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Hi everyone, after a very very long time I am writing something apart from creating random post about the show. So please bear with me. Please do highlight mistake and if something you don't like. So let's starts.

Anupama was finishing office work but was worried about the ladies if they will be allowed to work with them in the project for restaurant. But she is somewhat confident as Anuj is by her side. She knew by the incidents that happened recently that Anuj will always be there for her.

She has a faint smile on her face while she was making some list of ladies in her circle while Anuj was in a meet with foreign delegates as he was trying to enter some other markets outside India.

They both finally finished their part of work for the day. Suddenly Anuj got a call.

Anuj: Hey buddy! So finally meri yaad aa hi gayi? Hmm

Person on call: Yes finally! But what is this Buddy, haa? Why you are not calling me as always?

Anuj looked at Anupama and she gave a smile. He then lowered his voice.

Anuj: yes, my Queen, Ab thik hai. How are you?

Lady: don't even ask that. Ask me where I am?

Anuj: Acha baba where are you?

Lady: Mandir me. Aashirwaad lene ke liye ki mere pyar ko kisi ki nazar na lage.

Anuj: Kya baat hai! Amazing, directly from airport to Mandir, good going my Queen. Waise itna pyar karti ho apne pyar se?

Lady: yes, bahut jyada.

Anuj: chalo acha hai bol diya kabhi kabhi bolna acha hota hai.

Anupama: (feeling sorry for interrupting the conversation): Amm Anuj, maine kaam khatam kar liya, mai ghar jaa rahi hmm.

Anuj: Anupama, please ruko, let's go to Mandir. Itne babal ke baad I think we should go to Mandir and take aashirwad.

Anu: ji

Anu was thinking that what happened suddenly that he wants to go to Mandir just after the call. Prior he was talking to GK about going late to home as he has another meet in the office. She has questions but she as usual ignored them as the question here is to go to Mandir.

They reached mandir and bowed the heads together praying for their loved ones. Anuj asked Anu to sit for a while in mandir for the peace of mind. Anupama no matter shhe ignored questions in her mind but then knowing that Anuj has always respected her words, opinions so she curiously asked him question.

Anu: ek baat puchu?

Anuj: Haan bilkul

Anu: Aapne itne saal shaadi kyu nahi ki?

Anuj was really surprised as he was not expecting Anu to ask something about his personal life. He was in dilama to find words to answer because he doesn't want Anu to know the truth about him. He was scared too. But he composed himself.

Anuj: Sab kuch aaj hi janogi mere baare me?

Anu (feeling embarrassed): Surry maine bas aise hi. Surry

Anuj: Are mai mazak kar raha hmm, tum jo bhi chaho jab bhi chaho puch or bol sakti ho. Okay? Or maine shaadi kyu ni ki, iska answer kya doon? Life ne itna sab kuch chhin liya hai ki ab darr lagta hai ki agar mai use man ki baat bolunga to kahin mai phirse akela na rah jau. But still ek din maine use man ki baat bol hi di thi ànd aaj ho mere saath hai. Mujhe samajhti hai waise jaise shayad koi or nahi samajhta.

Anu smiled thinking that she should not have asked this question. But don't know why she asked it. It was the very first time that she wanted to know something about Anuj but didn't expected such a answer. She was in her thoughts when she heard from somewhere Annnuuujjjjjjj.

Anuj turned his head and a very big smile came on his face. A girl came running towards him. She was about to hug him but he denied saying "look at the place by buddy".

Lady: aap or aapke so called sanskaar. Uff!!

Anuj looked at Anupama thinking that she might be feeling awkward but to his surprise she smiled at him.

Anuj: Anupama meet Raunak. She is my

Raunak: his love....

Now this made Anupama realise that she is the one about whom Anuj was talking right now while answering about shaadi.

Anupama: Jai Shri Krishna

Raunak: Jai Shri Krishna

Anuj: So, ab what you are doing here? Aashirwaad liya Krishna ji ka?

Raunak: lungi lungi but aapke saath. Chalo jaldi I am also hungry ghar jake aapke haath ka dinner khaungi.

Anupama: Aap log jagiye mai yahi hmm.

