ShiVi FanFiction // Arcane // Chapter 10 P.G 53 / 16.03.2022 - Page 30

So my dear Inny turns out I had already started reading this beautiful and unique fic of yours but forgot to comment along the way. Sorry about that😐

Just re-read the prologue and the first chappu and I loved it.

How intrigued rishita is😆

She is as intrigued by shivi as I am by this story❤️

Loving it!

Second chapter

I loved it. This whole idea of curious rishita and showing shivi's dynamic through her eyes is🔥🔥

I love how in sync they are, that dinning table scene and ice cream feeding part is so pure ❤

And my favourite was the ending.. How shiva was drawing circles on her thigh. I could totally picture it❤️

Loved chapter 3❤❤❤

Shopping... Bickering.. Everything was lovely

Chapter 4

Jaise jaise Mai sochti hu that it can't get any exciting than it already is tu mujhe galat saabit kar rahi hai!

I'm loving this

Mai bhi rishita ki tarah inki story sunne k liye betaab hu

Onto the next one! 🔥🔥

Chapter 5

Needless to say I loved it.. Each and every part of it..

The emotions, the flashback.. Ooof innu you are gonna make me cry with this😭

Raavi's emotions and pain were beautifully penned in this part❤

As I progress to read further I think I'm gonna be at the loss of words with this.

Innaya I love you for this❤️

Chapter 6 has my whole heart❤

Heck this story has my whole heart❤

Oh that flashback man! 😭 My poor poor raavi asking gaumbi why her parents left her😭. Mera dil💔💔

I love gaumbi-raavi bond so much. How I wish they could show an ounce of this in the show, sigh!!

Beautifully written chapter and my favourite part was

"Same same but different" 💜💜💜

Saara gist jaise inn lines mein aa gaya in dono ka.. Lovely!

Chapter 7

This was so sensual.. All that seduction and passion into a bubble bath.. My God☺️

How can you write this and be okay.. Mera toh padh k he bura haal ho gaya☺️😆

I loved rishita-raavi bonding over shopping also❤️

So babies are gonna go on a date.. Me Waiting

Chapter 8

OHHHH MYYYY GODDDD!!!

THEY CONFESSED!!🥳

I love the flashbacks.. I love the build up to the moment of confession and I love the confession❤❤

So pure and simple just themm.. Cuddling and in each other's embrace.🥺🥺

Ati sundar chappy❤

Chapter 9

Honestly, at this point I don't even know what to say!

Maybe except for how much of an idiot I was to miss out on this beautiful story😭

I mean what do I even say?

You just wove magic through your words🤍

You've just given these characters a new life in this story and it's magical!

The whole chapter was my favourite and I loved how he missed her when it had been only a few hours of separation and how he instantly said he missed her🥺🥺

How he surprised her and then the kissing and making out❤❤

Brilliant innu

Dil gurda jigar sab lele Mera❤❤🥺🥺

Love you

Hey Guys!

Okay I know I haven't really updated this in a very long time! like over a month or two 😭

I'm so so sorry about that! but I've been busy and basically had no inspiration to work with this FF, but don't worry I am back on track and I will hopefully get back to updating this one soon!

I had thought of finishing this story and then updating a chapter everyday, that way y'all don't have to wait extremely long for the next update and I would be done soon! So that I can work on other ideas I have!

Do let me know what you think of this idea! and if you prefer anything else!