Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 4

few lines in this story and had to comment.......wish they had commenting system like wattpad........whichever sentence u like u can comment......

boy is he teaching bike ride or some other ride🤣.......ready wet come crash and straddle 🤣 ye to apni gang ka hai......tharki number one🤣☺️

This is so good like too good ☺️

Innuendos are some of my most favorite things to read! I guess I can blame the internet for ruining me forever 😆

This was a very pleasant, pleasant surprise. You write so well, especially when it comes to the double-meaning jokes. I would love to read more such stuff from you, or anything that you would write tbh!

I thoroughly enjoyed this ❤️

I read it… Its beautiful… the way you twisted the words of driving to give then sexual innuendo… it s marvelous… looking forward to read more of your work…

oh some devil he is.....i was ☺️ and 🤣 at the same time.......

u r master of this😆 aapke charan kahan hai devi......i am a fan.....

he is so incorrigible.....but fir he would say perfection ko improve nahi kar sakte🤣

size doesnt matter🤣 does it or does it not?🤣 sorry.......right now my mind is in gutter with both of dem............thinking, writing i dont know what......sorry.........

talent chahiye to incorporate the bike riding lessons to riding something else lessons.........👍🏼👏....waise he tested the waters before trying anything🤣.....dobi remains dobi for some time

only point was it ended soon........loved it would be an understatement

Originally posted by: Kfof

Oh my goddd!!!!🤣🤣

This was hillarious plus awesome❤❤❤🔥

Loved it😍❤

Thank you! I’m happy you found it funny! 😆

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

This was so funny 🤣

Well written 👍🏼

I was expecting a practical on barren land ☺️🤣

Erm .. practical on what?? 🤓 😆

Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Oh my god this one is too much for me😳

Shiva and his lines... I can't stop laughing and the whole scenario 👏 it's a masterpiece loved it a lot☺️

Thanks so much, am so glad you found it a fun read! ❤️

Originally posted by: anshika5103

BEST!!🤣 Oh godd one of the best flirting I have read so far❤️ awesomee make more like this you are too good❤️

Thanks a lot! But they weren’t actually flirting, Shiva was teasing a clueless Raavi for the most bit! 😆

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Awww this is too good! Naughty, teasing Shiva and dobi Raavi 😆

Each and every innuendo was super creative 👏

I loved it!! ❤️

Thank you! I had actually made a list of all possible bike innuendos and there were so many that I had to rule some out! 😆

Didn’t want Raavi to seem too much of a dobi! 😆

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

This was toooooo good! I love it! 🤣

Special shout-out to you for being able to come up with such a masterpiece. I’ll take lots more of this Shiva please! ☺️

Aww thank you so much for the superlative words! ❤️

It was actually not that hard (pun not intended 🤣) once I got going. Raavi dug herself into quite a hole there with her first comment and Shiva just went with it! I like this Shiva too! 😳 I’ll take him as well! 😆