Raunak: No Anu, please aap bhi chalo

Anu agreed. Three of them went again inside Mandir. Raunak closed her eyes while her dupatta fall off from her head. Anuj managed her duppatta and placed righlt on her head again. Anupama at this particular time opened her eyes and saw it.

She has no clue why this situation is making her uncomfortable. She is not at ease for the first time in her life. Even when she saw Kavya with Vanraaj she vever felt this deep effect on her. She was somewhere feeling sad. But don't know why and what this feeling is.

They all came out of the temple. Raunak was all set to go to Anuj's home.

Raunak: Anu aap bhi humare saath chalo na?

Anu: Nahi Raunak ji aap jayeye Anuj ke saath ( this tone Anuj has listened for the first time, a tone which shows disappointment)

Anuj: please Anupama chalo, kuch papers hai uspe tumhare sign chahiye wo bhi kar dena so that we can process things at the earliest.

Anu agreed, she don't know why but she did agreed. Soon that they all reached Anuj's home. Raunak hugged GK. Show now tightly hugged Anuj and he too reciprocated it. GK coughed reminding them that Anupama is here.

Raunak: Anuuuj, I am so hungry, please mere liye kuch bana Dona aap.

GK: Ruk mai banata hmm.

Anu: kaka mai help kar doon aapki?

Raunak: Ni ni mujhe sirf Anuj ke haath ka hi khana hai

Anuj: You don't know my dear, Anu mujhse bhi acha khana banati hai

Raunak: ohh really, then why not. But in that case GK aap mere pass baitho and let them cook for me.

Anu smiled faintly bit she was not happy seeing someone else so much close to Anuj. She has never felt this way in last 26 years. She then felt may she is stressed due to yesterday's drama at home. But she understand why the hell she is feeling this way.

Anu to herself: Kanha ji, ye kya or kyu ho raha hai mujhe, pata nahi kyu Anuj mere ache friend hai but pata nahi ye Raunak kaun hai, kyu aayi hai, kya ye Anuj ki wife hai ya inka pyaar..... But isse mujhe kyu farak pad raha hai.....

So I am ending it here since it is getting a bit long. Its Sunday. So thought of writing something. Please do tell me quickly 😜 if you want the second part I will right it quickly before tomorrow.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wld love to read the next part. Yaar u mentioned anu is getting restless bcoz of raunak here i am getting restless and angry on raunak more than anu 😤😤😅 i don't even want anyone to be in anuj's life other than anu even in fanfictions 😂😂🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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loved it..plz do continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice. Jealous and insecure Anu 😀👏🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I always wanted someone to write on this plot...glad that you did it👍🏼

Do continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So here comes the second part.

Anuj and Anu were cooking in the kitchen but his eyes were on Raunak. He is happy and lost too seeing her.

Raunak from the couch: Anuj mujhe nazar lag jayegi, itna mat dekhiye.

Anuj laughed from kitchen, agreeing to her.

Raunak and GK were gossiping where Anu and Anuj completed the cooking. Raunak held Anuj's hand and asked to come with her as she wants to show him something.

Anu sat on couch but her eyes were on both of them. Its completely visible on her face that she is not liking all this. She want to run away somewhere. Here, Ranunak came with a big packet in which there is a red bridal lahenga. Anuj is now super excited seeing it.

Ranunak: how is this? Aapko pasand aaaya? Agar aapko pasand nahi aaya to mai ye nahi pahnungi. Waise maine aapka bhi dress shaadi ke liye ready kiya hai. Use bhi dekhna but pahle ye dekho.

Anu is shocked listening to the word shaadi.

Anuj opened the duppatta and put it on Raunak's forehead. She was really looking beautiful. He kissed her forehead. Now this made Anu even more sad. She don't want to be there anymore. She can't take it unknowingly that what is this feeling of uneasiness. So she suddenly stood up and asked GK to leave. But is again stopped by Raunak. Anuj can see this restlessness. But is not saying anything because he know that it will make her more sad. Because this is the reality.

Raunak: Please Anu ji ruk jayiye na, kya mere hone se... I am sorry I should not be saying all this. I know about you ofcourse from the same source Anuj. But mujhe acha lagega agar aap dinner karoge humare saath.

