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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the update


Chapter 17

Majestic update... well written

This Monty... what a nerve

how dare he insult Geet

of cos Maan warned him

Maan is shocked that Monty wanted to take over

yet again Monty insults Geet

great that Maan intervened

Feeling for Neil

now he will not be able to see his mom

Maan's concern for Geet is reasonable

Geet feels bad for whatever happened

well Maan and Monty were never close

sad that Asha and Neil are paying the price

so Maan feels guilty

if only Monty took over instead of Maan as Maan never wanted all this

great that Maan gave Geet a better room

Geet's confusion is expected

as expected Maan spend time with Geet

pleased that Monty still sends Neil over

at least Maan spends time with Geet

Geet is applying for jobs

hope she gets something soon

liked that Maan opens up to Geet about his past but never questioned her

Sameera and her dad are awfully quiet

are they planning something

Geet's question about them was justified

loved Maan confession about what he feels to Geet

wow Maan and Geet are going on a date

Geet's thoughts are reasonable

Maan does not want her to worry

will she trust Maan?

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you for the wonderful update. The relationship is moving faster than I thought and I hope Maan will not break her heart or trust. She is correct to be weary of her relationship with Maan. She has been let down in life and I guess that would make anyone insecure. Maan knows what he wants, he wants her and I guess he wants to move the relationship forward. I think he is genuine but I hope others don’t ruin it for them. Either way, i’m Looking forward to the date and all the romance. Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 17

Dynamite update !!!

So it was Monty at the door !!!

Interesting revelations!!! Monty wanted to head the gang but he blames his marriage with asha...... is that why there are separated ...???

Monty was pretty pissed at geet for taking Neil to his mom’s place & I like how maan stepped in to defend geet

Interesting how Monty does not have a good relationship with maan but he sends his son there ???

My image of Monty has further disintegrated ....... maybe maan should give up the gang leadership to his imbecile brother & settle down with geet somewhere 😆

Glad that geet is looking for work but I think she should of informed maan ....,

Love ❤️ the new found closeness b/n maan & geet . Cancelling meetings to spend time with her 💕.......putting his arm around her when she is cold 💕 & she actually sat on his lap 💕 & did I read correctly an actual “date” ..... WOW my heart just went mush !!!

Can’t wait to read about the date .

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Is maan putting up a front or is he genuinely starting to care for geet. Has he started to fall for her

brother is so rude. Really trying to imagine him a boss. Looks like maan really did not want that position. Anyway

Let’s see where this goes

wow sitting on his lap. Going for a date. Things have moved pretty quickly has it not


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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 17


Fantastic and so Admiral


Oh hell Monty , he wanted to take over the business after

his father's death

but why did he not let Maan know , because it seems like Maan was forced

into the line of business

Monty blames Asha for his short fallings , how does any man blame a woman

surely whatever he did in his marriage was willingly done from his side

but its great that he still sends Neil to Geet

the manner which Monty spoke to Geet was not approved by Maan at all

and he stood up to his brother

Maan is falling for Geet and like he tells her its seems like his life was winter

without her and with her its spring

he tries and shares most of his past with Geet and I think he wants Geet to know he

is a good man and can take care of her and love her

he tries letting Geet know that there was no love between him and Sameera

and he wants to cherish moments with Geet

but yes she is concerned about the fact that he is a gangster and wealthy and can

leave her at any point

but she should not be worried about getting harmed as Maan said he will never let any harm touch her

wow Maan has planned a boat trip for him and Geet

I think she should enjoy her present

also please let Geet somehow tell Maan about the reason she was evicted , I want to know

what actually happened with Geet

and she needs to also let Maan know she wants to work

so can get her protected on the outside

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great update Monty is not d good guy I guess and if he has problem with geet then you is he sending neil to geet waiting to see wat happens in maaneet s first date on boat excited. U r a lovely writer dear.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful part

In real maan changing if yes its good

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Posted: 3 years ago

@ MA1970 - Thank you for following along and giving feedback! Great observation about Geet’s confusion and worry!


@ ferdouz - So glad you are enjoying how Maan is addressing Geet! Many thanks for reading and posting your thoughts. :)


@ mkd.70 - Thank you so much for reading and for your sweet comment! So true about Neil! Next update is going up soon! <3


@ sanum23 - Really appreciate you following along with the story and posting your thoughts! Excellent prediction about Maan’s reaction to her job search!


@ khwaishfan - So grateful for your beautiful comments! Thanks so much for reading. :) Very glad you liked Maan’s confessing!


@ simranDi - Many thanks for reading and for such a kind comment! So glad you are looking forward to the next chapter with the date, which will be posted soon!


@ Creampuff - Thank you very much for reading and posting such lovely feedback! Very happy you are loving the closeness between the two!


@ Alamelu - Thank you for reading and posting your thoughts! Let’s see where it goes...


@ taahir004 - Thank you so much for following along and posting such thoughtful feedback! The next chapter will get into the working aspect!


@ maangeet.gmmg - Aww, thank you so much for reading and for the lovely compliment, much appreciated! So glad you liked the update. :) Boat chapter is going up next!


@ priya_21 - Thank you so much for reading and for the sweet feedback! Agreed about Maan!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey all! Thank you for checking out Chapter 17! Please see below for the next one!


