A message to makers - Page 3

I Loved your post.

I was also thinking on a similar line that how much can father affect a Surgeons calm thinking that he rushes the girl home in full confidence for a love declaration. Coz that can not be called a confession.

If I was in place of Akshara even if I had to say yes, I would have said no in front of the family and told the fellow to first let's have a conversation outside of Methidana and hibiscus.

They do not have much in common- in habits.

But their foundation and how they perceive and act has a similar line.

Although she is a girl who keeps positive and He is a empath yet a brooding person.

Empaths are telepathic yet they take wrong decisions when it comes to their own happiness vs others.

I have seen and read about it before. But you are right to make a strong storyline they need the main leads to talk or interact even if the creative team wants to keep them separate through misunderstanding.

And whats this nonsense of Arohi, Ruby stalker tracks.

When Abhi loves Akshara and already rejected by her.

Its not right.... thoda bhi jo realisitc touch tha woh bhi chala jayega.

Please read this makers! The fact your not even critising their work but merely advising them ❤️ I agree with the Ruby point, they shouldn't introduce such characters so early on. It's like adding icing to a raw cake. Maybe we may become used to Ruby or find her funny idk but it's too soon. We already have Arohi, do not need another headache. I've only accepted her so long as it awakens Akshara's jealousy. Abhira have had conversations but not strong ones. Your right, we need a whole episode with just the two of them talking. Even if it's them shouting and getting their frustrations out, chalega with a tight hug at the end. Abhi is such a caring and understanding person evidenced by how concerned he was during her panic attack. We need that Abhi back because frankly speaking, Akshara needs him. I guess they're avoiding their convos simply because they don't want Abhira to sort it out just yet. But as you said, they are only humans and surely they can be friends at least. Friends who badly want to be lovers but cannot due to other factors. They do have a stellar cast in Abhira, utilise them well. Not just in dreams.

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Le me be like ITV heroines - Bhagwan aapko meri aastha ka vaastha... Unhe kahiye ki mere messages dekhe kyunki ye sirf meri nahi laakhon dilon ki chuppi khwaish hai...

Aree ... Chalo koi na... We both will balance it out then

Yes.... Makers mujhe kabhi laga nhi tha ki main apna naam bhi lungi but whatever, we want opportunity. Hire us as a team and I promise you are gonna love the storyline. And of course, audience will love it too.

P.S. ab aap ye karo na karo toh chalo khayali pulao pakate hai... What would you do if you were the writer of the show?

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.

I Loved your post.

I was also thinking on a similar line that how much can father affect a Surgeons calm thinking that he rushes the girl home in full confidence for a love declaration. Coz that can not be called a confession.

It was a challenge and why Abhimanyu took it as one is all in the past story of Birlas.

If I was in place of Akshara even if I had to say yes, I would have said no in front of the family and told the fellow to first let's have a conversation outside of Methidana and hibiscus.

Main bike par hi nhi baithti... Nd the fact is she knew what's coming ... So she would have taken the stand when came to pick her up .. then and there. So even though I understand Akshara, that was uncalled for.

They do not have much in common- in habits.

But their foundation and how they perceive and act has a similar line.

In life, neither opposite attracts works nor like dissolves like .. we will always need balance which AbhiRa have.

Although she is a girl who keeps positive and He is a empath yet a brooding person.

Empaths are telepathic yet they take wrong decisions when it comes to their own happiness vs others.

I get it they don't need words .... But without communication they will not work. And makers are forgetting that we are watching a love story of human... So they have to show them talking because none of them is really telepathic. And also, we as humans can only be 50% right of what other person is thinking, feeling but there's also chances of our guesses or intuition to be wrong and that too equally i.e. another 50%.

I have seen and read about it before. But you are right to make a strong storyline they need the main leads to talk or interact even if the creative team wants to keep them separate through misunderstanding.

At the moment, the makers have to show them taking a step back and understanding to each other plight as they share it. It can be two friends who love each other in a path to be 'in love' with each other and for that, they have to be each other anything and everything but mainly, they have to be each other home. Where they want to go after a hard day. But all we are getting is dream sequences.

And whats this nonsense of Arohi, Ruby stalker tracks.

I wish I knew what it is. The only way I see Ruby entry is to make Akshara realise her feelings like she does not know and already accepted to each other. And I don't know why ITV take the route of jealousy for the declaration of love.... Like atleast the girls I know, agar aisa kuch hua toh all we will do is give taana and if the boy even for a once try to make us more jealous then tata bye bye. If it was a fun jealousy track where the leads just poke fun at each other by taking these names, it could be pass off. But we can pass it off too but atleast gives us conversation which shows us why are they able to overcome this... Kyunki sapne dekh kar hi strong bante toh duniya kitni hi achi hoti.

