Kalma os ::- acha chaltein hai ...

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Os ::- acha chaltein hai ....

So this os is based on pragyu's story ...those who have not read it pls read it quickly to get a clear view of it...

This is the link of that story ...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/tujhse-hai-raabta/5251170/chalo-is-baar-ff-ka-title-aap-decide-karo

Here after that scene of malhar where he refused to give any answer about Diya and asked kalyani to leave from there...she left ..she really left from each corner of his life ...now the story starts ..

Kalyani is married to Rohit from last 2 years ..leaving in her city mumbai again by her husband is what all she wants from the life...but alas the poor girl even didn't get this bit of happiness in her life ...she passed away before they complete the second year of the marriage she passed away due to brain tumor...rohit family is a well reputated family in the mumbai just like kalyani family ...it's a arranged marriage ..haahha aranged marriage and kalyani deshmukh weird combination...is it not...but Yee really time has changed and she stepped in her new life ...though Rohit is not a CEO of some company of or a big businessman but still he worked in a well reputated company on a high post ..with a proper amount of package so her parents also started to pressurise her for this marraige and after sometime of that incident she really moved on in her life ...rohit and her family tries hard to save her but they didn't gain success and she leave them alone ...here it's thirteenth day to her death so her in-law and her parents invites all her old colleagues and friends in her Pooja for her spirit peace ...they called malhar also ..as they very well knew how much kalyani is attached to him and how she worked with him there in Delhi for some months...as they don't know the reason behind her sudden resignation for leaving the company ...

Malhar with a lean body with under black circled eyes ..comes there with shaking legs..his whole body is shivering like anything after seeing kalyani photo with a dry flowers garlands..the thirteen days from where he lost the reason behind his existence ..not thirteen a slight thing in him broke that day only when kalyani left the school for her higher studies but still he got some hope when he meets her again in that office ...but the time is so cruel that they get apart from there also and that separation he didn't is a lifetime separation where he will not even can get a glimpse of his girl..where he cannot see her clumsiness..he broke from inside totally ...just after sometime they all gathered in the middle of hall to get havan done ..after the havan and Pooja ..rohit family bid their guests with sad smile ..malhar with low eyes goes to meet kalyani parents who were totally broken and shaken from their daughter death ..they simply sympathise with him like her other friends but for him...he knew internally that how much her parents are broken so like a true friend or whatever from his or her side he offers them some money as he very well knew that kalyani is their only daughter and after her departure like this they will not able to live alone so he even asked them to shift there with his Kaka as his Kaka also lived alone he didn't marry to take care of malhar and kalyani parents and his Kaka are like friends also ....they tries to deny it but he gives her swore to him and they sadly nodded their head...just then he meets her husband also who have a sad smile on his face but that look which he tries to find inside him is lost somewhere don't why he feels like kalyani is not happy with this marriage something is off here ...as they take kalyani's clothes and her things in a packets to send with her parents...as kalyani parents requested Rohit to send their daughter everything to them...so that they will continue to live with her memories also ..just then a dairy falls there from the package ..which kinda looks her dairy to him as before he could ask helper to put it back the gone from there ..so he picked her dairy and caress it lovely .. the time lapse fasts malhar and kalyani parents shifts In Delhi where malhar makes sure they got a suitable got job according to their age and got a company in his Kaka ...but still malhar cannot moved on he is still standing there with her memories which he didn't want to go away from him..as his life existence is now totally depends on them only..malhar is standing in his balcony seeing the moon which kalyani used to do..as she really like the moon which she can even stare whole night and still cannot get tired..his room is totally dark after her departure like his life his room also turned into another darkness ..hugging her photo to his chest to talking to star thinking it to be her..becomes a daily routine in his life ... suddenly today he gathers that couraged and opens her dairy and a letter falls from it...frowing on it . He sits on floor taking the support of bed and unfold it to read shakingly ...

Dear malharji ...

