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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Hey pragu.... Such an amazing updateโ˜บโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

How can u think we are getting bored of this... Not at all....


Malhar ke bulane par kalyani aa gyi๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ... Not for him but for his sonโ˜บ

She looking resplendent and he can't help him staring her๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Malhar ko sach pakde jaane ka darr.... ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Atharv with hi girlfriend ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’

Malhar ne kya insult ki us ladki ki... Publicly๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ... Aayi badi kalyani ki insult krne๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

Atharv Or malhar ke talks.... Hope jaldi sach pta chal jaye๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


Thank you Praku ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Hey superfast express..

Maine abhi tak chapter 5 hi nahi pada aur 6 bhi aa gaya..

I'm going to take some time and enjoy reading it..

And no I'm not going to get bored.. Because I just love mystery..

๐Ÿค—โ™ฅ๏ธ

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

This is amazing praguu....... Chapter -6 m thodi confusion hui

Malhar pehle moksh ka naam leke utha...... Fir he scolded him in the last scene....


Anyways the update was too good.....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Kalyani name him baba๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

Moksh๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ

Baby moksh kissing him๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

But he said he don't likes childrem๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

I think kalyani ke abduction ki baat ho rhi hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

This is amazing praguu....... Chapter -6 m thodi confusion hui

Malhar pehle moksh ka naam leke utha...... Fir he scolded him in the last scene....


Anyways the update was too good.....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Kalyani name him baba๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

Moksh๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ

Baby moksh kissing him๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

But he said he don't likes childrem๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

I think kalyani ke abduction ki baat ho rhi hai


Praku things will get revealed in next chapters. Malhar was dreaming about his dead baby whose name was Moksh. And hearing Baba crying, he got reminded of his dead baby. After that every child reminds of the life which his son couldn't have. That's why he hates children because they trigger all the bad memories. Baaki why Malhar has to abduct Kalyani, the reason will be revealed soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

sorry yaar

i was late

read the entire ff in one go

it was awesome

mystery element makes me curious to know more about all this

and i am just loving moksh and his baba and hi azooba cute trio inneed

loving this ff sorry for keeping the comment so short for such a wonderful work really sorry about that

keep updating and i am waiting to see how the story is going to progress

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

sorry yaar

i was late

read the entire ff in one go

it was awesome

mystery element makes me curious to know more about all this

and i am just loving moksh and his baba and hi azooba cute trio inneed

loving this ff sorry for keeping the comment so short for such a wonderful work really sorry about that

keep updating and i am waiting to see how the story is going to progress


Thank you so much Gayu โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Chapter 5 was amazing...

Malhar has feelings for Kallu babes..

His flirtatious behaviour over the phone..

Kalyani sounded irritated but she's getting pulled towards him..

And he lured her to the club with Moksh as the prize.. ๐Ÿ˜†

I'm loving this pure cop nature...

Him trying to find break into the drug cartel..

And the girl who insulted Kalyani got insulted back by him..๐Ÿ‘

Malhar felt bad to see Kalyani's pain on seeing Atharv with another girl..

But he gave Atharv a taste of his own medicine..

Interesting scene between Malhar and Atharv..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Chapter 5 was amazing...

Malhar has feelings for Kallu babes..

His flirtatious behaviour over the phone..

Kalyani sounded irritated but she's getting pulled towards him..

And he lured her to the club with Moksh as the prize.. ๐Ÿ˜†

I'm loving this pure cop nature...

Him trying to find break into the drug cartel..

And the girl who insulted Kalyani got insulted back by him..๐Ÿ‘

Malhar felt bad to see Kalyani's pain on seeing Atharv with another girl..

But he gave Atharv a taste of his own medicine..

Interesting scene between Malhar and Atharv..


Thank you so much Rekha ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

Hey... This is getting intriguing in both past and present...

Moksh... Was Malhar's baby is it? Did he lose the child? That's why previously he was asking Kallu if babies came back to parents.. ๐Ÿค”

And this baby called Baba surely seems to have raabta with Malhar..

Though he roughly put the child away.. I think Malhar is disturbed in his own way for doing that..

And he seems to be on some mission.. He's ordered to abduct Kalyani.. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Getting really interesting..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Hey... This is getting intriguing in both past and present...

Moksh... Was Malhar's baby is it? Did he lose the child? That's why previously he was asking Kallu if babies came back to parents.. ๐Ÿค”

And this baby called Baba surely seems to have raabta with Malhar..

Though he roughly put the child away.. I think Malhar is disturbed in his own way for doing that..

And he seems to be on some mission.. He's ordered to abduct Kalyani.. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Getting really interesting..


Thanks. I'm very glad that you liked this chapter. I was trying to create some kind of parallelism and role reversal between past and present timelines but was not sure will it work or not.

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