*It matters- when you*-TR shot *edited*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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It Matters~When You!

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Walking way back to maurya….Ranveer and Tia avoided looking towards each other or may be they were pretending to do so…

Time to time they were stealing each others glimpse…After walking a few more steps Ranveer turned his face towards his left…

He found Tia's face glowing, as the shining silver light of moon fell on it…it was so beautiful….so sparkling….This time he was not able to set his eyes off from the girl he was walking with…Tia could feel his gaze on her….She din't have the courage to look up….Something was happening deep inside her,which made her feel nervous and her heart beat faster….She turned towards her side and without making any eye contact with Ranveer said…

"Camel !!!you are walking so slowly….Tia want's to reach Maurya fast"saying so she again straightened her face and took a step ahead quickly…she was about to take another step when Ranveer caught her hand,pulling her a little back…Tia simply closed her eyes and took a deep breath,trying to make herself normal but was she really? she herself dint knew…she dint knew what was making the situation so difficult for her.

"Ranveer!?"-muttered Tia pushing her voice

Ranveer could feel the shake in the hand he had caught…He at once set Tia's hand free from his grip…

Tia now finally turned back and looked at Ranveer,who was seeing her with a grin on his face…

"Tia what was all that in the restaurant…"

Tia could notice the grin on Ranveer's face widening…

"wohh…actually….it was…it was…ummm Ranveer…"-Tia muttered trying to think for an reason

"Hum bataate hai…aapne aisa isliye kiya kyunki aap hume kissi aur ke saath nahin dekh sakti…apko humara Reva ke saath hona acha nahin lagta…(let me tell you...you did this because you cannot see me with someone else...you did not like me being with Reva)"

Tia at once contradicted trying to save herself…

"it's not at all lke that!…it was just a drama to spoil Reva's mood….It had nothing with you being with her…aur waise bhi Tia koh koi farakh nahin padta ki tum kis ke saath rahete ho (...and it hardly matters to Tia of you being with someone)"-says tia lowering her eyes

"Koi farakh nahin padta? (it doesn't matters?)"-asks Ranveer looking at Tia's lowered eyes with his broadened eyes…

"NAHIN!!!…TIA KOH KOI FARAKH NAHIN PADTA! (NO!!!...IT DOESN'T MATTERS TO TIA!) "-says Tia lifting her eyes up looking into Ranveer's eyes, raising her voice sounding angry…

Just then Ranveer's cell rings…he picks it up…

"Oh hi REVA {Tia's eyes widened as she heard that name from Ranveer}…Kyu kya hua?{Ranveer now faced his back while talking on the phone}…Nahin Reva aap galat samajh rahi hai(no Reva you are thinking in wrong way)…wohh toh Tia ne apko sattane ke liye aisa kiya thha…Humare aur Tia ke beech mein aisa kuch bhi nahin hai (there is nothing between me and Tia)…acha thik hai hum abhi apse milne aate hai phir aap koh sabb kuch samjha denge…(ok am coming to see you then i'll explain you everything)"

Ranveer placed his hand on the reciever and now turned back to Tia…

"Tia aap chale jaana humme jana hai…"Ranveer turned around and again talking on his phone went in the opposite direction…Tia saw Ranveer going…she dint liked it at all….How can Ranveer do this to her,there was something which was making her so sad recalling ranveers line-there's nothing between him and Tia…She turned and started to walk…but after a while she again turned back in the hope that may be Ranveer dint left her…may be he was still there……….but he wasn't…the road was lonely like her….she had tears in her eyes…she stood there still and was watching the same path from which Ranveer had just passed…she again turned back with her lowered eyes….a tear slid down her lid and was falling down her cheek when someone catched it in the palm…Tia lifted the same teary eyes and got stunned for a second…

"Farakh toh padta hai…"-said Ranveer in a lowered voice enclosing the tear drop in his wrist and then reopening it…

It took Tia a second to realize that it was a mere plan of Ranveer…She wiped her upcoming tear and said with a choked voice…

"Koi farakh nahin padata! (it doesnt matters!)"-just after saying this she looked into Ranveer's eyes which were so deeply fixed on her….she tried hard to have a command over her tears but couldn't….another tear came out from her eyes…Ranveer pulled Tia towards him with his hand placed on her soilders and moved his face deathly close to hers….his lips touched her face thereby kissing her tear rolling down her cheek…Tia closed her eyes,there was shiver sent down her spine as she felt the impression of Ranveer's lips on her cheek...

