SURROGACY AND HEALING RELATIONS (PART-VII pg 15) updated 27/2 - Page 8

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Nicely written

💕🥰Lovely ending to a beautiful story

Love the song choice ….Suno Chanda”….season 1 was amazing

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

💕🥰Lovely ending to a beautiful story

Love the song choice ….Suno Chanda”….season 1 was amazing

Update soon. Eagerly waiting for it. 😊

Bub i have finished the story by uploading the last part............... But if you have any idea you can share i can update a new chapter on that basis........ 😊☺😇

Originally posted by: virangna2005

really.....what a coincedence.........😘😘

I guess I haven't read it till not......but will like to read it.......please do tell me the name when you recall it🤗

Hey! I got the story. It is yaadein by sillysatchel. I couldn't find it in her index on India forums but I follow her on Wattpad too.

If you want to read her id is - @spellboundsatchel

I really love this song tq so much for putting this song

AUTHOR'S NOTE

Guys i am going to update a bonus chapter for this story........

It will be out soon.......

If you all have some suggestions about the same do mention😇

PART-VII

"Raavi kitna tym lagayegi........ "

Saying this shiva barged in the room and sees his wife struggling with the saree. He turns and says,

"Ae chipkali darwaza band krr ke change krte hai......... Kitni baar tujhe bola hai maine itna tym ho gaya hume saath mein rehte huye aur tu....... "

Raavi huffs and sits on the bed and says,

"Ikk toh Yeh saree adjust nahi ho rahi aur upar se tu mujhe daant raha hai...... Mere haath dukhne lagg gaye hai.......... "

Shiva sighs and a cute smile adorns his face and he comes forward in front of her holding her hands,

"Kuch nahi badla na.......15 saal ho gaye aur tu abhi bhi bachi hi hai......chotti chotti baat par rone lagti hain.......Laa main help karta hoon..........."

Shiva than settle her pleats and raavi looks at him adoringly and says,

"Sach mein kuch bahi badla tu ajj bhi mere liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai.........

Duniya ke liye tu hai ikkdum akdu par mere liye toh tu ikk dum soft ban jata hai............."

Raavi cups his face and shiva joins there forehead and says,

"15 saal ho yaan 50 main toh aisa hi rahunga......... "

He was about to kiss her when she puts her habd on his lips and says,

"Jana nahi hai kya......... Late ho jayenge itna important din hai ajj toh......... "

Shiva huffs in annoyance but than he says,

"Haa chal sab wait kar rahe hai....... "

Shivi comes outside and are welcomed by little Tara(gaura's daughter) and aayan (devta's son).

Both of them came running to tgem and Shiva pick them and aayan says,

"Chachu chachi............ Chale mujhe bhi didi aur bhaiya se milna hai..... "

Shiva nods and rishita says,

"Shiva Raavi tum dono ke liye ajj itna important din hai bache wait kar rahe honge jayo........."

Raavi says,

"Haan bass chalte hain..... Rishita maa kahan hai....... "

Maa comes with gaura and says,

"Ae raavi beta........kitne ache lag rahe ho dono....... "

Shivi came and take there blessing and suman says,

"Bhagwaan tumhari har icha puri kare......... "

Shivi smile and raavi says,

"Chal Bhootnath tym dekh.....kitna late krwa diya..........."

Shiva retorts,

"Acha main tym dekhu jo tu do ghate se tyaar ho rahi thi uska kya......

Aur itna tym lagane ke baad bhi lag toh chipkali hi rahi hai na tu...... "

Raavi was about to retort when shiva says,

"Vese acha hi hai yeh make up thop liya nahi toh bina make up ke tujhe dekh kar mere bache daar jaate..... "

Raavi says,

"Tu ruk....... "

And starts running behind him in aangan teasing each other and than Gaura catch hold of them and says,

"Itne bade ho gaye phir bhi ladna nahi choda dono ne......... Chalo niklo yahan se aur pauncho venue........ Nahi toh na ajj late huye toh tumhare raaj dulare tumhe nahi chodege........ Vese bhi mama mami kafi wait kar rahi hai unka call bhi aaya........ "

Raavi and shiva shoot daggers at each other and say in unison,

"Baad mein dekhta/dekhti hoon..... "

And everyone laugh and both of them smile sheepishly and sat on there bike and drove off to the venue.

