ShiVi Drabbles/Random Musings ~ Drabble #7 - Pg 18|Updated: 25/11/21 - Page 12

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Starstuck

Lovely 🥰… love this Shiva… curious what is Dobi Raavi’s next question 🤣


Thank you ❤️

I'm not sure myself what her next question was going to be 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

I just caught up with the last two drabbles and im in love with the plots you come up with! I loved the way it was written and the way ShiVi were portrayed! Quintessential ShiVi! Cannot wait for further updates!!🌸🤍


Aw thank you so much!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

MUjhe nahi yaad ye kis din ka hai but itna yaad hai ki ye baat uthi thi! 🤣


MUJHE BHT PASAND AYA> >>>
continue karo na please isko aage


Thanks Ritu 🤗

I don't think yeh wala continue hoga 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Awww this was so adorable and hilarious 😍😂

Dobi Raavi at her finest who only goes to Shiva with all her problems

I can totally see her behave like this once they reunite after 13467890 years!! Shiva is gonna have a hard time 😆

I loved reading this! Thank you for tagging ❤️


Yayy happy you loved it!🤗

Seeing Raavi behave this way i.e. going to Shiva for anything and everything while chipkofying to him is a dream

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🤣🤣🤣Great chapter….Just st can’t over Raavi’s dobiness🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Thank you ❤️

I hope you enjoyed her dobiness 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kdxice

Well just like raavi I also gasped when I knew the meaning of friends with benefits 🤣

Well written


Hehe thanks hun!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon


Yayy happy you loved it!🤗

Seeing Raavi behave this way i.e. going to Shiva for anything and everything while chipkofying to him is a dream


This is a dream for me from the diary kaand 😆

Mujhe yeh chahiye matlab chahiye!! 😎

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Posted: 3 years ago

An extension of today's mangalsutra scene since I wanted them to have a moment alone, but I'm not sure if we'll get that tomorrow so here we are :)


Drabble #7:


Raavi and Shiva stood in their room, surrounded by their family members with the faint sound of their applause barely making it to their ears. The outside world had dispersed into an illusion the moment their eyes met. Nothing else mattered as their gazes held onto one another while they experienced a pivotal moment of their life.


Raavi let out a shaky sigh as she controlled the tears that were threatening to spill. When Shiva rested his arms around her, his hands putting the mangalsutra around her neck, she had felt a bubbling sensation of security and content bursting at the surface of her chest. Her mangalsutra was a token of their relationship which she now held close to her heart. To have her bhootnath adorn her with a symbol of their bond made her the happiest she had been in a while. The feeling was exquisite and she couldn't quite put it into words. She barely managed to reign in her emotions as she gingerly touched her mangalsutra, elation coursing through every fiber of her being. Her eyes moved downwards when she couldn't hold onto his stare. With trembling lips, she blinked her eyes rapidly in an attempt to push back the dam that was about to rupture within her.


Shiva observed his chipkali with a certain softness which no one else had had the pleasure of witnessing. He heard footsteps heading out of their room but never once did his eyes stray away from the beauty in front of him. He heard the thumping sound of the door closing and released a breath of relief, his gaze still fixated on Raavi's every movement. He watched the glimmering jewel below her neck, filling him with immense pride and joy. It contrasted beautifully against the ivory of her skin as it sat upon her like it was made just for her. His heart thudded faster at the thought. He waited with bated breath to have her look at him again. When her adorably beguiling eyes finally looked up at him, he saw unshed tears taking their place near the edges. His heart twinged with pain. Why was she crying? Before he could process his thoughts, he felt Raavi jump at him with a force that sent him stumbling back a step or two.


When Raavi had managed to gather the courage to look back at Shiva, the intensity of emotions she observed in his eyes sent her reeling. She couldn't control the ardor she felt for him even if she tried. As if her body had a mind of its own, she jumped at Shiva and engulfed him in a hug. Wrapping her arms around him, her fists clutched at the back of his shirt and balled them up tightly. Her face nuzzled into his chest as she inhaled his classic scent consisting of sandalwood and cinnamon, tinged with a hint of bergamot. It was her favorite now, and she couldn't go a day without breathing in the warmth it provided and the security it assured her soul. As she snuggled closer to him, she realized what she was doing.