(Link to chapter index)

Chapter 18


“Watch your step.” Maan gripped Geet’s hips as he helped her board onto the deck of his yacht the next day. Geet shivered under his touch -- only the fabric of her maxi dress and cardigan provided a barrier against his strong hands.


Geet gasped at Maan’s setup on the deck: A red-and-white checkered tablecloth covered a round table, upon which sat a picnic basket with a loaf of bread peeking from it.


“Shall we?” Maan said, pulling out Geet’s chair. She sat down obediently, breathing in the fresh air. It was late afternoon, and a cool breeze was coming off the water.


Never, in all of her years, had Geet expected that she would step foot on a *yacht.* The girl who had been lucky enough to find a place to sleep at night? The scene was so surreal that Geet almost pinched her arm to ensure she wasn’t dreaming.


“This is really, really nice, Maan,” said Geet, observing the gleaming floor of the deck.


Maan opened up the picnic basket, pulling out the bread and slicing it into portions. “Well, this is actually one of my smaller vessels.”


Geet looked at him with raised eyebrows.


“I mean, I *do* own a shipping company.”


Geet could only laugh at that. She watched as Maan buttered a thick slab of bread and set it down on the china plate in front of her. The bread was still warm, impossibly fluffy, and melted on Geet’s tongue. She closed her eyes, listening to the gentle lap of waves. “I could definitely get used to this,” she joked.


“You will.”


Geet’s eyes flew open. “What?”


“I said, ‘you will.’ As in, you will get used to it.” Maan opened a bottle of wine and poured himself a glass, then poured apple cider for Geet. “I plan on taking you on many more sailing trips.”


At that, Geet set down the rest of her bread and felt the need to change the subject. “Any luck on convincing Monty to let Neil see Asha again?” Geet had asked Maan to advocate for Neil visiting Asha once more, but she knew it was going to be an uphill battle.


Predictably, Maan shook his head. “I’ve talked to Monty, but he’s been adamant about keeping them apart. He’s not feeling very charitable toward me since I shoved him. I still can't believe he has been wanting to head the organization this entire time.”


“Is that why he and Asha separated?" Geet asked. "Was she against him taking it over?"


"Maybe," replied Maan. "Or maybe my father didn't think Monty would be mature enough for the role. Or perhaps my father didn't want to swamp him with all of this when Monty was busy adjusting to marital life." Maan pulled from the basket a tray with a variety of cheeses.


“Asha can't see her own son because of Monty's ridiculous hang-ups? Can they somehow re-open the custody case?” Geet asked desperately. The breeze had kicked up, and she tugged her sweater tightly around her. “I hope that the non-profit calls me back. I would know how to better help Asha.”


Maan cocked his head slightly to one side. “What non-profit?”


“Oh, um . . . .” To buy time, Geet plucked a slice of cheese from the tray and chewed slowly. Maan didn’t know she had been applying for jobs, much less one in a legal organization. She had not planned to let this slip, especially today.


“Geet?” Maan prompted.


She was cornered. With a sigh, Geet explained that she was looking for work and that she had applied as a secretary to the non-profit organization that helped women who couldn’t afford an attorney.


Maan sat back in his chair, looking wounded.


“I know it’s not exactly ideal for me to have applied for a legal job,” Geet said in a hurry. “I mean, considering your, um, *activities,* but --”


“Why did you apply for a job at all?”


Geet blinked. “Why not?”


“You don’t need to work.” Maan spread his arms wide, a seagull flying overhead. “Can’t you see I can afford anything you could ever want?”


Geet looked down in her lap. “We’ve only known each other a few weeks,” she said quietly. “How can you be so sure about me?”


Reaching across the table, Maan touched Geet’s cheek. “Okay. Okay, Geet. That’s a fair question on your part. But I can tell you definitively that I have never been so sure about anything. And I’m always right.”


“Really now?” Geet was unable to contain her giggle. “‘Always right’?”


“Yes,” Maan said seriously. “Why else would I have asked you to watch Neil when I had barely even met you? I knew you would be the perfect babysitter for him. I have good intuition about everything.”


“Well, even if that’s the case,” Geet began, “getting this job is still important to me. I could learn so much working for a place that is trying to make a difference in women’s lives, Maan. Imagine if Asha had known about this organization before the custody hearing?”


Maan touched the tip of Geet’s nose. “You continue to amaze me with how compassionate you are, Geet.”


Geet couldn’t help but blush at that. Maan rose from his chair, holding out a hand and leading her to the rail of the deck. Late afternoon had turned into early evening, and the sun was beginning to set. Geet gripped the railing, and Maan stood behind her, placing his palms on top of her hands.


“It’s beautiful,” Geet said with awe. The water, streaked with fiery orange and red, seemed endless. It was thanks to Maan that she was experiencing this view. Without turning to face him, she said, “I can’t even say this is a dream come true, since I never even allowed myself to dream something like this. Thank you for this. Thank you for everything. For making this homeless girl feel like she actually means something to someone.” She felt tears spill from her eyes, glad that Maan couldn’t see them.


That is, Maan couldn’t see her tears until he turned Geet around in his grasp. “You will never be without a place to call home, Geet,” he murmured. He moved his thumbs over her wet cheeks, then kissed her eyelids. “Your home is with me.” He pulled Geet into his embrace, threading his fingers through her hair as the sun slipped below the horizon.


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Have a wonderful weekend!

Edited by kumari3 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update. Maan means to keep Geet always with him. He seems to be very comfortable with her and likes her compassionate nature.

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