Hey guys this idea of the story stuck me when i ws watching the episode in which Dhara felt dropping blood. So i decided to mould it in my own way.
Please bear me with this and give suggestions so that i can improve.
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Dhara feels blood dripping down from her she runs towards her room and checks and cries and than gaumbi arrives and she hugs him crying Gaumbi contacts the doctor (scene is just like the show ). Raavi who had come with glass of water and medicines for dhara stood their stunned after hearing that. She went to dhara and gaumbi and said,
"Dhara dii app tension mat lo kuch nahi hoga hum chlenge na kal doctor ke pass app bas stress mat lo aur rona band karo yeh lo dawai lo"
Dhara nodded and took the medicine from her than Raavi was about to leave but gaumbi stopped her and said,
"Raavi kisi ko mat batana please jab tak hum doctor ke paas nahi jate please"
Raavi nods and leaves.
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IN MORNING
Dhara was feeling uneasy which didn't went unnoticed by Raavi and she said,
"Dii calm down kuch nahi hoga main gaumbi hum sab hain apke saath"
"Raavi mujhe na bhut daar lag raha tu mere saath chalegi Gaumbi ko kuch kaam hai vo directly hospital paunche ge"
Dhara says and agrees happily. Later Raavi completes all the household work quickly and gets ready she was also tensed and Shiva saw this he asked her when she was alone in kitchen,
"Tujhe kya hua hai tension mein lag rahi hai "
"Nahi kuch nahi bass dhara dii ko hospital lae kar jana hai"
Raavi replied
"Hospital kya hua bhabhi ko....... Dhara bh.a............ "
Raavi stops Shiva and says
"Arre nahi kuch nahi bass routine check up"
Shiva calms down and Raavi assures him by blinking her eyes.
Dhara and raavi leave for hospital.
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IN HOSPITAL,
Doctor tells dhara to do some test raavi waits in the doctor cabin meanwhile gaumbi reaches their to raavi and asks,
"Sab theek hai Raavi.. "
Gaumbi panicked and Raavi replies
"Gaumbi test krne gaye hai vo log aate honge app tension mat lo sab theek hoga"
Doctor arrives with numb dhara raavi reaches to dhara and make her sit and doctor says ,
"Please meri baat aaram se suniye app log,
Dhara ki body bhut weak hai abhi tkk toh embryo theek hai par proper nutrition nahi hai aur agar aisa hi chalta raha toh embryo dead ho jayenga"
Gaumbi gets startled by this and says,
"Toh kya kare doctor"
"Hamare paas do raaste hain ikk yeh kii aap baby pehle hi abort krr de par iske baad aap parents nahi ban paige, aur agar abort nahi krte hain toh at last miscarriage ho hi jayega dusra option kio na app ikk surrogate mather dhunde taki hum yrh embryo dhara ki body se nikal ke unki body mein implant krde"
Doctor said gaumbi and dhara looked at each other and said
"Option 2 apnayenge"
Doctor then retorts,
"Surrogate mother dhundhna easy nahi hai atleast 2 week lagg jayenge prr dhara 2 week tkk child bear nahi krr skti aur agar mil bhi gayi toh money demad bhut hai app log nahi krr parnge toh koii known mein agar ladki mile toh acha hai"
Dhara cried miserably and gaumbi also was tensed sad and consoling dhara Raavi looked at the scene and each word was ringing in her mind she moved towards doctor and asked,
"Minimum age kya ho skti hain legally surrogate mother ban ne ki"
"21"
"Agar family mein se ho toh legalities jaldi ho jayengi"
"Ha infact bhut jaldi sirf consent form lagega"
Then raavi looks at dhara and gaumbi and goes to them and say,
"Dhara dii gaumbi app mujh par bharosa krte ho"
They nod unable to process why she is asking such thing at this time Raavi continue to speak by looking towards Gaura and holding their hands,
"Doctor main dhara aur gaumbi ki surrogate mother banne ke liye tyaar hu"
Gaura are taken aback and Gaumbi said,
"Raavi beta tu janti hai na kya bol rahi hai. "
Raavi nods
"Dhara tu kaise karegi rehne de..... "
Dhara speaks and raavi cutts her and says,
"Dhara dii app logon ne kaha na ke app mujhe trust krte ho aur abhi yehi sab se convenient way hai agar app mere ilawa kisi aur ko bana na chahte hai toh app bata dijiye"
"Raavi thank you beta...... "
Dhara says and hugs her crying bitterly. Gaymbi caress her head and says,
"Tune yeh keh kar na yeh bata diya kii tu hum sab se kitna pyaar krti Raavi "
"Agar app log ready hain toh kya main Raavi ke test lae skti hu taki yeh dekh saku ki yeh child bear krr skti hai"
Doctor took raavi for test and came back and said,
"Test lae liye hai kal report aa jayengi, raavi app married hai"
"Yes doc"raavi replied
"Toh app kal apne husband ko le aaye kio kii agar reprts approve hoti hai toh consent main unke signature lagege"
Raavi was unsure as Shiva she thought shiva is busy in his second to be wife. She looks at Gaura and realises they are really happy by this so she can't ruin it so she just nods to doctor and they all leave.