"Yeh tu ya kar rahi hai Raavi? Tune khud bola tha na jab tak Shiva tujhse aake khud nahi bolta, tu aage kadam nahi badhayegi...toh phir yeh...." Raavi trailed off internally, willing herself to let go of him, but she felt her body betraying her as she clutched onto him tighter. It felt too good to let go. For the first time in months, she finally felt like she had found her home in the truest manner. She closed her eyes for a few more seconds to let herself bask in the moment before she loosened her hold on him. Just as she was about to step away, she felt Shiva's arms wrap around her, pulling her closer to him. Her breath hitched at the contact as her tiny fists now lay against his chest, acting as the only barrier in between them.


Raavi sniffled at the gesture before slowly lifting her eyes to look at him. She found him staring right back at her.


"Ae chipkali." Shiva spoke out loud, the deep rumble in his chest vibrating against her palms resting upon him.


"Ro kyun rahi hai?" Shiva asked.


"Main kahan ro rahi hoon?" Raavi asked him back just as a tear spilled from the corner of her eyes. Traitor.


"Nahi ro rahi hai? Toh phir yeh mote mote aansu jo tere inn bade bade aankhon se tapak rahe hai, woh kya hai?" Shiva retorted as he delicately swiped a lone tear trickling down her face with the pad of this thumb.


"Khushi ke aansun hai." Raavi stated, breathing noisily. Her lips formed a pout.


"Tu na phoolkumari ki phoolkumari hi rahegi." Shiva's mouth curved upwards as he spoke.


"Aur tu bhootnath ka bhootnath hi rahega!" Raavi replied haughtily.


"Moment bigaad diya." Raavi muttered under her breath.


"Tu sach mein khush hai?" Shiva asked, breaking her out of her mild annoyance. She watched his visibly softened eyes glimmering with hope and her heart melted instantaneously.


"Yeh bhi koi pucchne ki baat hai kya? Of course main khush hoon." Raavi answered sincerely.


"Tu khush hai?" Raavi asked.


"Hmm." Shiva nodded, brushing his fingers atop her slender ones.


"Tujhe aur kuch nahi kehna?" Raavi asked again, watching his fingers move over her own. It felt so right; so natural.


She received a quirk of his brows in return.


"Tujhe...kuch sunna hai kya, Raavi?" Shiva asked slyly, a hint of mirth apparent in his tone.


Raavi stepped away from him in an attempt to clear her head. Shiva frowned at the loss of contact between them.


"Agar main haan keh doon, toh tu bol dega?" Raavi asked innocently.


"Dukaan pe aayegi kya?" Shiva asked.


Raavi harrumphed at him clearly evading her question. "Yeh tu kya baar baar mere sawalon ka jawab apne sawalon se de raha hai?! Band kar yeh."


"Tu bol. Aayegi kya?"


"Aagayi toh tujhe bolna padega." Raavi declared.


"Theek hai. Phir toh bol hi dunga." Shiva said softly, before clearing his throat and making his voice gruff again.


"Chalta hoon..." Shiva stated again.


Raavi smiled affectionately, her eyes twinkling as she nodded her head.


"Intezaar karunga." Shiva said, walking backwards.


As Shiva unlocked the door, he turned around and glanced at Raavi one last time before heading for the store.


Raavi felt her heart performing cartwheels within her chest as she gripped her dupatta and played with it gently, lost in her thoughts.


"Main bhi intezaar karungi, Shiva." Raavi said tenderly before going about her day while humming her favorite songs. She couldn't wait for noon to arrive.


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The whole purpose of this was to have them spend some time alone. There isn't much of a conversation because I didn't want to write one (laziness 😛) but the conversation is heavily implied upon through the other dialogues so be rest assured that they will sort it all out after ❤️

Edited by blissfulcanyon - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

It was awesome ❤❤

Their hug, their gol gol baatein 😍😍❤

Loved it🤍🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago

I relly wish this to happen as Raavi got really emotional while the scene in show to they should give them some conversation........ 😘🥰😍

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