AbhiRa OS: Summer Chills and Winter Rains - Page 3

Ok im serious right now, after reading the Ruby news i just came here to read this OS to clear my mind. Im so f**king pissed right now you have no idea. Ab tu hi meea sahara hai yaar mush please dont stop eroting OS. Yeh padhne k baad mrin tera pehla wala os padhne jaungi because the proportion pf abhira’s scenes and rational conversation is just what i need right now.

Its a humble request to continue this OS . At least make a second part of it

Exactly how i imagined abhimanyu to be, he is like that in this OS. the angst was so well needed and rightly so. After what akshara did, such behavior is only plausible rom hi. im glad he didn't behave like a love sick psycho like he did in the show.

my favorite dialogue was when he said "You are 3 months too late miss goenka". take that! tit for tat baby.

the fire scene and ahimanyu's expressions and thoughts were so well written. i could feel each and every frown, every horror, every worry. it felt like for a second abhimanyu's sould had come out and only his body was moving.

"I will kill her with my bare hands if she doesn't come out of the ER in one piece" 👏 what a dialogue. i got goosebumps.

finally the bed scene. you know if you had just shown the bed scene out of nowhere, i would have rolled my eyes. because it would be so absurd for akshu to sleep in the arms of the guy she was trying to run away from. but after reading the whole os, at the end when this came, it was like someone finally let me breathe. akshara's needs to hold onto him was so appropriately pulled off. and abhimanyu's soft side (FINALLY!) was a balm to my eyes after seeing his rock hard attitude throughuot the whole story.

this os has my heart. take a bow mushfika. you truly deserve the appreciation that you get in this forum.

oh and lol your note had me laugh. no one can fall asleep if the OS is like this. you just pull me in a magnetic field. i'm hating yrkkh rght now. i'm mainly here for pranali but the episodes make my eyes sore. but your stories are a breath of fresh air and i really look forward to them now

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Ok im serious right now, after reading the Ruby news i just came here to read this OS to clear my mind. Im so f**king pissed right now you have no idea. Ab tu hi meea sahara hai yaar mush please dont stop eroting OS. Yeh padhne k baad mrin tera pehla wala os padhne jaungi because the proportion pf abhira’s scenes and rational conversation is just what i need right now.

Its a humble request to continue this OS . At least make a second part of it

i would also like to request you to continue this OS. may be make abhimanyu aware of how akshara was "kicked out" by kairav. you are the writer you would know better but please continue. for me the abhira stories are the only things that bind me to yrkkh now. i am only here for pranali but still can't watch the show because of utter nonsense. so it is a request from me, and all your fans to continue this

I am a loss for words. It was beautiful.

You really captured Abhimanyu's firm heart yet passionate anger that he would display against Akshara for everything she has put him through. As much as he is upset he still greatly cares for her. I mean he lived right across the street from her and I figured he would notice how she would keep the lights on at night.

Just nice setup and details... bringing everything full circle in this one shot.

The ending cuddle was just soothing to read

Cannot wait to read more works from you 😃

It was just super awesome👏👏👏you write so beautifully,I just don’t know what to say 💖💖Looking forward to many more from you and thank god you didn’t make it short.😁😁

HOLLLLLYYY MOLLLLLYYYYY!!! That - was - AMAZING! And that is the biggest understatement ever!!

I have to go tuck my kids in now, way past their bedtime - so I'm going to come back and reply more - buuuut, just thought I would let you know that was AMAZING!

Yeh KYAAAAA haiiiii.!! it hasn't even been 24 hours since I posted this and already so many likes and comments😲 I feel like throwing a party after reading all the kind words you guys showered this OS with. Let me contact our Akshu, woh mere liye bhi sab kuch organize kardegi jaisa abhi ke liye kiya hai😳 I honestly had such low expectation from this shot because of how lengthy it was, plus Abhi's outburst, but damn it, y'all never cease to surprise me. When I said it's an honor to write for you guys, I truly MEANT it🤗

I will be replying to each comment individually very soon but for now, just wanted to show my gratitude for your kindness. None of you had to take the time to read, like or even comment but you still did and trust me I love each one of you with my whole heart❤️

This was absolutely lovely❤️👏

I loved the emotion of this story. These two are eachother's need. I love how you portrayed Abhi's fear, anger and love in this OS. He does not do anything half way.

I want more now!

Wow, unreal writing, this is so so good 😍😍

I love everything about this, abhis cold side is something I wanna see in the show and you’ve portrayed it perfectly here, Akshara feeling the wrath of Abhis coldness is so beautifully portrayed. I love the way he gets scared of losing her but still acts cold with her the next 5 days, but he still cares for her the same. And the last season was ethereal, the way he apologises for acting like a jerk, the way he calls her akshu again and the way he promises not to let her go in his head.

Keep writing more 🤗❤️