Moments that break (PART- III pg 11) - Page 5

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

When is the next part coming?

Absolutely cannot wait ❤️

Wow! I loved the way you explored Raavi's pain... so natural and beautifully described. So excited for the next part. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: MinMIN2

Wow! I loved the way you explored Raavi's pain... so natural and beautifully described. So excited for the next part. Please update soon.

PART-II

Raavi was sprawling on the floor crying bitterly with her knees still till her chest she just wanted to hide herself in the darkness or just want to become a star just like her parents and be near them she was feeling weak, while choking and coughing she was saying,

"Nahi ho raha .............mujh.......se yeh.......sab........nahi samjh........ aa rha mujhe kuch bhi.............. Mujhe app.........ke paasss.......aana hai...........mumma.......pa......."

Shiva was hearing her and was feeling guilty as what he had made out of this naive soul who never cried and was blissful all the time he just wanted to vanish her all sorrows and now he also knew about her feelings so he came near her and said,

"Raavii........"

Raavi heard him and quickly put her hand in front of her mouth to stop her sniffling and sobbing sounds as she don't want to show her miserable side anyone atleast not now when the person in front do not care an ounce for her. Seeing Raavi like this Shiva can't control and he just hugged her in way his chest was flushing with her back and he himself laid next to her in that way. Raavi desperately wanted that warmth she knew who the source was, her sniffling sound increased she was unable to move and was panting heavily and she was trembling just then Shiva said,

"Raavi ajj jo bhi huya.......... "

Suddenly Raavi sat up straight and wiped her tears and said sternly hiding her emotion,

"Ajj jo bhi huya maine jaan bhujhkar nahi kiya Disha ke dress par galti se juice gira tha aur maine sorry bhi mangi hai fir kehti hoon i am sorry Shiva jo kuch bhi huya ab tu jaa please.......... "

"Meri baat sun Raavi....... "

Shiva said while trying to hug her again but was stopped by Raavi

"Shiva tu jaa please....... "

"Raavi...... "

Saying this shiva hugged her and Raavi lost control and shed her tears saying

"Pleasseee...... Pleaseeeee...... Pleaseeee............pleaseeeee Chala ja Shivaa"

Shiva held her firmly as she was crying and resting her head on his chest and murmuring and than shiva said,

"Main tujhe chod kar kahi nahi ja raha"

Raavi still in his arms said choking and sobbing

"Jhooth jhooth fir ikkk aur jhooth tu already mujhe chod raha hai Shiva .......already mujhe chod raha hai sab log aisa hi krte hai tu bhi aisa hi krr raha hai"

"Nahi krunga"

Shiva said and Raavi lifted her head up and looked into his eyes directly her eyes were red visibly hurted her soul was parched and said

"Nahi krega!!!! tu krr raha hai Shiva........ Tu kar raha hai Shiva tu mujhe divorce de raha mujhse dur jaa raha hai ikk nayi ladki jiske saath teri dusri shaadi ki baat ho rahi hai uske saath naach raha hai tu sab krr raha tuu sabbb krr raha hai Shivvaaaa.......... Mujhe yeh jhoothi tasali mat de plsss chala jaaa......... "

By saying this Raavi tried to move out of his embrace but he hold her shoulders and said,

"Tu mujh par bahrosa kar Raavi main sab theek krr dunga main yeh sab hooniss liye krr tha kyon kii maa yeh chahti hai prr abb......"

She looked at him directly in his eyes tears rolling from her eyes and said

"Kaki toh yeh bhi chahti hai Shiva ki tu mere pass na aaye jald se jald sagai krr le tu vo bhi krr lega.............. Kaise karu bharosa Shiva ajj Kaki toh kal koii aur bolenga aur tu mujhe chod dega main kya krungi Shiva tab..........nahi ho raha mujhse yeh sabbb nahi ho raha............Yehi place hai meri teri life mein Dhara dii ne kaha shaddi krr li kisi ne kaha toh divorce le liya kaki ne kaha toh dusri shaddi krr lega ...........kaise bharosa kru main kaiseeeee..........."

Raavi cried helplessly and said,

"Ghin aati hai Shiva mujhe khud se jab bhi main shishe mein dekhti hoon na ghina aati hai apne aap se kaise main sab ke liye bhoj bankar reh gayi hoon, main aisi nahi thi main aisi nahi thi mujhe sab ne aisa bana diya Shiva sab ne aisa bana diya........"

