Kalma Story- Thoda Thoda Pyaar Hua Tumse part-8 pg13 updated 19/7/22 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Priyu..... I never knew u write such amazing stories with brilliant concept... Really loving how it os progressing.....


So anupriya sarthak ki mulaqat hui as or rs se... ❤❤❤❤

Aww... Malhar ki cute si masti apne Grandparents ke saath 🥰🥰🥰.... Bagiche se aam todne wala aco ban gya hai❤❤🥰🥰🥰

Really loved it priyu.... Ab kya hi kahu tarif m..... Dil jeet liya tune

Thanks praku…

Thoda thoda likhna seekh rahi hu…😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Awesome is the only word..

I loved it so much..

AS ke ghar me apradhi...

Pallavi dar gayi apne dhaginon ke liye.. 😆

Anupriya ki maa ki behen hai AS.. I loved that back story. 👍🏼

Anupriya is worried about Malhar reaching on time..

Sarthak reminding her that her son is grown up.

Aur AS ke ghar me finally pata chala ki Malhar ka mazaak kar diya tha.. 🤣

I love his version of Malhar.. Mischievous lovable and everyone's favorite..😍😍😍

Family introduction❤️❤️❤️


Awesome pawsome.... Maare ko bohot hi pasand aaya.. 😘😘👌👌👌

Thank you diidu.. ❤️


Malharji ko show koi bhaav nahi deta tha isliye maine unhe yaha sabka chaheta bana diya 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Thank you diidu.. ❤️


Malharji ko show koi bhaav nahi deta tha isliye maine unhe yaha sabka chaheta bana diya 😆


Exactly.. And that's why it so beautiful..

He deserved to be loved.. Not taken advantage of by everyone.


Tumne bilkul acha kiya

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm


Exactly.. And that's why it so beautiful..

He deserved to be loved.. Not taken advantage of by everyone.


Tumne bilkul acha kiya

Thanks dii for liking it…


Aur mujhe AS aur Malharji ki offscreen chemistry bhi achhi lagti thi to usi se idea lekar yaha daal diya…😆


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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so sweet 😍😍😍😍😍

Deshmukh family is so wholesome here. You have written such a beautiful story. Balanced AS, Anupriya who's a loving mother but without sacrificing her career, and natkhat Malhar...loved every bit of it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi priya. Loved both the chapters and both the updates are equally fresh and cute. Keep up the good work. Waiting for kalyani's entry and the next chapters

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jara567

Hi priya. Loved both the chapters and both the updates are equally fresh and cute. Keep up the good work. Waiting for kalyani's entry and the next chapters

Hii Jara..


Thanks for liking it…


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh god

I am just loving this mastikhor mallu bhai

Heroine aur hero kab Milengi

An nahi hothe he intezaar

😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Same day in Mumbai…


Papa Aurangabad jana jaruri hai kya ??

Main nahi aaungi to chalega nahi kya??

Waise bhi waha jaakar main bore hi ho jati hu to better rahega ki main yahi rukti hu..

Aap dono ho ke aao ok..kalyani said to her father…


Atul- Not okay..Tumhe pata bhi hume Aurangabad kyu jana hai… Tumhare aaji aajoba ki 50th wedding anniversary hai.. to iss khushi me shamil hona banta hai ki nahi….


Kalyani- kya??? 50th wedding anniversary..she said surprisingly..to aapko pehle batana chahiye tha na.. itna important day hai aur aap ab bata rahe hai..Kab hai anniversary ???


Atul- Kal hai aur abhi nikalte hai thodi der me…


Kalyani- Anniversary kal hai aur abhi nikalna hai thodi der me…she asked her father annoyingly..

Madhuri tumhe pata tha Kya???


Madhuri - Haa pata tha anniversary ke bare me..par ye nahi pata tha ki kal hi hai…kyu kya hua??


She told her parents that next week there is fresher party in her college .. she and her friends planned for shopping on weekend but now as they are going to Aurangabad, her plan got cancelled.. she was angry at her father..


Atul- Maine tumhe nahi bataya tha kya??


Kalyani-Aapne mujhe pehle bataya hota to main weekend ki planning hi kyu karti….Aurangabad bhi jana hai aur main kab karungi shopping aur mere fresher ki sari taiyyari rah jayegi .. aapki wajah se..


Atul- I’m sorry beta… waise tumhari freshers party to agle hafte hai aur Aurangabad se wapas aane k baad tum kar lena jitni marji shopping..Main apna credit card dunga tumhe with no limit..Her father tried to cajole her..


Kalyani- Credit card with no limit… seriously.. Are you trying to bribe me???


Atul- Theek hai agar nahi chahiye to koi baat nahi par gussa mat hona apne papa se..


Kalyani- It’s ok.. main gussa nahi hu aur credit card with no limit bhi chal jayega is baar..she smiled


Atul- Ok jao jaldi se packing karo hum 1 baje tak niklenge…



She went into her room with her mother and started packing .. When she looked at her clothes, she got confused what to pack and what to not..


Kalyani-Madhuri… kya pack karu mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai… sare kapade to purane ho gaye hai….Ek kaam karte hai hum pehle shopping kar lete fir niklenge Aurangabad ke liye..



