Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 25

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Ooh is this one posted on if? Could yoh send a link if not. Would love to read!

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/842

Imma waiting for a new OS man!

Is something coming up?

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Imma waiting for a new OS man!

Is something coming up?

I have 3 WIPs open right now! 😆

Have never done this before. Idk when the ShiVi one will be finished, though I have the idea in place and have started to work on it.

Sometimes I feel it's harder when you're not intimately acquainted with the characters and their world from the show, but then another part of me feels it's easier and less constraining. I can make them whoever I want them to be! 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

I have 3 WIPs open right now! 😆

Have never done this before. Idk when the ShiVi one will be finished, though I have the idea in place and have started to work on it.

Sometimes I feel it's harder when you're not intimately acquainted with the characters and their world from the show, but then another part of me feels it's easier and less constraining. I can make them whoever I want them to be! 😆

Yeah I mean to some extent! It gets confusing after a while sometimes. I was writing a story years ago it was completely AU. I was just using the names.. but oh my god somedays I felt like WTH am I trying to do 🤣

Waiting for the next OS☺️

Update 5:

Summary: Shiva challenges Raavi, and things take an unexpected turn.

The title for this is inspired by a line from the song, "You win again". If you want to listen to it, it's right here

here.

A lot of my story titles are borrowed from song lyrics 😆

Content warning: None, but it will have some descriptive text as per usual, 😆 if you've learned my style by now.

Disclaimer: If I've gotten some terms wrong, please don't blame me, blame Google! 😆

I hope you enjoy this. Please leave a comment if you do. Thank you!

This is wonderful… I loved each and every single chapter …❤️

HOLY MOTHER OF A WEASEL WITH HOT CROSS BUNS !!!

What did I just read?!

Wha- how- haaaaawwwwwwwwwww

Okay first thoughts first : Oh How I miss swimming like no one's business!

Moving on : I cannot count the number of times I've blushed or gone all 'YIKES' while reading this. There was this electricity! All charged up!

DAMN!

Bless Tushar for giving us a pool scene! May he get married happily and have an awesome life!🤣

This whole piece was SO RAUNCHY and WITHOUT the actual deed at that. How'd you do this? Teach me Master! Teach me! I was reading the dialogue 'You Little Minx' when my mother snuck up on me and now she thinks I'm unstable. 🤡

Can we all agree and give Krish a 'Boycott Order / Desh Nikaala' what's his problem man? Why does he interrupt everything? huh.

Dev's AGREED??! [Aag boi Shiva upcoming CANNOT WAIT]

Even if he did I didn't like Krish going all "You're gonna be married" like hello?! consent? She'll be asked right?

*Manifesting Aag Boi Shiva with all heart*

PLEASE UPDATE SOON MAN IMMA STARVED OF RAUNCHY STUFF THAT DOESN'T EVEN HAVE THE DEED.

I NEED THE NEXT PART LIKE NOWWWWWWWW!!!

Arrrrgggghhhhh these two fools!! And the absolutely horrible timing everyone else has!! Damn!

Also, can we have Shiva beat up Dev? Give him the thrashing he deserves?

Also, can Raavi outright reject Dev? And stand up for her and Shiva? I can’t bear a repeat of what’s happening in the show!!