Ranveer moved his face back…

"abb bhi koi farakh nahin padata….? (even now it doesn't matters...?)"This time Ranveer dint waited for Tia's answer and went on…

"par humme farkh padata hai…hummne jab bhi kuch socha hai apke ke bare mein socha hai…aap ke alawa hum kisi aur ke bare mein kabhi nahin soch sakte…(but it matters to me...i have always thought about you...i can never think of someone else then you)"

Tia couldn't control herself any longer…she broke herself in Ranveer's arms digging her face behind his soilders….

"It matters…it always matters to Tia when it's you Ranveer…Tia cannot see you with anyone else but herself…"

Ranveer's one arm enclosed around Tia's back and other placed gently on her head…

"hum apse bohot pyaar karte hai Tia…"

"Tia loves you to Ranveer…"

both of their arms tightened and locked themselves…the key was love and their heart was the lock…the lock which can never be opened and a key which can never be lost.

i myself read the shot and felt many thing missing so i edited it...

i know there would be many mistakes please bare me for that...it dint turn out well,i apologize for that...please bring to my notice the liking and disliking part, i'll be waiting to know your response.

AD.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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know there would be many mistakes please bare me for that...it dint turned well,i apologize for that...please bring to my notice the liking and disliking part, i'll be waiting to know your response.

AD.

hey this is aparna 😳.. this is excellent piece of work girl👏👏 i enjoyed reading it..

reading a tr fic after ages..😳its awesome

Edited by aparna_1988 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey this fis is great yaar. even the edited version esp i loved the tear drop ping and ranveer catching"a tear slid down her lid and was falling down her cheek when someone catched it in the palm"😳"…Tia lifted and the end is even better ..👏👏👏

my only complaint is .. wish it was longer😉

ttis should be in kaashti.. why dont you join us ..

cant wait to rd another one😳from you..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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believe me .. my freind rachel will completly flip over this ..😆just you wait for her comments you will feel lot better..

she is not here at this moment.. you will get wonderful reviews from her not ony rachel sushmas tanya a.. aanchal sindhu raksha.. swathi .. ashn iall are busy rt now for reasons best known to them// 😳but trust me they will love it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awesome story.....u have done a great job .......I m still imagining this scene....awwwwww I wish it had happened this way...it would have been so romantic....I wish Ranveer had this much of sense in the show..... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*sindhu*~

👏 👏 👏 ....I wish Ranveer had this much of sense in the show..... 😆

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my sentiments exavty sindhu.😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lolz sindhu...hey AD seriously luved ur fic...it totally defines tiaRa...i really enjoyed reading it...gud work...waiting 4 another one from u 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aparna you kept my spirits stable and dint let them down....thank you for your precious responses and also for taking time to read the shot twice

Sindhu a hearty thanks for your reply

Aanchal(saw your name in your profile)thank you so much
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh god this is soooo romantic😳..it is so good that i wish SA had shown the scene this way😳....oh my just imagining ranveer tricking tia like that and making her confess her feelings for her is giving me gooseflesh😳

u wrote awesomely well AD👏...described it so well😳...i could actually see it happening😳...believe me i was grinning along with ranveer😉

and its a fitting end😳..without any kabab mein haddis🤢 and neither with ranveer walking away d way he did in the show..

gr8 writing hun👏...plz keep coming with more😳

sorry for the late reply..i wasn't active😕

Ps; thanx for the vote of confidence aparna😆 and sindhu..i couldn't agree more..ranveer is more sensible in AD's fic than he was in the show😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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U r welcomeeeeeee sweety pie.....eagerly waiting for ur new one shots.....see I m sooooooooooooooooooo greedy... 😆

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