Anu: Nahi nahi aisa nahi hai. Pilij aap aisa mat socho. Bas mai,... Matlab aaplog family hai na, I mean shayad hone ja rahe hai, to mai aapke moment kharab nahi karna chahti.

Now this statement confirmed that what Anu is thinking and why she was sad. She still stopped herself as she don't know what this feeling is. But somewhere Raunak understood it. So she took her hand and asked her to sit on couch. She told Anuj if he could bring some water for her.

In the meantime, while watching Anu, Anuj got the confirmation that what Anu might be thinking as he watched every moment of her, every gesture of her. But can't do anything as Raunak is here.

Raunak kept her hand on Anu's and thanked her for staying. She then started to open herself in front of Anu.

" Anu ji, aapko pata hai, I can feel your pain. Because mera bhi divorce huya hai. But it was 7 years back when I was just 24 years. I don't know much about the world and people. Meri puri duniya mera husband hi tha but after 2 month usne apne rang dikhaye and it was hell for me on this earth. If I am alive it was because of Anuj. Agar ye nahi hote to shayad mai aaj alive bhi nahi hoti. Inhone mujhe duniya ki wo har khushi di ho ek 31 years ki ladki soch bhi nahi sakti. He put the whole world in my feet. Actually mai inki real sister nahi hmm muh boli hmm. Inhe mai bhagti hmm road pe mili thi. I lost my confidence, my smile, I was scared. He embraced me with all the love and treated me like a daughter. He is my brother, father figure like. But pura sanskaro se bhare huye hai ye."

Anuj was listening all this. He gave her water as she has tears in her eyes. Raunak continued,

" Anuj, meri family hai, sach bolu to Anuj to mai inko tease karne ke liye bolto hmm but he is my brother. Anuj bhaiya. I love him and he loved me too."

Now this bhaiya word was like oxygen for Anu. She smiled ear to ear.

Anu: Haan aapke bhaiya bahut ache hai.

Raunak looked at Anuj and asked: Bhaiya, kya ye wahi Anupama hai na?

Anuj fumbled and was like please chup ho ja: what do you mean? I said shup up now. And tu apni shaadi pe dhyan de. Bas khana kha or so ja. I don't want anymore discussion. Remember, kal subah hoke puja karni hoti hai mujhe and kal tujhe bhi.

Raunak: mai sab samjh gayi, aap or aapke sanskar. Anu aapko pata hai even in US he was single because he loved someone in India. I mean seriously. Kaun itna loyal hota hai.

Anu laughed. Seeing her like that he is at ease. But Raunak understood that Anu is the one for whom he was yearning for 26 years. Raunak asked them if they will help her to get ready for shaadi and asked to give high five. She was not even in the game as she pulled her hands away. Anuj put his hand on Anu's. He was about to pull off but Anu grabbed it.

Anuj: tum thik ho?

Anu: Han bhi or nahi bhi.

Anuj was anxious ki what happened. Anu looked at his eyes and asked " if it is okay to be like this for sometimes? I know ki hum sirf dost hai but please."

Anuj: Mujhe kuch batana hai. Bol doon

Anu: Nahi, mujhe pata hai ki aapke dill me aaj bhi mere liye jagah hai. Aap abhi bhi mujhse...

She cannot say the word

Anuj: I am sorry, I don't mean to offend you. Tum bhul jao ki mai exist bhi karta hmm.

Anu: kaise bhul jao ki Aap ho mere liye. Humesha and hamesha rahoge. Aap chaho to hath chhod do.

Anuj: I wish I could. Maine chhodne ke liye nahi pakda hai. Shayad marne ke baad hi ab ye saath chhut payega.

Raunak coughed and said, " lagta hai ki do do mandap lagwane honge meri shaadi me, kyu GK.?

That's all. Please spare my misses. I know maine jaldi jaldi likha hai so, may be gadbad huyi hai. But pasand aaye to do tell me and critics are welcome.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I want third part plz cont next part soon

Edited by SAMEERA008 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAMEERA008

I want second part plz cont next part soon

Already did dear.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Give us the next part pls.😍🤗 and it was not only like oxygen for anu T'was for me too 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Good story... Loved the first part.

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