Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 2

Guys, the first OS is up.

Just tagging few people! 😳

This was so funny 🤣

Well written 👍🏼

I was expecting a practical on barren land ☺️🤣

Lmao! I wasn’t expecting this 🤣 This is freakin hilarious! Shiva is so naughty - the little devil! 😆 I love how playful and bold you have made him here.

Raavi, being a cute little dobi, and then realising she is being played was awesome!

I loved all the innuendos and sheer effort Shiva put in to insert them in bike lessons 😆 Keep em coming! I am totally greedy for more!

Oh my god this one is too much for me😳

Shiva and his lines... I can't stop laughing and the whole scenario 👏 it's a masterpiece loved it a lot☺️

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Lmao! I wasn’t expecting this 🤣 This is freakin hilarious! Shiva is so naughty - the little devil! 😆 I love how playful and bold you have made him here.

Raavi, being a cute little dobi, and then realising she is being played was awesome!

I loved all the innuendos and sheer effort Shiva put in to insert them in bike lessons 😆 Keep em coming! I am totally greedy for more!

That effort was all mine! 😎😆

But yeah, this started out as being really cute and Raavi actually getting a lesson and having a sucessful first ride, but I guess my head has been in the gutter lately and this is the way it finally went!

I'm not sure Shiva in canon would have been so diabolically naughty though, but I just couldn't resist! 😆

He would have been naughtier if this was a web series 😆 But ITV and it’s restrictions 🤔

You are really getting a hang of the characters and doing a wonderful job! What’s the next one in the pipeline? I am already greedy for more ❤️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

That effort was all mine! 😎😆

But yeah, this started out as being really cute and Raavi actually getting a lesson and having a sucessful first ride, but I guess my head has been in the gutter lately and this is the way it finally went!

I'm not sure Shiva in canon would have been so diabolically naughty though, but I just couldn't resist! 😆

BEST!!🤣 Oh godd one of the best flirting I have read so far❤️ awesomee make more like this you are too good❤️

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

He would have been naughtier if this was a web series 😆 But ITV and it’s restrictions 🤔

You are really getting a hang of the characters and doing a wonderful job! What’s the next one in the pipeline? I am already greedy for more ❤️

Ahh okay, glad to know I got that right then!

He's naughty enough on Lizzie TV! No censorship here! 😆

I'm really pleased to know I got the characters right and owe you huge thanks for that! 😳

Idk what's next. I want to explore all my favorite romantic tropes - fake married, or fake dating, sharing a hotel room with only one bed, making each other jealous, oh and so many more... Let's see how many I actually get to! I want to keep this light-hearted though. No angst this time!

Oh My My My World!

I was grinning throughout like a bozzo.

This was terrific!

Epic Dobi Raavi.

I thought I could keep the laugh to myself but the 'magic button' had me.

☺️☺️🤣

Lizzie TV is becoming bolder by the day 😆 I am loving it. Why don’t you also explore Wattpad? It’s not going to be too different from here, but since you are writing on popular couples now, you could developed a nice fan base there.

No thanks required 🤗It was my pleasure.

Oh wow! I am interested in all of these! 🤩 Try a bit of scary fiction na. For instance, PS during Covid was shooting in a haveli. They had a bhoot wala track (that ended badly with Dhara beating up the pranksters), but it was fun while it lasted. Shiva and Krish were trying to scare a newly married stuck up Rishita. It was good fun 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ahh okay, glad to know I got that right then!

He's naughty enough on Lizzie TV! No censorship here! 😆

I'm really pleased to know I got the characters right and owe you huge thanks for that! 😳

Idk what's next. I want to explore all my favorite romantic tropes - fake married, or fake dating, sharing a hotel room with only one bed, making each other jealous, oh and so many more... Let's see how many I actually get to! I want to keep this light-hearted though. No angst this time!