When Abhi loves Akshara and already rejected by her.

Aarohi is like all I heard is, blah, blah, blah blah ..

Its not right.... thoda bhi jo realisitc touch tha woh bhi chala jayega.

Zyada realistic touch toh bacha bhi nhi hai.

Makers really have to up their game if they want be known as good story tellers.

Originally posted by: Zenab78

I will lock them in a room for hours. They need to talk...it won't be working out for long without communication.

Je baat ... Maine inke communication par ek aadha OS likha hua hai par ab poora wo 20th ke baad hoga.... Tb tk bhagwan se yhi prathna hai ki makers ko akal dein ki ye baat chit dikhaye AbhiRa ke beech

Originally posted by: Silveraliax

Please read this makers! The fact your not even critising their work but merely advising them ❤️

I am actually happy to read this.... Because when I was writing I was just hoping that it did not come out as a rant post and u know, negative post ... So this made me happy 😊

I agree with the Ruby point, they shouldn't introduce such characters so early on. It's like adding icing to a raw cake. Maybe we may become used to Ruby or find her funny idk but it's too soon. We already have Arohi, do not need another headache. I've only accepted her so long as it awakens Akshara's jealousy.

Di, don't you think so, it's kind of always shows how Akshara needs a push to take steps towards Abhi and she will never do it on her own? Instead of Ruby track, would not it be beautiful if they had this confession much later with Abhimanyu going away for a medical trip for some months and she did not be left alone and fear of long distance separating them grips her heart and she confesses her heart out?

Abhira have had conversations but not strong ones. Your right, we need a whole episode with just the two of them talking. Even if it's them shouting and getting their frustrations out, chalega with a tight hug at the end.

That would be so beautiful... But makers to us: 🤡

Abhi is such a caring and understanding person evidenced by how concerned he was during her panic attack. We need that Abhi back because frankly speaking, Akshara needs him.

Makers have so much potential with these two but I don't even know what they are doing. They could beautifully show them growing as individuals and then growing as couple. Also, they could show how on them waits for the other to come up and then grow each other. Matlab zaruri nhi hai har individual ki growth ek jaisi ho. Toh ye dikha skte hai ki kaise unn dono mein se kabhi Abhi and kabhi Akshu dusre ka wait karte khud Tak pahuchne ke liye aur phir saath mein as AbhiRa aage badhte hai.

I guess they're avoiding their convos simply because they don't want Abhira to sort it out just yet.

Haan ... Makers nd their love for misunderstanding and separation.

But as you said, they are only humans and surely they can be friends at least. Friends who badly want to be lovers but cannot due to other factors. They do have a stellar cast in Abhira, utilise them well. Not just in dreams.

Ab meri baat mujhe sapne suhane ladakpan ke naye episode bante huye dikhayi de rhe hai.

Makers once again, AbhiRa ke paas jitna potential hai na and not only them, them as individuals, Birla and Goenka family ... Everyone have that potential and story... Write and execute them better.

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Makers once again, AbhiRa ke paas jitna potential hai na and not only them, them as individuals, Birla and Goenka family ... Everyone have that potential and story... Write and execute them better.

The thing is, sometimes I don't blame the makers. Simply because the trp audience is their bread and butter and the trp audience does not like subtle dramas unless its filled with lots of mirch masala. I've seen how dramas with the most idiotic storylines have got high trps as opposed to dramas with simplistic plots. Anupama is an exception, it is not that bad.

Thats why I always say I'm surprised with yrkkh getting good trps touch wood.

Even with the current plot, I am not too confident it will fetch good trps because it's been somewhat simplistic. I hope I'm wrong and if I am wrong then credit must be given to Abhira only.

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Le me be like ITV heroines - Bhagwan aapko meri aastha ka vaastha... Unhe kahiye ki mere messages dekhe kyunki ye sirf meri nahi laakhon dilon ki chuppi khwaish hai...

Pagal Parvati is that you? 😆

Originally posted by: Silveraliax

The thing is, sometimes I don't blame the makers. Simply because the trp audience is their bread and butter and the trp audience does not like subtle dramas unless its filled with lots of mirch masala. I've seen how dramas with the most idiotic storylines have got high trps as opposed to dramas with simplistic plots. Anupama is an exception, it is not that bad.

Thats why I always say I'm surprised with yrkkh getting good trps touch wood.