Shiva was ashamed as he knew he also have a share in all her misery,

Raavi was sitting with her legs curled up and looking at herself roaming her hands around her body in disguised manner and saying,

"Koi mujhe Anath bolta hai koii bhoj toh kisi ki chodi hui dulhan toh kisi ki chodi huii biwi aur ab Characterless bhi ....... Itne itne sare daag lekar kaise jeeungi shiva kaise.......itne daag..........itne....iss ke bhoj taale jeena mujhse nahi ho raha hai shiva nahi ho raha hai..........."

Shiva held her again in embrace as he never knew waht she was going through and raavi was literally trembling, she said pointing towards the stars,

"Mujhe na mumma papa ke paas jana hai aur puchna hai ke woh mujhe pyaar krenge aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye mujhe unke paas jana hai shayad jo pyaar mujhe yaha nahi mila na unke paas mil jayega.........mujhe pyaar milega na"

She stands up and says pleadingly and crying , pointing and looking at the two stars

"Milega na??App kuch bolte kyon nhii ho milega na mujhe pyaar milega naa...............kyon nhii bol rhe aap.....koii kuch nahi bolega kuch nahi bolegaa kuch nahi............ "

She than sits on her knees and cries again. Shiva comes near her and sit on her level embracing her trembling figure this time Raavi also gave in and continously said

"Koyi kuch nahi bolega kuch nhiii.......... Nahi milega mujhe kuch bhi nahi milegaaaaaa"

She was sniffling choking and suddenly made a sorrowful smile and tearful eyes depicting her shattered soul and said

"Mujhe na Shiva mumma ki god mein sar rakh ke rona hai taki vo na mere aansu ponche apne dupatte se bilkul vese jaise Kaki tere ponchti hai.......................Papa ko sab ki complaint lgani hai sabki jo jo mujhe hurt krte hai sabki sabkiiii.. . .. . .. . "

"Shiva Jab tune pakfere ki rasam mein mujhe unn kangano ke saath toola tha na.......... Agar mere parents hote na toh yeh noobat nahi aati tab bhi mujhe itna bura lgga tha aisa lgga tha kisi ka sahara chahiye mujhe prr tab bhi koii nahi tha"

" Aur fir tune mera hath jhatka tha Sawan Puja wale din mera itna dil toota tha na aur usse bhi jyada tab toota jab Kaaki ne mujhe kaha kii mujhe situation sambhalni chahiye thi aur tujhe kisi ne nahi danta ikk baar bhi kuch nahi kaha kuch pucha bhi nahi ................Agar mere Papa hote na Shiva toh vo na tujhe dante aur puchte kio kiya aisa aur meri mumma hoti na toh vo mujhse puchti kii kya main theek hoon ......................... par aisa kuch nahi huya Shiva kioo kii koii bhi mujhe apna nahi manta sab log mujhe bura samjhte hai sab log................ "

She paused and said

"Shiva tune mujhe sab ke samne insult kiya tha na agar mere mumma papa hote toh na woh aakar na sabko confront krte sabki class lete par aisa kuch nahi huya kuch nahi huya kuch nahi huaa massi ma ko apne badle ke ilava kuch nahi dikhta vo mujhe pyaar krti hai prr support nahi krti ajj bhi vo chup thi ajj bhi jab mera tamasha ban raha tha tab bhi sab chup the mujhe suna rahe the sabbbbb.. . .. . .. . . Koi nahi bola kuch bhi mere mumma papa hote na toh vo bolte aur mujhe apne pass rakhte.. . .. . .. . .. . .. Vo aisa krte na??"

Shiva was numb as he heard all things which were bottled up in her and he was thinking their would be many more which must have been inside her.

"Raavi hum sab tujhe apna mante hai .. . .. . .. . "Shiva said

"Jhooth fir jhoothhh sab jhooth hai sab jhooth haii.. . .. . .. . "

Raavi said this while hitting her tiny hands on his chest while sobbing and choking.

"Mujhse nahi tackle ho raha sab kuch. . .. . .. . .. . .. . . Sach mein nahi ho rha Shiva sach mein nahi ho raha.. . .. . .. . .. . Kal tu bhi chala jayenga par main tujhe force nahi krungi tujhe pura haq hai apne maan chahe life partner ko select krne ka kio kii agar main tere saath rahi na toh teri bhi khushiyaan barbaad ho jayengi...........tu chala ja Shiva tu chala ja .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . . Mujhse tera baar baar dur jana fir mere kareeb aana meri care krna yeh sab bhut takleef deta hai bhut takleef deta hai.. . .. . .. . .. Aur nahi sehn kar pa rahi main"

"I am sorry Raavi....i am sorry"