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AT HOME,
They reach by evening. Gaura have decided to not tell anyone except Shiva untill the final reports come.
"Raavi main dukan jaata hu"
Saying this gaumbi leaves, Raavi and Dhara went inside and indulge in daily household chores.
Shiva was working in the shop Gaumbi went in and handed the shop to Kaka and took shiva with him in store room and said
"Shiva main raavi dhara ko lekar doctor ke paas gaye the"
"Ha gaumbi Raavi ne bataya tha kaisa hai sab theek hai"shiva retorted
Gaumbi narrated him whole story Shiva felt like crying first then shocked about Raavi's decision.
"Gaumbi par Raavi ke liye yeh safe hai"
Shiva inquired and Gaumbi replied
"Test liye hai kal result aayega toh tujhe uske saath kal jana hai aur agar sab positive hua toh consent par sign krne hai"
Saying this gaumbi leaves and Shuva kept on thinking about the whole scenario he was not able to digest this as how can she agree to this big deal.
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IN HOUSE DURING NiGHT,
Shiva entered the house hurriedly as he needed to talk to Raavi but than he came across a very surreal sight in front of him Krisha was writing something while Raavi was feeding him.
"Arree Bhabhi khane ka time nahi hai apko pta na vo professor Shah agar kal submit nahi kii file toh mujhe maar dega"krish said
"Acha chal main khilati hoon, agar khayenga nahi na toh kaam kaise krenga aur handwriting dekh apni agar professor Shah ko aisa kaam diya na toh bhi jaan se maar dega iss liye kehte hai sab tym se compleye kiya kar kaam par tera dhyan toh sara din sharaton mein rehta hai"
Raavi said and feed him morsel meanwhile and at the end hit his head. Than Krish dramatically said,
"Bhabhi app na shiva jaisi banti ja rahi ho mujhe marti hi rehti ho. "
Before she could retort Shiva's phone rang and their attention shift to him Raavi was done feeding Krish so she went to kitchen back. Shiva attended the call and went to kitchen to talk to her. And said
"Raavi tujhse baat karni hai"
"Gaumbi ne sab bata diya hoga tujhe" Raavi replied
"Ha tu soch samajhkar krr rahi hai na yeh sab bhut badi jimedari hai yeh"
"Delh Shiva dhara dii aur gaumbi bhut pareshan the aur main unhe nahi dekh sakti aise toh uss samay jo sahi lgga maine vo kiya aur yehi convenient option hai abortion nahi krana, surrogate mother dhundne mein tum jayega bhut der ho jayegi aur fir paiso ka arrangement sab bhut mahenga pad jayega aur dhara dii aur baby dono ke liye risky hai"
"Raavi par tu kaise......... "
"Dekh Shiva agar test sab sahi hote hai toh main promise karti hu main baby ka bhut khayal rakhungi, pkka
Baki rahi baat legalities ki toh abhi hum kal jayenge mujhe pta tujhe mere saath jane mein koii interest nahi hoga par agar jaroori nahi hota toh main adjust krr leti bss kal ka din chal pad ..... Please"
Shiva was taken aback by her decision but than got upset about that he is going to get divorced eith her and how could she think he is not interested in going with her. It ia a very crucial decision for them for their family he says,
"Raavi kal tyaar rehna hum jayenge, ikk baat puchu tujhse tu yeh janti hai kii hamara divorce ho raha hai tu phir bhi kar rahi hai yeh kioo....."
"Abhi hua nahi hai Shiva"
Raavi says and goes out leaving behind confused Shiva.