I know aap Mera ye letter kabhi nahi padh payenge but still you know what aap hi the bachpan seen Jo Meri har bakwass suntein the Jo Mera har secret jaantein the siway ek kein ...aap jaantein hai Maine aapko apna dost kyun banaya tha school main kyunki mujehin aap jaise the vaise hi achien lagtein the... aap thein hi itne sweet ki koi bhi aapko apna dost bana Lega ...aapko ye baatein nahi pata thi haina ..main jaanti hoo Maine ye kabhi aapsein nhi kaha lekin main sachmain aapsein bohot pyaar karti thi ..aapka har Roop mujhein acaha lagata tha chahein vo haklane vala malhar hoo chahein ek khadoos ceo hoo ....aapki uss baat ne mujhein andar sein tod Diya malharji ..tod Diya sacchi school main aapko koi chidhatha to maan karta tha uskaa sir pho Doon par nahi phod sakti thi ..jaantein haina aap papa kitne strict the agr unkein yaa mummy kein pass aisi koi bhi complaint jaati to main vahin sein. Hostel chali jaati aur aapsein bhi door Jo main kabhi nhai chahthi thi ..malharji you know what atharav ko kiss Maine jaan boochkein nahi Kiya tha aur uskein baa to hargiz nahi jab aapkein saath usne kitna galat Kiya tha aapne soch bhi kaise liya ki maain aapkein saath aisa kuch karoongi aapkein ...usne mujehin kaha tha uss godwon walien incident ke baad ki kalyani age tumne malhar ke saamne mujhein kiss Kiya yaa ussien bhala bura kaha to main yaa mere friends aapko kabhi tease nahi karenge ...main to uska uss din sir hi phod deti par ye baat sunkein mujhein aapka bhi khyal aaya jiski wajah sein Maine uski baat maan li aur uss din bus kein saamne usein aise kiss Kiya ...lekin aapne to mujhpein characterless hone ka hi ilzam laga Diya can you be serious mere malharji ne Jo Meri itni parwah karte the ki main khudko chot pochtathi to vo hakalna Wala malhar Rane bhi mujehin bohot joro sein daanata tha ...you know what mere sab friends family sab ek ke badd ek achi post pein chalein gayien aur life main settle ho gayienaur main aise hi Reh gayi ..clumsy jhali to main pehle sein hi thi na par aap their Mera dhyaan rakhane kein liye par aap Meri uss baat sein itne hurt ho jayenge ye Maine jindagi main kabhi nahi socha tha aap bhi apna college chodkein apni mba pursue karne chalien gayein aur mujhein bhi uss incident kein baad school nen suspend Kar Diya tha aur baba ne ek minute nhi lagayi mujhein college hostle bhejena main ..he taraf sein andhera ho Gaya tha pehle school ki marks ki list main topper rehen ki wajha sein kuch nahi sikh paayi aur phir baad main jab man Kara to sabne itne taanein de Diya ki sab toot Gaya ...ek job bohot mushki sein mili thi Jahan mera to koi dost nahi ban paya ..aur apane bhi mujhein apne boss hone ki har hasiyat yaad dila di..its hurts a lot when you are scolded for others mistakes ..it's really hurts ..har jagah sabkein gussein kein liye punching bag main hi ban jaati thi chahein Ghar main mummy Papa ko Shaadi kein liye Mana karne pein to chahein office main nishigandha kein liye kuch acha karne pebhi ....sab depressive ho Gaya to doctor sein anti depressed ka treatment karwana start kiya but phir aap aageyein jinn baaton ko bhulakaein mein koshish Kar rahi thi ki aagein badhoon phirsein jaane anjaane aapkein har taane chahein vo mere financial status ka hoo to aapko dehkein vo halki jalan ki main bhi itni capable thi ki kuch aisa Kar sakti thi ..main spoil brat nahi thi malharji buss lazy thi jissein kaam karne ka maan nahi hota tha lekin agr mujhein koi pyaar sein aapki tarah dobara samjhata to main pakka samjah jaati ..aapne apni dushmani atharav seen uss project main poori tarah sein nikalai ...par aap dono kein nayien taane mujhein tod rahei the buri tarah ..isliye chod Diya maine sab chod Diya aapka office sab vo jagah aur Kar di. Maa baba ko haa uss Shaadi kein rishtein kein liye pyaar aapsein karti thi lekin Shaadi kiss aur sein karne wali thi ..but dekhiye na life ne yahan bhi dhoka de Diya tha mujhein rohit bhi apne kaam peine hi focus karna chatha tha jabki maine corporate world chodene ki kasam khaa li thi ...usne do saal hamari Shaadi kein apna career built up karne main laga diye ..aur Main phir ek baar akeli reh gayi bilkul akeli vahin baatein sochana uska intezaar karna Meri life ek aise andhere main pooch gayi thi Jahan sein mujhein koi kheechene Wala nahi tha ..Rohit aur main kabhi ek dooosrein ke saath pati patni ki tarah nahi rahein. ..Jo sindoor aapkein naam ka bharna tha apni maang main vo kissi aur ka bharna tha mujhein ...aur abb dekhiye meri jindagi nein mujehin dhoka de diya...abb dekhiye mere pass waqt hi nahi bacha ...ki aapsein kuch keh paaon ...ek baar aapsei Milne chathi thi baas ek baar lekin dekhiye naa Kaisa time hi aapto abb Tak Diya kein saath apni life jee rahein honge ...aapki Khushi main bhang nahi daalna chahthi main...par ke baae aapsein lipatkar khulkein Rona chathi Hoon aur poochana chathi hoo ki kyun main kabhi ek beti hone ka poora pyaar nahi ppa payi kyun main kabhi unn dono ko apni feelings nahi samjha paayi ...kyun main kabhi aapko apnein maan ki feeling nhi keh paayi ..kyun kabhi aapka vo pyaar nhi paa paayi Jo main aapsien chahthi thi .. kyun kabhi main ek patni ka pyaar nhai pyaa paayi ...sacchi log sahi kehte thein main looser hi rahi jindagi bhar I am such a looser main kuch bhi nahi Kar paayi ...kuch bhi ..aap apnein akele pan sein ladkar aaagein badh gayien malharji..lekin main haar gayi main nahi Kar paayi iss andhere sein ladayi ..kyunki shyaad aapkein saath kuch waqt kein liye hi sahi main thi aapkein saath....lekin aap to mere saath hokar bhi nahi the ...Khush rahiyega humesha Diya kein saath. . bass bhgwan karein aap Meri ye feelings kbhai naa jaan paayien jissein aapki life main koi bhi kadhwahata AA payein ..

