Shivi: TS : Dil ko karar aya ... last Part updated - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰💕Beautiful, can’t wait for your next update

Thanks ☺️☺️☺️☺️ surely i will try to post today

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks dear 😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kushigupta162

Nuce update dear

Plz update next part soon

Thanks dear .. 😇😇😇 try to update today

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

I loved it! This was very cute and amazing! Please do tag me when you update part 2!❤️‍🔥

Thanks a lot dear 😇😇😇 sure i will ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paru95

Lovely update❤️

Waiting for the next one

Thanks a lot.. soon i will post

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pliz update next part soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Part 2

Shivi in there room :

Shiva drag her in the room closes the door and sandwich her between tha door and him...


Haan aa aa..

Haan hasi ban gaye

Haan nami ban gaye

Tum mere aasmaan

Meri zameen ban gaye

Oo.aa…aa..


Shiva : aye chipkali tu n abhi the mere sawal ka sahi kawab nahi diya ... Kun mandra rahi the raat ko mere sar p... ?

While Shiva deeply eximines her expressions and actions .... Ravi narvously...

Ravi : M.. m... M...


Haan hum badalne lage

Girne sambhalne lage

Jab se hai jaana tumhein

Teri ore chalne lage


Shiva putting stand of her hair behind her ear...

Softly spoke

Shiva : ab yeh bakri ki traha main main kia kar rahi hai... Chipkali hai na to chipkali bn k rahe....

Then he softly moves her head upward with his finger so that he directly get the view of her crystal clear eyes...

Shiva : ab bolaye ge bhi?

Ravi : main ... Main wo ... Main wo pani peenay ai the ...

Har safar har jagah

Har kahin ban gaye

Maante thhe phir khuda

Aur haan wahi ban gaye


Shiva slowly touches her naked arms..with back of his hand and Ravi felt some electric weave in her body...

Shiva : phr?

Ravi : phr mujhe nee.... nee... neend na... Nahi.. a rahi the...


Pehchaante hi nahi

Ab log tanha mujhe

Meri nigaahon mein bhi

Hai dhoondte wo tujhe


Shiva smriks and touch her lower lip with his thumb and removes the drop of water... here Ravi's narvousness is on peak... And felt butterflies in her stomach ...

Shiva softly in a teasing manner...

Shiva : kun... ab is ka ilzam bhi mujhe dege ?

Ravi in one go...

Ravi : han bhootnath jo thera tu... Neend uranay k ilawa r kar bhi kia skta hai....

Wesay tu ek bat bata pahle... Tu kun jag raha tha itni raat ko... R yehn mere sath akelay kia kar raha hai... Log kiya sochain gaye k ek jawan larka r ek jawan larki akelay kamray mn ek sath kia kar rahe hn...

Shiva suddenly turn in to angry man .. clunches his jaws on her question... he holds her from hairs... tears start rolling from her eyes...

Ravi : ahh... Shiva ... Kia kar raha hai chor... Dard ho raha hai mujhe...

Shiva : aye chipkali.... Mujhe bhi dard ho raha hai... aj lai hai logon ki bat hamare darmiyan aj k bad lai na to dekhna tu... Tere mere beech ab kisi teesray ki gunjaish nahi hai.. samjhi tu...


Hum the dhoondhte jisey

Wo kami ban gaye

Tum mere ishq ki

Sar-zameen ban gaye


Ravi scared and tightly hugs shiva ...

Ravi : han smjh gai... Nahi laon ge aj k bad tere r mere beech kisi r ko... Tu ns shant ho ja... Plz...

Ans rub his back ..

Shiva calm down and emotionally hugs back Ravi tightly..

Shiva : pahle hi inhn logon ki waja s hm n hamra rishta kharab kia hai... R itni mushkalon s aj hm ek sath khare hn.. ab plz tu yeh sach badlnay mat dena ravi... Warna main... Main mar jaon ga is bar .... Please tu mere pass mere sath rehna hamesha hamesha k liye ....

Ravi emotionally smiles ...

Ravi : bs itni c bat... Theek hai nahi kaon ge kabhi nahi jaon ge... Lakin badlay mn mujhe bhi kuch chahiye...

Haan hasi ban gaye

Haan nami ban gaye

Tum mere aasmaan

Meri zameen ban gaye


Shiva cups her face in his palms... And wipes the droplets of tears from the corner of her eyes with his thumb...

Shiva : bol na .. kia chahiye tujhe ... Apni jan bhi dedon ga tere liye..

Ravi puts finger on his lips...

Ravi : shhhh....

She holds him from his collar n pull him closer and make eye to eye contact with him..

Ravi : Tu kabhi bhi apni jan denay ki bat dobara mat karna r nahi kabhi ise dau p lagana mere liye teri jan buht qeemti hai suna tu n ...

Ravi cares his haisrs and turn them to his old style with her fingers... Shiva smiles and nodes...

Ravi holds his hand and make him stand in front of mirror and hugs him from back..

Ravi : mujhe mera purana wala bhootnath wapas chahiye... Tail masalon ki khushboo wala.. sharartain karta hua... Lakin is bar mn chati hn tu mujhe bho apni badmash company mn shamil kar le plz...

Shiva holds her both hands kisses them and took her infront of him ...

Shiva : done.... Bs khush...

Ravi : buht khush

N both happily hugs eachother tightly...

This is the beginning of their new badmash company journey ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagged you guys

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved it ❤❤❤

Thanks alot dear 😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

That was one beautiful story dear🤗

Pls write more👍🏼

And thank u for the tag🥳

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