Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 13

OMG!! Loved it!! This series is right up my alley! Haha the inneuendos were just 😂. Not much action but full of innuendoes. The ride was one hell of a ride and the fabricated sorry was 😂😂😂. Lol Champak Khadanahihota😂😂. Raavi got her perfect revenge for the way he bothered her by teaching her how to ride😂😂

🤣🤣OMG👏👏…2nd part is hilarious🤣

Shiva story🤣🤣 and Raavi’s noise making skills🔥🔥🔥🥰

Can’t wait for your next update

Story tag the wrong person

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

one more torture coz she wasnt affected as he is right now........

Oh she was! She very much was! ☺️

But I think Raavi’s torture stems more from emotional longing than sexual longing. They’re both halfway there. All it needs is a little push! 😆

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Ohh My My

Tabahi

Freaking amazing ❤️

Tabahi?? 😒
Thank you though!! 😳❤️

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie, Love, This was amazing.🤗 I have never laughed this much over a FF and my mother looked like I was crazy🤪 You surely made my day with this one.😆 Waiting for more~❤️

Awww thank you soo soo much!!

I think making people laugh is the hardest (no pun intended 😆) thing to do! Especially in writing. In the visual medium you have the advantage of watching funny situations as they arise but in writing you have to use words and readers have to use their imagination. It’s terribly difficult and I have always admired writers that could do that. I’m glad you thought my writing was good enough to evoke laughter!

Thanks for reading, love! 🤗

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

This had me in splits 😂

I had such a hard time controlling my laughter !

First Shiva's story and then the parsi lady and then the noises

Too good dude❤️

Thank you! And why control? 😳 Laugh often- loudly and freely! 🤗
My day is made if I’ve made people laugh! That’s my good deed of the day all done! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

this was really hott.............. 🥰😍reading your content is always a treat

Thank you for reading and your kind words of appreciation! I treasure every one of them! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Chandkatukda

Oh my gawd

The story and that champak khadanahihota

Hilarious 🤣

Yes that’s inspired from my original story where the guy was called Losercantgetitup! It translates rather well in Hindi, don’t you think? 😆

Thanks for reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

I am mindblown seeing your creativity! Itna acha kaise likhti ho yaar!

I liked this one even better than previous one.

Loved the part where the woman was so engrossed in his fake love story🤣

Wow! This is high praise indeed! Thank you! I’m humbled! ❤️

When I started writing this one I felt it wasn’t as funny as the previous one. So I’m glad you felt this was better!

You know I’ve been writing my original story for over a year now and I have like 3 readers! 😆

So having you all read and comment here is a true validation for my writing skills! ❤️

Thank you again from the bottom of my heart! 🤗