To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 16

Originally posted by: StarLord_Owen

Already on it! 😉💕✨

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Originally posted by: Scarysea

Hello there. Thank you so much. This is one of the best compliments I have received 🥺🥺🥺

Awwwww!

Do write more and tag me in it if u can!
loads of love ❤️

Read all parts in a go😍

So sweet story

Though i didnt liked this Raavi but i feel if a boy or girl forgets his/her existence then its wrong but only one thing can make it right which is the other person accepting them fully and helping them gain that confidence back and Shiva did that

I loved it🤗

Chikki...first of all apologies for the late comment...I finally read both the parts today. I really needed some time to come out of this story and type here....It made me super emotional❤️ What a beautiful piece of work👏

Part 3:

Raavi's desperation....My heart broke seeing her like this. I almost had tears seeing Raavi do everything to save her relation. Shiva was equally guilty and still thinks he is forcing Raavi to adjust with her. The final outburst of Raavi was so beautiful. I felt her pain, her longing and yearning to be with Shiva. This part was heart touching❤️ Dhara and Suman are always on Shiva high...I wish Shiva confronts them and they also start valuing Raavi...the girl is precious❤️ The show never gave us this deep insight about Raavi...I am glad you wrote such a detailed part for all efforts Raavi put in making her relation work

Part4:

The start with the suicide flashback...that was the first time Shiva was shaken so badly...Rishitha was super adorable here...I loved that she was Raavi as a friend...RishVi ship❤️ The last part was the perfect end...I loved the reference you gave to River...yes the river makes its own way...how deep and beautiful. The conversation was heart warming and the assurance Shiva gave Raavi with a kiss..perfect❤️

The end was amazing...Krish...my poor boy😆

Loved reading this Chikki...I know you are busy these days...but I would love to read something new from you🤗

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Chikki...first of all apologies for the late comment...I finally read both the parts today. I really needed some time to come out of this story and type here....It made me super emotional❤️ What a beautiful piece of work👏

Part 3:

Raavi's desperation....My heart broke seeing her like this. I almost had tears seeing Raavi do everything to save her relation. Shiva was equally guilty and still thinks he is forcing Raavi to adjust with her. The final outburst of Raavi was so beautiful. I felt her pain, her longing and yearning to be with Shiva. This part was heart touching❤️ Dhara and Suman are always on Shiva high...I wish Shiva confronts them and they also start valuing Raavi...the girl is precious❤️ The show never gave us this deep insight about Raavi...I am glad you wrote such a detailed part for all efforts Raavi put in making her relation work

Part4:

The start with the suicide flashback...that was the first time Shiva was shaken so badly...Rishitha was super adorable here...I loved that she was Raavi as a friend...RishVi ship❤️ The last part was the perfect end...I loved the reference you gave to River...yes the river makes its own way...how deep and beautiful. The conversation was heart warming and the assurance Shiva gave Raavi with a kiss..perfect❤️

The end was amazing...Krish...my poor boy😆

Loved reading this Chikki...I know you are busy these days...but I would love to read something new from you🤗

Thank you so much Pri for the detailed comment. It made my day.

I don't even know what the show converted Raavi into. Though I haven't seen the last 2weeks episodes. Shivi is my fav ship but I really really want my Rishvi ship to sail too

Awww Priii🤗 I would definitely write once I am a bit more free❤️

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Read all parts in a go😍

So sweet story

Though i didnt liked this Raavi but i feel if a boy or girl forgets his/her existence then its wrong but only one thing can make it right which is the other person accepting them fully and helping them gain that confidence back and Shiva did that

I loved it🤗

Apologies for the late reply ..no idea how I missed your comment. Yeah I don't like this Raavi too- I liked her to be stronger but I thought that maybe she would try to mould herself just to fit in some people do that and hence this story .

I am so glad you liked it❤️Hoping to read something new from you

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Apologies for the late reply ..no idea how I missed your comment. Yeah I don't like this Raavi too- I liked her to be stronger but I thought that maybe she would try to mould herself just to fit in some people do that and hence this story .

I am so glad you liked it❤️Hoping to read something new from you

Hi dear🤗

Its okay❤️

I doubt meri taraf se kuch aega bhi🤕

Loved the story...

Finally shivi understood what they lacked in their relationship is communication... Which is also same in the show ..

The fear of raavi is depicted in very beautiful n her efforts to make this relationship work.. n shiva maturity n concern for raavi uff jst awesome..

I read these story almost 8 to 9 times...

If possible kindly share ur other work i would love to read it.. all the best...

Looveeed this story…

The last part was sooo sweet..

It was soo a cute confession..

Ahahahah poor Krish..

Originally posted by: freebird_dd

Loved the story...

Finally shivi understood what they lacked in their relationship is communication... Which is also same in the show ..

The fear of raavi is depicted in very beautiful n her efforts to make this relationship work.. n shiva maturity n concern for raavi uff jst awesome..

I read these story almost 8 to 9 times...

If possible kindly share ur other work i would love to read it.. all the best...

I am crying now..you have reread my stories it means a lot to me.

Thank you so much for the detailed comment.

Umm I would like to share but I dont know how😭For now I will tell you the names- The last ray of hope, Rishivi creations, Warmth of family