Raavi and Shiva reached and are welcomed by a pissed off prafulla and the moment prafulla saw both of them she scolds them,

"Kahan the dono..... Bache kab se intezaar kar rahe hai......... Aur baki sab kahan hai.......... Raavi beta chal kafi kaam hai....... Tyaariyan dekhni hai "

Mama comes there and says,

"Aa gaye dono chalo ikk baar dekh lo sab theek hain ki nahi......... Vese maine kar diya hai sab kuch.... "

Shivi says,

"Saans toh lo dono...... "

Than they took there blessings and prafulla keep her hand on both there heads and says,

"Itni mushkilon se nikal kar tum dono ko apni khushi mil hi gayi....... Logon ne kitne taane diye par tum logon ko apni khushiyon ka hissa mil hi gya......... "

A lone tear fell from her eyes and mama says by keeping hand on shiva's shoulder,

"Meri beti ko jitne taane mile, jitne bhi logon ne bola unn sab nein tune uska saath diya........ Ajj bhi main khush hoon ki tu meri bachi ki jindagi mein aaya.......... "

Shivi look at each other and than at mama and mami before they could say something all kids came running towards them and shouting,

"Party....... Party...... Party..... "

Raavi than says,

"Dekho aa gaye baki sab bhi......chalo bacho abb aur intezaar nahi........nachege gaenge aur khaenge........."

All of them gather at the hall where was a big cake in the center and a big hoarding written.....

"FIVE YEARS OF TOGETHERNESS"

" SHIVI'S PARADISE "

All the kids shouted,

"Thank you......... "

One kid comes and give rose to shivi,

"Thank you hume ghar dene ke liye......... "

Other says,

"Thank you hume pyaar dene ke liye........ "

A little girl says,

"Thank you mere mom dad banane ke liye........ "

Shivi peck the girls cheeks.

Raavi looks at shiva teary eyed and shiva puts and hand around her shoulder and says,

"Humne kar diya Raavi...... Humne hamara ghar bana liye..... Humne apni family complete kar lii....... Humne inn sabhi bacho ko ghar de diya........ "

Yes they have opened an orphanage which has completed 5 years today.

Raavi says,

"Itne saal hum ikk bache ko lekar rote rahe ..........sab logon ne itni batein sunayi.........par abb dekho..... Hamare itne sare bache hai kii koii hume kuch keh dikhaye........ "

Shiva chuckles and Kids drag shivi towards cake and they cut the cake, partied had fun played games and spend the day well.

All the family was hell emotional and at the same time happy as finally Shivi has made there own happy world away from all the norms and standards made by the society they have made connection to the children's heart.

After partying all day long.. . .. .

Shivi distributed gifts to the kids and all of them retired to there Bunker bed room biding a good bye.

All the family also left and mama mami stayed in the orphanage itself as they are the main caretakers of the kids when shivi are not present.

After returning home everyone retired to there rooms.

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IN SHIVI'S ROOM,

Raavi was sitting on bed after changing into her night suit and Shiva came inside after changing his clothes and lays down on the bed, and than raavi comes and lay down next to him hugging him. Shiva puts his arm around her and raavi says,

"5 saal kaise beet gaye pata hi nahi laga na........

10 saal logon ke taane sunte sunte nikal gaye.... Hum agar khush rehne ki koshish bhi karte toh sab log koii kasar nahi chodte the hume yaad dilane ki.... Ki hum parents nahi ban sakte.... "

Her voice broke at end and Shiva also gets teary eyed and says,

"Bhut kuch bola na sab ne raavi par dekh somnaath ne hume hamari khushiyaan de hi di......."

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FLASHBACK STARTS,

It has been one year since shivi knew that they can't be parents. They were sad about the fact but were trying to stay happy.

They masked there sorrow as the family had Tara.

Tara loved to stay with shivi a lot she used crawl upto there room when no one watching her and roam around raavi when she was working.

Raavi loved tara a lot and all the family members were now more than happy as rishita was also pregnant.

Shivi were immensely happy and were almost engrossed in taking care of the family so they kept the sorrow aside and tried to move forward.

It was rishita's eight month when they organised baby shower for her.

Raavi was running here and there making arrangements feeding rishita and tara. It was shivi's turn to perform the ritual.All the ladies around were observing and one of them said to raavi between the rituals,

"Raavi beta abb tu bhi suna khushkhabari...... "

Raavi just passed a little smile to her and other said,

"Yeh kya bol rahi ho suna hai kii abb raavi maa nahi ban sakti.........