Shiva said Raavi kept her hand on his mouth and said

"Shiva mat bol please agar tune ikk baar aur kaha na main maan jaungi par mujhe iss baar fir nahi tootna kuch na kuch fir aisa ho jayega aur tu mujhe chod dega mujhse woh dard nahi saha jayega.. . .. . .. Please.. . .. "

Clinging to him sobbing ,screaming , cursing herself she said,

"Iss baar na ikk achi ladki choose krna jo na kaki ko pasand ho aur jo tujhe khush rakh paye meri tarah nahi jo teri khushiyan tabah krke rakh de please iss baar apne bare mein sochna Shiva warna pichli baar ki tarah tu fir ikk aise rishte mein bandh jayenga jus mein teri khushi na ho "

Raavi said to which Shiva replied

"Mujhe tu chahiye Raavi main kisi aur se shadi nahi kar skta bilkul bhi nahi.... .. . .. Main teri jagah kisi ko bhi nahi dunga bilkul bhi nahi . . .. . .. . .main kal hi maa ko mana krr dunga Raavi sach mein.. . .. . .. . .. Please mujhe trust krrr.......... "

Raavi just watched him with tears in her eyes and shiva continued

"Raavi main yeh sab tere liye krr raha tha mujhe laga tu mujhse better deserve krti hai iss liye main tujhe divorce de raha tha taki tu agge badh sake apni life bana sake kio kii mujhe lgta tha ki tu sirf compromise krr rahi hain mere sath fassi huyi iss liye krr raha tha main yeh sabb.. . .. . .. . . Tujhse ladye ladte pyaar kab ho gya pta hi nahi lgga Raavi pta hi nahi lgga aur jab ehsaas hua tab yeh lgga ki tere sapne sab reh gye main toh vesa bilkul bhi nahi hoon jaisa pati tujge chahiye tha.. . .. . .. . .. Iss liye krr raha tha yeh sab mein.. . .. . .. . . "

"Shiva kio kiya aisa kioo mujhse kioo nahi pucha kyon.. . .. . .. . Kya mera koiii hak nahi hai apne rishte ke bate mein apne bate mein faisla lene ka kioo...................."

Raavi said to which Shiva replied witha firm belief

"Raavi main sab theek kr dunga sach mein ikk baar bharosa krr please.. . "

Raavi's gripping fear of again losing a person stopped her to take a step forward and she said,

"Shiva ajj yeh wajah hai toh kal agar koii aur wajah huyi jis ke liye tu mujhe fir chod dega toh main krungi Shiva................. Main jeete jee maar jaungi itni baar toot chuke dil ko phir saawar nahi paungi Shiva or sawar nahi paungi......... "

"Please Raavi ikk baar please ikk baar main kal sab theek krr dunga pkka main tujhe kabhi bhi pyaar krna band nahi krunga main tere maa baap ki kami toh puri nahi kar skta par tujhe ikk wada jaroor krunnga ki main tujhe akela nahi padne dunga kabhi bhi.......... Vss ikk last tym mujh par bharosa krke dekh please........ "

Raavi just can't handle the load and hugged him and said

"Shiva please iss baar maat tod dena mera vishwas please.......... "

Shiva make her look at the stars and say,

"Ajj main ikk promise krta hoon Raavi main tujhe wo sab dunga jo tu deserve krti hai tere parents ke samne ajj main kehta hoon kii ajj kii raat ke baad main tujhe kabhi bhi akelapan mehssos nahi hone dunga aur teri insult kabhi nahi hone dunga............. Na khud krunga......

Pyaar nibhaunga.............. Aur kabhi nahi chodunga chahe jo ho jaye........... "

Hearing his firmness Raavi went off guard and looked at her parents and hugged Shiva. Shiva knew he has a lot to do to win her trust she is so forgiving that he need to insure this shouldn't go in vain he hugged her tighter and the night spent was in each other's embrace. He was ready to go an extra mile to protect this naive soul and he need to start it from his family.

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ODETTE_DELUSION

This brought tears to my eyes 💔

Beautifully written ❤️

Heart touching 💔

Poor Raavi, I could imagine everything so clearly

The pain and the helplessness of Shiva

Excited to know how Shiva will win her trust and protect her

Loved it. Yes pls write band bajaoing of all.

Originally posted by: Radhi12

That was beautiful.

Originally posted by: Foxii

Heart touching 💔

Poor Raavi, I could imagine everything so clearly

The pain and the helplessness of Shiva

Excited to know how Shiva will win her trust and protect her

Originally posted by: lourel24

Loved it. Yes pls write band bajaoing of all.