Kalmaff :-. Pyaar to tha...(chapter:-1upadted ) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Vanshu, yaar sorry roz late ho jati hoon. Magar department transfer ke kaaran time nhi mil paa raha tha story acche se read karne ka.

Second thing, please continue this Yaar. Ok. To teri FFs vali ranking me ye second no. par(First rank kiski h vo to tumhe pata hi h). But seriously rags to riches revenge vala plot is my ultimate favourite. Maine apni pehli FF isi concept par likhi thi.

Btw, Malharji ke taunts mast the. Pata h, bahut zyada lovey dovey dekhkar na thoda bore lagta h. Oopar se badla lena and dil se care karna is so romantic. Poori Wuthering Heights vibe aa rahi h mujhe.

Meri gut feeling kehti h ki Athu Sampu fir bhaag gaye honge ek saath😜 Best point in KalMa lovestory is Samtharv ka elopement

Bas is FF ke updates regularly deti rehna Vanshu Rani

And please is FF me dono ki shaadi mat karwana. Revenge marriage trope thoda ajib lagta h. And please revenge vale part ko jaldi mat khatm karna.

Koi nahi main samjhti hoo transfer ke waqt sabhi busy rehte hai it's ok tu jab chahein aakein padh

Yahan atharav ki bhaagne wali partner koi aur hai sampu to abhi aayegi iss story main 😆😆😆

Haan yaar ye revenge stories Meri khudkdi favorite hoti hai mujhein khud lovey dovey scene ek haad Tak hi pasanad hai

Aur iss FF ke end main hi hogi inki Shaadi ye poori ff hi inkein iss angst/hate/ lovestory pe based hai

Originally posted by: Phlo

thank you pargyu 😻😻

Koi nahi main samjhti hoo transfer ke waqt sabhi busy rehte hai it's ok tu jab chahein aakein padh

Yahan atharav ki bhaagne wali partner koi aur hai sampu to abhi aayegi iss story main 😆😆😆

Haan yaar ye revenge stories Meri khudkdi favorite hoti hai mujhein khud lovey dovey scene ek haad Tak hi pasanad hai

Aur iss FF ke end main hi hogi inki Shaadi ye poori ff hi inkein iss angst/hate/ lovestory pe based hai

I'll be waiting for the updates Vanshu. Reading the first chapter, I have a feeling this is going to be too good. Lagta h tere favourite FFs ki list me first rank vale ko bhi topple kar jayega ye vala FF❤️❤️❤️

Interesting chapter

Felt bad for both KalMa😭😭😭

Malhar ji hurting himself & her💔😭😭

Some mystery

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Interesting chapter

Felt bad for both KalMa😭😭😭

Malhar ji hurting himself & her💔😭😭

Some mystery

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Kalmalover

Wow exciting ❤😘

Vanshu, been dying to know more about this one... plz update this when you have time?

Promo::-

Kalyani ::- ek waqt tha ki aapko mere maan ki baat batani bhi nhi padti thi aur ek din hai ki ... Chaltein hai moksh ghar par wait kar raha hoga .."

Kalyani left Malhar standing there who is just watching other couples enjoying the couple dance cosily ..

Malhar ::- " sahi keh rahi hoo tum ..wakai humein apnein rishte pein dhyaan dene ki jarurat hai ..jissein chuppi aur kadhwahat ki diwar khayein jaa rahi hai ..ye dimak agr jyaada badhi to kahi jaise imaratein dhal jati hai ., Hamara rishta bhi vaise hi naa dhal jaayein .."

Kalyani cries silently listening his bitter but true words towards their relationship..

Malhar ::" main abhi doosra baccha nahi chatha kalyani ...i am not ready ..moksh kein waqt haan main khush tha lekin abb nahi ..uss waqt vo iss duniya main aa chuka tha to main par abhi mein ek aur jimmedari ke liye tayyar nahi hoon ..sorry but .."

Kalyani ::-(angrily but in sad voice ): but kya malharji ..kahin pillu hamara moksh aapkein liye bojh to nahi haina ..yaa aap ye kehna chathe hai ki jaise abb hamarein rishte main kuch nahi bacha hai vaise hi abb humarein maa baap kei farz main bhi kuch nhi bacha hai .."

Malhar gets shocked listening her but not able to give answer to her question, he left the place leaving her crying alone in agony and pain ..

Kalyani ::" sahi kehte hai log stories main vo happy ending kuch nhi hoti ..kyunki real life main kissi bhi kahani ki happy ending ho hi nhi sakti hamari hi kahani dekh lijiye jo kaise mod pein aakein ruk gayi hai jahan sirf dard aur aanson reh gayein hai sirf ansoon..."

Kya inn dono ki kahani aagein badh payegi ya chod denge malhar aur kalyani ek dusrein ko ...

Tell me how is the promo 😉

Nice promo Vanshu..

Ye story mai phirse padungi.. I forgot what it was.. 😔

Lekin promo bada pasand aaya mujhe.

Promo is awesome…

Ye kya chal raha hai…

Hum ka kachu samajh nahi aawat…

Jaldi story update karo taki hume kachu samajh aaye …

Ye kya hai.... Samjh nhi aaya ache se... Maine iska first update pdha to thoda samjh aaya....

I think ye past ka precap hai na.... Dunno let's see.. Jaldi update krna