Ikk bacha kiya vo bhi dhara aur gaumbi ka..........

Aur toh aur rishita ke aas paas bhi ghum rahi hai tu banjh aurton (sterile women) ka saya bhi nahi padna chahiye garbhvati par varna toh apshagun hi hota hai.........

Aur upar se rasme bhi kar rahi ho suman ben socho zara........

Abhi shiva jawaan hai koii bhi mil jayegi..........

Baki tum sayani ho..... "

Raavi looked at her teary eyed but shiva looks at raavi and gave her assuring look, so raavi calmed and shiva gripped her hand,they were about to do the ritual but suman says,

"Raavi beta abhi nahi baad mein kar lena rasam..........

Abhi tyaariyan dekh le baki sari..... "

Raavi understood that suman is indirectly stopping her to do the ritual and she feels bad but without saying anything she nods and not making eye contact with anyone she went from there to kitchen she had tears in her eyes. She reached the kitchen rested her hands on the platform and She breathed heavily, tears flowing from her eyes and silent sobs were escaping from her mouth.

Meanwhile outside Shiva looks at suman angrily as what people say doesn't matter to him but what his family members say does matter he do not wanted to create a scene so he also moves but suman says,

"Shiva tu rasam puri karke jaa...... "

He without answeribg turned to leave but he saw rishita's expectant eyes so in order to not spoil her mood he does the ritual and gives her a gift and says,

"Yeh meri taraf se........ Aur yeh raavi ki taraf se.......... Jab se usse pata lgga hai na ki god bharai ka function hai usbe pura bazaar ghumaya hai mujhe yeh pendant dhundne ke liye jo apko chahiya tha........... (It was a set of tgree pendandts 2 for parents and 1 for baby) 2 din paglon ki tarah dhundha tab jaa ke mila.......

Congrats bhabhi....... "

He hugs her and than looks at suman and nods his head impossibly and goes.

He enters the kitchen and sees a sobbing raavi.

She was sniffling her back was facing Shiva he goes and hugs her from behind by encircling his arm around her shoulder flushibg her back in his chest. Raavi feels him and leans in his embrace and cries more. Shiva also sobs with her as this was his fear they both has masked their sorrow but all the people just kept on pricking there wounds. Raavi says,

"Shiva main tere liye kitni unlucky hoon na......... Pehle shaadi marji se nahi huyi aur abb jab shaadi ko accept kiya toh...... Toh aulad nahi de sakti main tujhe...........Main......main kaisi hoon na tu nere liye sab khushiyaan dhunta hai aur main tujhe kuch bhi nahi de sakti......... Teri jindagi kharab karne ke ilava...... Main itni incomplete kio hoon.........."

Raavi's voice cracked at last Shiva still in the same position says crying,

"Khabardaar agar aisa socha bhi toh............. Tu hi neri duniya hai raavi........ Jab koyi mujhe nahi samjhta tab tu hoti hai mere paas jo bina kuch kahe jaan jati hain....... Aur tu..... Tu incomplete kaise huyi tu toh mujhe compleye karti hai na.......... "

His words also cracked at last. He places his head at crook of her neck his hot tears made contact with her skin and she turns and hugs him tighter and mumbles i love you and shiva's grip tighten on her both cried.

TIME FLIES.......

It has been 7 years of their marraige they both had tried a lot of time to have a baby but in vain as one time when raavi got pregnant she was adviced by the doctor to abort the child in intial month only or if she continue to bear a child the poison will spread in her body and moreover the baby will not survive and will die soon.

With a heavy heart Shivi agreed for termination. Suman was not happy with the decision as she wanted shiva's heir so she spewd venom to Raavi also but shiva was always in her support and had shut suman a lot of times and finally when all this fiasco happened he made clear suman about not taunting raavi or she will be also left with her three heir's only...........after that they had a emotional breakdown and than finally suman stopped taunting to raavi rather she made sure that she pampers her a lot and treated her like a little bean just like tara and aayan.

TIME GOES BY..........

One such fine day raavi and shiva came out to have a bike ride and spend some time as they both had now accepted that trying and crying will bear them nothing. Yes they will always have a soft corner and a very emotional side for this part of there life but if they are together they will cope up and after a lot of years they were back to normal bickering and teasing and accompanying the bacha party of the house. Even the kids of the house were often seen in shivi's room playing with raavi or accompanying shiva to the store and wandering around.