Aapki kalyani ...

Malhar gets too shocked reading her letter ...it's like she penned down her whole life in this letter ...he just could not do anything more at that time only curled up in a ball and thumped on the floor by hugging her letter close to his heart ..really like darkness of his room his life also became dark only .. his shinning star left him alone ..just alone

I could not stop myself by pening down a one short on this emotional story ...a big applause to pragya for writing sch a impressive story which really touched our heart...🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sachi vanshu itna emotional tha

It was too too beautiful Kalyani is no more mujhe Malhar pa gussa ara hai how much she loves him but Malhar ko uski kadar hi nhi huvi waise bhi jab koi duniya ma rehta ha na uski kadar hume uska jana ka baat hi pata chalti hai

Kalyani ka itna emotional letter sachi mujhe read karta karta meri aankhon mein assu agaye ki uki life ma usa kitna dard mila hai jisa pyaar karti thi wo nhi mil paya or jis sa karna ki koshish kar ti thi wo to kaam ma busy rehta tha

It was totally different story loved the update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Sachi vanshu itna emotional tha

It was too too beautiful Kalyani is no more mujhe Malhar pa gussa ara hai how much she loves him but Malhar ko uski kadar hi nhi huvi waise bhi jab koi duniya ma rehta ha na uski kadar hume uska jana ka baat hi pata chalti hai

Kalyani ka itna emotional letter sachi mujhe read karta karta meri aankhon mein assu agaye ki uki life ma usa kitna dard mila hai jisa pyaar karti thi wo nhi mil paya or jis sa karna ki koshish kar ti thi wo to kaam ma busy rehta tha

It was totally different story loved the update

thank you so much arwu 🤗glad you liked it .. 😄😄 it's totally pragya idea I just penned down my thoughts on this 😇😇

Yaa here kalyani is the most suffered one ..but malhar is also not less suffered if you deeply read the story so malhar has brutally teased at teenage where if any impression get printed on heart it will remain like same till the end...so malhar is also suffered so much in his life ..but yaa as I said malhar has kalyani beside him who really loved him a lot but cannot say neither in school nor at that time when she is going to confess her feelings to him by that kiss ....but kalyani has no one from the starting she has malhar but at the end due to time he also get fars from her ...it's kind a sad story with a emotional ending I can understand your emotions these are same when I am writing this os ...😔😔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kalma_lover


Vanshu yaar😭😭 rula diya🥺🥺 it was so so emotional itna jada ki mai padhte padhte ro rahi thi🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️ You have my whole heart ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Can't get over this story.. Feeling sad for Kalyani. She lost her everything and in last she lost her own life💔💔 Bechari how much she loves Malhar lekin that Atharva ne sab khatam kar diya😞😞 Uske Malhar ji ko usse dur kar diya 😔 and Malhar he was also totally broken.. The way he was missing her🥺🥺 He lost himself. He lost his soul, his shining sta, his Kalyani and his his everything. You nailed it. I was crying like hell while reading this. Each and every scene was making me emotional more n more..Rula diya yeh story I will never forget😭😭❤️❤️

ohh so sorry anu..I don't want you to cry like this ..but cannot stop myself by writing it ..here after reading her ff I think kalyani is just drowning in darkness and there is no one who can holds her ...it's like no one now wants her in his/her life ..

