MG FF: The Innocent - Chapters 20-27 on p. 41 - Complete - Page 28

Fab update great👍 loving each and every update its so refreshing.

First official date was superb.

Both have come more closer.

Love the way conversation flowed.

Maan wants her to be with him forever. He comes to know about her job application.

Geet is indeed a kind compassionate girl and Maan likes her for that.

Missed Neil

Waiting for next

Lovely lovely updates… The ending was so so sweet & touching.. its lovely the way Maan is trying hard to spend time with Geet & is so sure he wants her in his life… I’m enjoying the story so much 🥰

Chapter 17

Monty..... I thought so..... Whoa 😮 Maan really wants out from this sh**ty business.... Why not now that he has Geet... He doesn't need anything else right....? Yay Mr Top's still have the freedom to meet Geet.... That's adorable but really sad for the boy now he has seen his mother he wants to meet her more..... Wow 😲 just think about how much had the child longed for his mother slices through my heart..... But I'm sure Geet and Maan would fix that wouldn't they... Now speak of the couple.... I'm pretty sure something really sweet is cooking up between the two of them.... That's a really different shade of Maan.... And Man that's fast... I mean he's really moving in too fast don't you think 🤔..... Hehe 😅 like they've been married for like year's or so like they aren't even strangers no more.... Wow Maan is really putting in efforts to make her stay put with him.... and I didn't see that coming.... Gurl I really would have made him my mummas son in law by now.... Cause he's givin me my books and a freakin library all to my self.... Yep 😁 I'm ay okay with it and I don't care about the Mafia King background at all.... Ma Man is slayin me with books yo.... That was legit lit yo....🤗

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Simply superb update

Chapter 18

Girl... You really made my eyes water you know that....that was really beautiful and the most heartwarming scenes I've ever heard of.... WOW this guy over here is seriously planning a god-damned freaking future with this woman.... With all the wedding , the trips to travel together and havin kid of their own one day.... Wow he's not disagreeing with her working in a legal firm... Nice... She's really compassionate that's why she's suffered much... But not anymore when her Man is lookin after her... And at the end of the day they have each other to live for... Awww... WOW that's an eloquent work.... 🤗

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thanks for the update

Chapter 18

Perfect update.... splendidly written

of cos Maan made everything special

She is indeed affected by his closeness

she is awed by the preps and the yacht

Maan will indeed take her on more trips....

as expected she changed the topic

sad that Monty will never let Neil and Asha meet

Hate Monty.... Neil and Asha are suffering

so Geet inadvertently reveals that she is looking for a job

Maan was stunned

not surprised that Maan does not want Geet to work as he has everything

but he should understand that she wishes to work and its important to her

Geet's question is justified

loved that Maan is sure about Geet and is always right

glad that Geet stood her firm regarding working

great that she wants to make a difference in women's lives

well Maan is again impressed by Geet

liked that they are enjoying

Geet's thoughts are reasonable

she is overwhelmed

at least Maan assures her

update soon

Have an amazing weekend

,💖💞🥰 lovely update

Geet never expected to having date in yacht she's so happy seeing beautiful views she thanked Maan and he said he not going to leave her she never b homeless she will with him forever

For that he have to confess y ?

Geet is concern about Neil and Asha Maan said his brother didn't want them to meet each other

Chapter 18

Beautiful update !!!

Loved how you described everything so vividly. Everything sounded so picturesque!

Their official first date was beautiful!

Love how maan is so attentive to geet & such a gentleman .

Glad that geet told him about applying for a job ...... I would have hated if that caused a problem in the future.

It seems like maan’s admiration for geet just continues to grow .

The moment at the end where geet was thanking him & was crying & he was consoling her was absolutely beautiful!!

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Thank you so much 🤗

Can’t wait for the next update