Madhuri-Kyaa….Abhi shopping… nahi nahi abhi shopping ka bilkul time nahi hai bachha … Ye dekho ye tumne abhi hi to kharide inme se hi pack karlo na beta…abhi hum shopping k liye gaye to late ho jayenge…her mother tried to make her understand….


Kalyani- Kaha late ho raha hai..hum jyada time nahi lagayenge.. dekho na ye skirt ye jeans ye pehnungi kya main… mujhe ek achha sa dress kharidna na main kuch nahi jaanti yaa to abhi hum shopping jayenge nahi to main nahi jaa rahi Aurangabad… that’s it..



Madhuri- Ok kar lena shopping…tumse to koi nahi jeet sakta.. dekhti hu kya karna hai..

Aur ek baat Kalyani .. waha par ye Madhuri… Madhuri mat karna please mujhe mumma bulana ok..


Kalyani-Arre main tumhe maadhuri isliye bulati hu kyunki usme already maa hai….


Madhuri-Wo mujhe pata hai par waha par ye baat kisko samjhayenge unhe to lagega ki maine tumhe kuch nahi sikhaya…Waise bhi aao saheb ko lagta hai ki mujhe kuch nahi aata aur tum bhi mujhe naam se bulaogi to wo kya sochengi.. I’m requesting you..


Kalyani-Tumne to bol diya ki mera naam nahi lena..Mujhe jo apna naam pasand nahi hai uska kya karu…Tumne aur papa ne pata nahi kya soch kar ye naam rakha hai mera kalyani.. I don’t like this name..It doesn’t suits my personality…Agar tum log mere parents nahi hote na to itna boring naam rakhne k liye case kar deti tum logo par..


Madhuri-Achha baba Aurangabad se Aakar kar dena case.. abhi ready ho jao shopping bhi karni hai…


When they left for Aurangabad Madhuri asked atul to stop at Mall and told him that they want to buy some stuff.. He agreed but told them not to take much time…When they went for shopping, they just forgot about time and got late….



Atul-Arre ye shopping ke chakkar me late ho gaye mujhe pehle batana tha na ki itni shopping karni hai..


Madhuri-Ye tumhari beti hai na Atul ise hi karni thi shopping.. bol rahi thi sare kapade purane ho gaye..jyada time nahi lagega aur isi ne hi time lagaya ye pasand nahi aa raha wo pasand nahi aa raha..


Kalyani- Papa ab kuch pasand hi nahi aa raha tha to main kya karti ….aapko pata hain na aapki beti ko sirf best hi pasand aata hai to aise hi kuch bhi thode kharid leti aur waise bhi mere sare kapade purane ho gaye the ..isliye shopping karni padi..She said innocently…


Madhuri looked at her said haye mera pyaara bachha kitna masoom hai..


Kalyani-Wo to main hu..she blinked..


When they reached Aurangabad it was already late..the long journey to Aurangabad exhausted them..

Atul with the luggage his hands knocked on the door..Vivek heard it and opened the door and greeted them..


Vivek-Dada….Bahut late ho gaye aapko aane me, safar theek to tha na aapka kuch pareshani huyi kya???he said while taking luggage from his hand and asked them to come inside..


Itni raat ko Kaun hai Vivek ??? Aao saheb asked him while coming out of room..

Vivek told her about Atul arrival with his family…


Atul- Are pareshani koi nahi huyi bas pahunchne me hi late ho gaye...


Ha ha late kyu nahi honge kaunsa ise koi jaruri kaam hai!!! jab marzi ho tab pahuncho idhar inka koi intezaar thodi kar raha hai ..Aao saheb taunted Atul ..


Both Atul and Madhuri greeted her and asked Kalyani to take blessings from her grandmother.. she was all sleepy ..touched her feet and took her blessings


Aao saheb- khush raho bada..dekho to humari bachhi ko kitni neend aa rahi…kitni thak gayi hain..


She asked them to freshen up and have dinner…

Aur Atul ye koi samay hai itna late pahunchne ka aur ghar se jaldi nikalna chahiye tha na.. Ye Madhuri tumhe bhi dhyaan nahi rehta kya kahi jaane ke liye samay se nikalna hota hai…hmm


Madhuri- Ji aao saheb hum samay se hi nikle the Mumbai ki traffic ke wajah se late ho gaya…she looked at Atul.. Hai na Atul…


Parmeshwara… Jab pata hai Mumbai ka traffic itna pareshan karta hai to aaj hi aana tha…do din pehle aa jate to kya hum tumhe mana karte ghar me aane se….

Bola…Par nahi tum to atithiyon ki tarah aaoge.. ye Wada tumhara ghar thode hi hai..She said annoyingly..


Atul-Aai galti ho gayi… mala maaf kara… agali baar se dhyaan rakhunga… aur khane ki fikr mat karo humne dinner kar liya hai baki sab log kaha hai ..


Aao saheb- Sab so gaye hai.. itne time tak koi nahi jaaga..ab tum bhi jao apne kamre me aaram karo…kal subah jaldi mandir k liye nikalna hai puja ki taiyyari bhi karni hai… Karla….


Ghar ke bade bete ko to koi fikr hi nahi hai…


Parmeshwara… Parmeshwara

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow Priya the update was beautiful

Finally kalyani bhi aurangabad pouch gyi and ab bas kalma ki first meeting ki deri hai ❤️❤️

Just too excited for the next update thank you for the update❤️❤️😘

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