So sorry if i make you cry ..😔😔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was really a good take... From Kalyani's perspective..

Not being able to communicate at the right time to the right people does end up with serious repercussions at times...

Kalyani ke dard ko saamne lake khada kar diya tumne..

😭😭

Kaise dil tut gaya uss bechari ka... 🥺

Malhar didn't understand until he read her letter...

We can actually pity both the characters.. Both of them didn't know how to communicate at the right time. Both their hearts were broken.. 🥺

Hope Pragya ke story me donon communicate kar paaye... 😭😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

This was really a good take... From Kalyani's perspective..

Not being able to communicate at the right time to the right people does end up with serious repercussions at times...

Kalyani ke dard ko saamne lake khada kar diya tumne..

😭😭

Kaise dil tut gaya uss bechari ka... 🥺

Malhar didn't understand until he read her letter...

We can actually pity both the characters.. Both of them didn't know how to communicate at the right time. Both their hearts were broken.. 🥺

Hope Pragya ke story me donon communicate kar paaye... 😭😭

ohh ye di I too want a light ending in her story ...it's. Really heart touching ..where the two souls loves so much to each other but due to the time arrangement they kept getting part away and at the end day God fully kept them apart ...😔😔
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Vanshu tu to Aparichit ki Ambi nikli. Matlab kal wala OS and aaj wala...behen kitni Vanshika hain tere andar?

And coming to OS, behen, this was so beautiful. There was sadness, I won't deny, but kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai na ki dard bhare nagme hi sabse zyada khoobsurat lagte hain. Tera OS. Behen meri FF agar school ke bacchon ka play hai, to teri OS Filmfare Award winner. Yaar mujhe to samajh hi nahi aa raha kya bolun...bas thank you for writing this sheer beauty💝💝💝💝💝

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Posted: 3 years ago
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vanshuu... you are awesome when coming to explain one's emotions. I truly loved this os. both malhar and kalyani suffered a lot in their journey and life. they both wanted to be together but life isn't fair to them. malhar just wanted her to know how much he is hurt by her, ended up hurting her worse. I really made me emotional. thank you for giving your take on this ff.
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09

Vanshu tu to Aparichit ki Ambi nikli. Matlab kal wala OS and aaj wala...behen kitni Vanshika hain tere andar?

And coming to OS, behen, this was so beautiful. There was sadness, I won't deny, but kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai na ki dard bhare nagme hi sabse zyada khoobsurat lagte hain. Tera OS. Behen meri FF agar school ke bacchon ka play hai, to teri OS Filmfare Award winner. Yaar mujhe to samajh hi nahi aa raha kya bolun...bas thank you for writing this sheer beauty💝💝💝💝💝

thank you so much pragyu ...meri jaan for loving this so much...🤗🤗

Par ye terre hi idea ka kamal hai uss chapter kein baad main khudko rok hi nahi paayi ye os likhene sein..it's kinnda really sad story but mujhein usmein jitna Malhar kein liye bura lag rha hai ussein kayi jyaada uss badi kalyani kein liye lag rha hai jiskein saath koi nahi ..jissein vakai uss andhere sein kheechein vala koi nahi hai ...malhar ko to kalyani mil gayi par kalyani ko malhar uss samay mil hi nahi paya jab ussein sabsein jyaada kissi dost ..kissi badein ya kissi pyaar karne walien ki jarrorat thi ..and it's kinnda sad ki aakhiri time tak bhi kalyani apni feelings ko kabhi confess nahi kar paayi .. naa school main na office main .. aur Malhar somewhere meri os main yahin end deserve karta tha ..

Abb bass tu inn dono ki ek achien sein scenes dein aur ek achi si ending ....I am waiting eagerly aur madam ye tere hi writing ka kaamal hai jiski wajah sein main ye os likh paayi so Filmfare award asli to aap deserve karti hai .. 😳😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

vanshuu... you are awesome when coming to explain one's emotions. I truly loved this os. both malhar and kalyani suffered a lot in their journey and life. they both wanted to be together but life isn't fair to them. malhar just wanted her to know how much he is hurt by her, ended up hurting her worse. I really made me emotional. thank you for giving your take on this ff.

thank you so much sathwi ..🤗

Glad I can make you their emotions feel.. it's a really heart touching story in real sense..🤗

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