FF - Forget Me Not|Part 15 updated on page 42 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

You're welcome.

Take your time.

Aaram se 2 times read karke main feedback doongi...ek baar read karke mera mann naa bharega🤣

Mera feedback thoda lamba hota hai😆...donot get bored😃

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Tagging my club members. You all know the rules. Like to get tagged for future.😂

Tum humko bhoolgyi😱😥

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Uffffffffff fazu yr 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚

This chapter yrrr 🥵🥵🥵🥵

The slow burn, the sexual tension was over 9000 ( in vegeta's voice )

I loved how Dhwani was thinking of getting her own kids ( reminds me of Monica )

The encounter of kids and Dhwani was quite good everyone was using common sense

Sudha and veer ka alag trip chal raha hai

Yr Dhwani was so bold I can imagine whole scene in slow motion ( zack snyder style)

Bas pls let them kiss yr koi nai aye bich me

I am begging you 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

I knew you would love this chapter. Had it planned for chapter 8 but the other chapters kept getting longer so this scene got delayed.

The kids scene was similar to the show. I couldn't think of any other way to write it but glad to have used a bit of common sense.😂

Regarding Dhwani thinking of children. I just thought she would think of this, especially since she loves children. I love Monica from Friends!

Dhwani being bold, I thought of it as Dhwani being overpowered by her feelings and her body just acting accordingly instead of thinking with her brain.😂

Kiss or no kiss. We'll see next week.

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Thnx yrrr

Boring weekend ko acha karne ke liye

You're welcome. I'm bored too but I thought at least you guys get something to read.

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Yrrrr sakshi ki DP

I'm inspired by greatness.

Originally posted by: Jaspreet96

Tum humko bhoolgyi😱😥

I didn't forget you. You know the rules.😂 No like, no tag. No seriously, I tagged those who liked the latest chapter. I'm guessing you commented.😂

Please no one take offence. I honestly don't know how many members to tag so to be fair, I tag those who liked the latest chapter.

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

I didn't forget you. You know the rules.😂 No like, no tag. No seriously, I tagged those who liked the latest chapter. I'm guessing you commented.😂

Please no one take offence. I honestly don't know how many members to tag so to be fair, I tag those who liked the latest chapter.

arey i was teasing you..

Np

Wowwwwww.... 🥰🥰🥰🥰

First of all I got your tag this time.. 🤪🤪

Amazing chapter.. we are not getting PurVir in show.. sooo finally when I saw your have updated, i was all over it.. 😃😃 my weekend was really slow . Thank you for making it better.. 😃😃😃

PurVir finally.. the tension is intense... Plz plz plz plz plz let there be a kiss... No interuption plzzz....

The whole scene was like in a slow motion for me.. 🥰🥰 I could imagin purvi drying Vir off.. he was all confident about his own body.. we already know his proximity affects her, but the way she got attracted and was not able to hold back, superb.. 🥰😃🥰

Purvi and sudha's convo was beautiful. 😃😃

And dhwani asked for Purvi's pic, Vir must be in pickel, good that he didn't have to answer. 😕 I am not sure how dhwani will react..

VeerDha 🥺🥺🥺 poor Sudha and poor Veer...ts a fact that he had been betrayed.. but he himself is not sure what is happening to him. 😒 And now Sudha is thinking of leaving him.. hope veer and Sudha can sort this out..

Kidssss.... 🥰🥰🥰

They found their hathi.. once they will meet her, they will definatly act cupid.. 🤩🤩

In a way it's good they found out.. now Vir will get more excuses to meet his bawri.. 🥰🥰

All in all fantastic chapter.. can't wait for next..

Cliffhanger... 😈😈😈😈

Just read two updates in a go...I didn't realize that I missed the earlier one. .

Just love the way you write...The flow is so smooth It actually gives the feel of slow burn romance...

Your Daksh and Veer are soooo good !! Specially Veer...The jealousy and then his realization to win over Sudha...Too good...

And the kids part was so well Written...No OTT elements...Loved it👍🏼😳

And the way you have written how Dhwani is affected by Vir...Her dreams...24×7 thoughts about him...This is what I badly wanted to watch in the show too

Anndddddd the last part...THIS IS SO STEAMY !!!🔥🔥

How can you stop at this point...NOT FAIR AT ALL😭😭😭

Damn...Dhwani initiating the closeness and making the first move for their first kiss...

And her wiping the droplets...And staring at his sexy body...What else do I need...

Your FF has everything

Your DP...🤣🤣 It makes me feel Sakshiji cheering PurVir romance😈🤪🤣

Purvi being sherni...making first moves☺️☺️☺️☺️

Viru peeche kaise rahega fir..

Why did u stop on about to meet...

Meet karwa dete yaar...aage bhi planning karni thi fir

Btw you just write fantastic bro

Originally posted by: Sau25

Wowwwwww.... 🥰🥰🥰🥰

First of all I got your tag this time.. 🤪🤪

Amazing chapter.. we are not getting PurVir in show.. sooo finally when I saw your have updated, i was all over it.. 😃😃 my weekend was really slow . Thank you for making it better.. 😃😃😃

PurVir finally.. the tension is intense... Plz plz plz plz plz let there be a kiss... No interuption plzzz....

The whole scene was like in a slow motion for me.. 🥰🥰 I could imagin purvi drying Vir off.. he was all confident about his own body.. we already know his pricikity affects her, but the way she got attracted and was not able to hold back, superb.. 🥰😃🥰

Purvi and sudha's convo was beautiful. 😃😃

And dhwani asked for Purvi's pic, Vir must be in pickel, good that he didn't have to answer. 😕 I am not sure how dhwani will react..

VeerDha 🥺🥺🥺 poor Sudha and poor Veer...ts a fact that he had been betrayed.. but he himself is not sure what is happening to him. 😒 And now Sudha is thinking of leaving him.. hope veer and Sudha can sort this out..

Kidssss.... 🥰🥰🥰

They found their hathi.. once they will meet her, they will definatly act cupid.. 🤩🤩

In a way it's good they found out.. now Vir will get more excuses to meet his bawri.. 🥰🥰

All in all fantastic chapter.. can't wait for next..

Cliffhanger... 😈😈😈😈

Glad you got your tag. 😂

Yes, the weekend has been so slow and it's only Saturday. We still have tomorrow to go. The forum has been dead lately as well. Glad this got things active for a little while.

I'm glad you liked the PurVir scene. I've had this scene in my head for a while and was just waiting to include it in the story.

No comments on the kiss situation. You'll have to wait.

I want Purvi and Sudha to have a friendship like they did before.

Regarding Veer and Sudha. It's only natural for Veer to struggle to trust Sudha considering how they got married. Both of them need to work on this relationship.

It was only a matter of time before the kids saw Dhwani.

About the cliffhanger. I'll use the same excuse as every other week. I couldn't think of any other way to end the chapter.😂

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

I knew you would love this chapter. Had it planned for chapter 8 but the other chapters kept getting longer so this scene got delayed.

The kids scene was similar to the show. I couldn't think of any other way to write it but glad to have used a bit of common sense.😂

Regarding Dhwani thinking of children. I just thought she would think of this, especially since she loves children. I love Monica from Friends!

Dhwani being bold, I thought of it as Dhwani being overpowered by her feelings and her body just acting accordingly instead of thinking with her brain.😂

Kiss or no kiss. We'll see next week.

You're welcome. I'm bored too but I thought at least you guys get something to read.

I'm inspired by greatness.

Yrr you can't do this

Pls Daksh na tapak jaye ( vaise I don't mind vo dekh bhi le but kiss ke baad)

All hail our new queen ✊🏻✊🏻