi bhar pai hi na kar painyen... Lakin bhabhi yak tarfa faisla karna bhi to ghalat hai na... Yahi bat ap n mujhe ravi r mere rishtay totnay k time smjhai the na bhabhi... han mn manta hun bhabhi ap maa hn ap ka dard kahin zyada hai lakin gombie bhi to bap hn ap jitna na sahi magar dard to wahn bhi hai na.... Har koi hamesha yahi bolta hai mard ko dard nahi hota ... Lakin bhabhi yeh bat ghalat hai orat jitna na sahi lakin dard to dard hota hai... Admion ko bhi hota hai...

And tears started from his eyes everyone including ravi was listening with teary eyes .. and she can clearly relate to shiva condition during divorce and now gombie condition... Ravi felt their pain ...

Fb :

Ravi got fb of each n every movement when they both interreact after divorce papers...

Shiva also have pain in his eyes...

The way he talk to her

the way he got jalouse from his college boys...

The way he pulls her closer on balcony...

The way he come forward to hold her when she fall..

Shiva : uper s jitna marzi chahe mana kar lain dekhawa kar lain lakin ander s wo bhi toot rahe hotay hn ... Bikhar rahe hotay hn .. un ko bhi sahare ki zarorat hoti hai na bhabhi ... Wo bhi us sahare ki jise wo .. wo shara chatay hn ... Samnay s 10 log a jain un ka sahara bn ki lakin jo jaga un ki zindgi mn kisi apnay ki kisi buht hi qareebi ki hoti hai wo kisi ki ho hi nahi skti na bhabhi... Plz bhabhi mn yeh nahi kehta k ap gombie ko maff kar do... mat karo maff .. lakin un ki bat sunay ka ek chance to do.. un ko r khud ko kuch time to do na bhabhi... ap janti ho bhabhi shiva hamesha ap k sath khara tha ... Khara hai r khara rahe ga koi r ho ya na ho.... Mujhe hamesha ap ki khushi apnay har dard har rishtay s zyada aziz hai ... Lakin bhabhi yehn gombie bhi ghalat nahi hn .. ap dono ko ek dusray ki zarorat hai... Ek dusray s bat karnay ki zarorat hai... Ase bina bat kiye rishtay ko tornay ki ghalti plz ap mat karo bhabhi plz ..

and shiva burried his head in her lap and sobs

ravi got more fbs :

When shiva said he want divorce from her

Shiva comes tuning behind her from fashion show...

Shiva said mukti chahiye ...

When he start enjoying her jolousy from disha...

When he asked dikat kia hai teri ...

When she talk about 2nd marrige n he pushes her on bed angerly.. and drop pattels on her... Everytime he got jalouse on her menttion of any other guys..

Now ravi comes to know shiva was equally hurt during their divorce time bt no body think about him .. everyone blamed him .. bt no one took care of him ... no body asked about him .. about his pain

Ravi self talk while wiping her tears:

Yeh bhootnath n to aj mujhe bhi rula dia...

And smiles ..

Here dhara start crying uncontrollablely and shiva sign gombie to Handle her now and gombie hugs dhara n dhara after sometime hugs him back and cries...and eyeone claps ..

Ravi stared shiva with widen eyes and shiva broke their eye contact and felt uncofortable...

And ravi smiles...

Guys thats it for this part this part was request of virangna ... Actually i m confused k yeh part yahi complete kar doon ya phr ravi ki apologize bhi add karon t next part likhon gove me some suggestions regarding to this ..

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Originally posted by: Kfof

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Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great update

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Loved it 😍

The way Shiva made Dhara understand about Gombie's pain ❤️

You should turn it into a 4s will love to see how Raavi will apologise after knowing how Shiva felt all this while.

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