Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 24

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

OMG! I’m laughing so hard and blushing hard too!

Thank you so much! What did you enjoy most about the update?

I enjoyed each and every bit of the update😆 This was written so well that I actually can see ShiVi like this and we know this is not how the real ShiVi is. And I enjoy this ShiVi more than the real one's lol.🤪The CPR one was the one who got me to laugh most though. I also had the question on how can the officer believe in CPR when the girl was on her feet. And the next line, Raavi asked that.😆

I'm now waiting patiently for another update😳

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

I enjoyed each and every bit of the update😆 This was written so well that I actually can see ShiVi like this and we know this is not how the real ShiVi is. And I enjoy this ShiVi more than the real one's lol.🤪The CPR one was the one who got me to laugh most though. I also had the question on how can the officer believe in CPR when the girl was on her feet. And the next line, Raavi asked that.😆

I'm now waiting patiently for another update😳

You know this was really heartening to know, that you're enjoying this ShiVi more than the 'real' one! 😳

Yeah for the CPR one, I actually had them making out in a car, but then it would be hard to absolve Shiva and blame it on the girl entirely, so decided to change that and make it sound like a ridiculous story from Shiva! 😆

You may have to be little more patient for next one! I don't know when it's coming. 😳

🤩 Both chapters are brilliantly written👏🤗

And their not so innocent game🔥…fabulous 🔥💕

Can’t wait for your next update 🥰

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🤩 Both chapters are brilliantly written👏🤗

And their not so innocent game🔥…fabulous 🔥💕

Can’t wait for your next update 🥰

Thanks for reading!

Glad you enjoyed their not-so-innocent game! 😳

I enjoyed this one so much even though I imagined the game to be way more naughty🤣 but I still loved your version!

I am just disappointed that they didnt do much🤣

even though its so long...I want you to continue!!😆

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

I enjoyed this one so much even though I imagined the game to be way more naughty🤣 but I still loved your version!

I am just disappointed that they didnt do much🤣

even though its so long...I want you to continue!!😆

Ahh, sorry for letting you down! 😆

But I have to save the juicy stuff for later. Leave something for people to look forward to. The fun is in the anticipation, no? Like Shiva says in one of my other fics - there's something to be said for delayed gratification! 😆

Thank you for reading and thanks for the prompt! ❤️😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ahh, sorry for letting you down! 😆

But I have to save the juicy stuff for later. Leave something for people to forward to? The fun is in the anticipation no? Like Shiva says in one of my other fics - there's something to be said for delayed gratification! 😆

Thank you for reading and thanks for the prompt! ❤️😳

Yeah I get you. Honestly I am loving the build up and anticipation☺️ keep it going!

I actually lose interest in stories after they do all that business because then theres nothing left to wait for, so I totally get what youre doing!🤣

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Yeah I get you. Honestly I am loving the build up and anticipation☺️ keep it going!

I actually lose interest in stories after they do all that business because then theres nothing left to wait for, so I totally get what youre doing!🤣

I'm master at this even if I do say so myself 😎. My OCs took until the 28th chapter to get down to it with sexual tension being present from chapter 1! 🤣

It's a wonder my 3 readers haven't killed me yet! 🤣

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

I'm master at this even if I do say so myself 😎. My OCs took until the 28th chapter to get down to it with sexual tension being present from chapter 1! 🤣

It's a wonder my 3 readers haven't killed me yet! 🤣

Ab to parhni paregi

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

I'm master at this even if I do say so myself 😎. My OCs took until the 28th chapter to get down to it with sexual tension being present from chapter 1! 🤣

It's a wonder my 3 readers haven't killed me yet! 🤣

Ooh is this one posted on if? Could yoh send a link if not. Would love to read!