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IN MORNING,
Shivi went to hospital and waiting for results to come. Raavi was bit tensed she instinctually hold Shiva's hand and Shiva asked her,
"Tu sure hai na Raavi, tu backout kar sakti hai hum koii air alternaye dhundh lenge"
Raavi just squeezed his hand and blinked her eyes in assurance. Doctor arrived and started analysing the report after sometimes she said,
"Aap ki reports bilkul perfect hai aap surrogate mother ban skti hai"
Raavi gets elated and furthee doctor asked,
"Vese appke mensturation sahi tym par aate hai"
"Yes doctor"
Doctor says,
"Okay i mean app dono ne yeh decision soch samajh ke liya hai, i mean yeh bhut hi important decision hai apki life ka. So..... "
Shiva asks raavi,
"Raavi ikk baar fir soch le....... "
Raavi replies
"Shiva Dhara dii aur gaumbi bhut tym se taane sun rahe hai aur dhara dii bhut ro rahi thi kal mujhe unke liye yeh krna hai vo....... "
Shiva was astonished on Raavi but retorted and said,
"Raavi, emotional ho kar mat soch ikk baar dimag lga ke soch tu child bearing kar payengi, Tujhe sab kuch chodna padega iss tym ke liye soch le, humara divorce bhi hi raha hai "
"Sab kuch toh chuth raha hai Shiva agge kuch nahi bachega aur maine vaise bhi Gaumbi aur Dhara dii kii bezzati bhi kii thi janmaashtami main par unhone mujhe kuch nahi kaha main unke ke liye jo bhi kar saku kam hai ..........doctor hum tyaar hai "
"Okay than app Dhara Pandya aur gautam Pandya ko bula lijeye ajj legal work hoga aur kal transplant krr denge par apko precautions lene honge vo main apko batugi Ikk baar biological parents aa jaye"
Shiva gets teary eyed and thinks about how many times his family has insulted her did wrong to her but still she is guilty for that thing, really and her devotion towards bhai bhabhi is far more than anyone. He vows to help her with this state but their divorce.. . .. . .. . .
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GAUMBI AND DHARA ARRIVED,
They came and hugged Raavi and were waiting waiting room for lawyer to arrive.Dhara takes shiva to one side and says,
"Shiva mat le divorce please vo dekh kya karne ja rahi hai hamare liye kya koii aur ladki kar payengi, Maa jusse marji ke aaye koii bhi ladki Raavi ki jagah nahi lae payengi tumahara divorce hone ke bawajood wo ghar aayi hai aur ab yeh kar rahi hai ikk baar soch le , Uska chehra dekh kaise murjhaya hua hai usse tu chahiye tera support chahiye ikk baar soch le"
Lawyer arrives and everyone read the contract lawyer recites everything and ask Raavi to sign. She does the same and then lawyer asks her
"whom is going to sign in place of her guardian, Raavi"
"Shiva sign karega toh guardian kii jaroorat nahi padegi na sir"
"Shiva aur tumhara divorce case main janta hoon aur mujhe pata hai kii tumhari hearing parso hain toh agar Shiva sign karega lefal issues honge kuch tym ke baad vo tumhara husband nahi rahega toh yeh papers invalid hi jayenge, iss liye guardian hona jaroori hai"
Raavi gets teary eyed hearing about her relationship but she masks her emotion and says,
"Phir kise bulaye..... Koii aur toh nahi hai massi maa sign nahi krengi mausa paa hai nahi aur anita dii legally nahi krr skte toh kya kare... "
Dhara and gaumbi also looked tensed.Raavi now looks at Shiva who is sitting numb she feels more broken as he is determined to give her divorce.
"Kya kare phir"
Gaumbi says eyeing Shiva. Shiva suddenly grabs the pen and signs the papers in place of husband.
Everyone gets stunned on this and Raavi says,
"Kya kiya Shiva legal issue ho jayega papers dubara tyaar krwane mein tym jayega tu kya krta hai............ "
"Shiva tu yeh...... " Lawyer says
"Legal issue tab hoga jab main divorce dunga......... Toh main sign krr skta hoon"
Gaura gets elated hearing this lawyer also winds the paper and took Gaura woth them to discuss clauses here Raavi is crying silently after all this and says....................
To be continued
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Part 2 will be out soon and hope you all liked it.Thanks for bearing me and please give suggestions on the same .
Yours,
ODETTE_DELUSION
PART-II
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159222404
PART-III
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159253932
PART-IV
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159277425
PART-V
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159349552
PART-VI
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159365077
PART-VII
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