Even with the current plot, I am not too confident it will fetch good trps because it's been somewhat simplistic. I hope I'm wrong and if I am wrong then credit must be given to Abhira only.

I agree but if they won't show good and positive storyline how are we going to know whether it fetches TRP or not? And did not YRKKH maintained the TRPs? Especially with first generation. All of them had real life problems. Had positivity. Diya aur Baati Hum? The husband supported his wife dreams and not only supported, pushed her towards fulfilling it? The patriarchal bhabo and I think Meena was also hurdles but they were real too.

And sorry but Anupama is not really a positive show. All of it will show is how a woman who was abused for years continue to take it in the name of parivaar, izzat, apne, pyaar and when someone will ask her or the abusers the right questions she will say, badon se aise baat nahi karte with 2 page ka bhashan. The only progression in that show is Anupama divorcing Vanraj (still whitewashes his EMA as per her convenience) and Anuj (who being a top business man still takes shit from Shahs because the lady he loves, loves that family. Seriously, he was quiet when they character assignated him too). It's on the top of the TRP charts because a lot of middle age women relate to the abuse... Be it in form of in laws, children or husband aur mohalle ki auntiyon ke taane toh hai hi.

The current plot had potential... A lot of it and it's a good message too but it can only make sense if they build the storyline of AbhiRa better. Right now, the trust Akshara will show is on what she has seen but what if Ruby conter argument was this is not the first time and Akshara was not there always? And like you said, if this fetch TRP, its due to AbhiRa and also for the message but definitely not for the storyline.

I dont think next week trp would be so good (I am vary of this week TRP too) because Pandya Store has introduced an emotional track which may resonate with every woman out there who has lost the child or have to terminate the pregnancy due to danger it possesses to the mother life... Given the fact, the couple had this moment of happiness after 10 years of their marriage.

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

I agree but if they won't show good and positive storyline how are we going to know whether it fetches TRP or not? And did not YRKKH maintained the TRPs? Especially with first generation. All of them had real life problems. Had positivity. Diya aur Baati Hum? The husband supported his wife dreams and not only supported, pushed her towards fulfilling it? The patriarchal bhabo and I think Meena was also hurdles but they were real too.

And sorry but Anupama is not really a positive show. All of it will show is how a woman who was abused for years continue to take it in the name of parivaar, izzat, apne, pyaar and when someone will ask her or the abusers the right questions she will say, badon se aise baat nahi karte with 2 page ka bhashan. The only progression in that show is Anupama divorcing Vanraj (still whitewashes his EMA as per her convenience) and Anuj (who being a top business man still takes shit from Shahs because the lady he loves, loves that family. Seriously, he was quiet when they character assignated him too). It's on the top of the TRP charts because a lot of middle age women relate to the abuse... Be it in form of in laws, children or husband aur mohalle ki auntiyon ke taane toh hai hi.

The current plot had potential... A lot of it and it's a good message too but it can only make sense if they build the storyline of AbhiRa better. Right now, the trust Akshara will show is on what she has seen but what if Ruby conter argument was this is not the first time and Akshara was not there always? And like you said, if this fetch TRP, its due to AbhiRa and also for the message but definitely not for the storyline.

I dont think next week trp would be so good (I am vary of this week TRP too) because Pandya Store has introduced an emotional track which may resonate with every woman out there who has lost the child or have to terminate the pregnancy due to danger it possesses to the mother life... Given the fact, the couple had this moment of happiness after 10 years of their marriage.

Look, sometimes when I'm in the shower I wonder how the hell did yrkkh first generation manage to get trps because the storylines were so simple. But then again, we had shows like Saathiya with absolutely rubbish plots topping too. Diya aur Baati was unique in a way. It did have villains but the focus of the show was put on very prominent aspects of life. They also did not jump to fulfilling Sandhyas dream for the first season, it was still a drama on kitchen politics but the audience could root for the female lead in trying to adjust to being a housewife. Anupama is similar but in this show, she is trying to come out of being a housewife. I dont watch anupama but if thats true then it's a shame, I hate female leads telling their kids to shut up just because hes the father. Even now, my mum says Abhi is wrong to insult his father like that and I always pat my head 🤦🏽‍♀️

Yeah I'm wear of this week and next week and I dont blame the actors. it's the writing. I fill like the birthday and this Ruby is such a filler. They need to focus on good plots. The tilak fiasco got people watching because we wanted to see what happens next, the centre of stage were Abhira. The writers really need to decide what they want to do. Its not fair on the fans and the actors who have done their part well. I hope the trps are good for sake of the actors but let's see.