When they sat near the somnaath bridge they started talking and raavi places her head on his shoulder and shiva keeps his arms around her waist and both were enjoying the sunset.

When they heard some noices and saw some children hiding behind the rock and whispeeing fear evident on there face. Shivi looked at each other and than went near them and asked,

"App log aise..... "

The children shhushed them and said,

"Dheere bolo please..... Yeh log hume lae jaenge....... "

Shiva asks,

"Kon log........ "

One of the children says,

"Hum log pehle ikk orphanage mein the vahan ke owner ki death ho gayi aur hamara orphanage sold ho gaya wahan kuch log aaye aur unhone hume kaha ki vo hume lekar jayenge duste orphanage par unhone hume ikk gang ko de diya jo humse bheekh mangvate hai..........

Hum log bhaag aaye par humare dusre dost faas gaye...... Iss liye vo log hume pakadna chahte hain....... "

Suddenly 2 goons came and catch hold one of the child. Shiva fought with them and meanwhile raavi called the police and since station was just at 5 minute difference tge police arrived soon and caught the goons.

With the help of these children police caught the other gang members and thanked shivi.they rescued almost 30 children.

Children also thanked them but than one of them said,

"Abb hum kahan jaye....... "

Raavi looked at shiva and said,

"Mere paas ikk idea hain...... "

And she called prafulla and jagat. They both agreed happily as after raavi and anita marraige they used to stay alone and the whole house us empty. So shivi took children there for the night.

Shivi informed the family about the same and stayed in mama mami's house. One of the girl came and hugged raavi crying and says,

"Thank you........... You saved me..... I love you......... You look like my mom........i have never seen them but i am sure she would be like you only............."

Raavi nodded crying and hugged her back and shiva looked at tgem other children came abd hugged them. Than they Raasettle tge children all slept.

Raavi and shiva were awake. Shiva comes and hugs raavi and raavi says,

"Shiva yeh bache kitne masoom hain na. . .. Acha huya humne inge bacha liya nahi toh pata nahi kya hota..... "

Shiva says,

"Raavi bacha toh humne liya hai...... Par hum inn bacho ko yaha toh nahi rakh sakte na....... Kuch aur karna padega........ "

Raavi looks at shiva and says,

"Shiva main inn bacho ko kisi galat hathon mein nahi dena chahti.......

Main ikk baat bolu....... "

"Haa bol..... "

"Vo actually abhi abhi jo zameen tere naam hai vahan par store ke liye ikk perfect jagah ban gayi hain aur kuch mahino mein inauguration bhi ho jayega......... Par agar hum uss jagah ko store na bankar inn bacho ke liye ghar bana de shiva........ "

Shiva looks at raavi and kisses her temple and says,

"Main bhi tujhse yahin kehne vala tha raavi....... Bass yeh sure nahi tha ki tu manegi yaa nahi..... "

They both smiled and that's how there journey started and they made a family. Intially they had 30 children than steadily the count of children rose and so the count of donations also rose. They educated the children. Prafulla nad jagat were tge ones ehich stayed there at night time else raavi was always in the orphanage taking care of children. Shiva would come there in between breaks and they finally felt lively with these children. Now the taunts of the people didn't hurted them as the children addressed them as "AMMA" and "DADDA".

That's how they found there happiness... ... And tgey started a new journey altogether.

FLASHBACK ENDS.

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PRESENT TIME,

Raavi keeps her head on crook of his neck and shiva holds her closer and kisses her forehead. Raavi snuggles more and says,

" Hum dono ki jindagi mein kuch bhi assani se nahi huya Shiva......... Na shaadi.... Na pyaar..... Toh phir bache kaise aasani se mil jaate...... Uske liye bhi toh Shiva aur uski gauri ko tapasya karni padti naaa....."

Shiva says,

"Ajj panch saal ho gaye hume apni duniya mein jo humne sare society se alag sare purane khayalon se dur banayi hai........... Aur mujhe koii gham nahi hai. .......koi kii hume itne pyaare bache diye hai bhagwaan ne........"

Than they both sleep hugging each other.

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Hey guys.. . .. It was indeed a long chapter.. . .. . . Last time i have left this story as open ended but today i am winding this up.. . ..

Hope you like it.. . ..

Do share views. . .. .

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Originally posted by: Radhi12

It was awesome