To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 14

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

It was superb

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: navk

Omg it was so beautiful 😍

I loved their confession part in the last part when krish comes

It was so romantic to be honest 😻

Awwww thank you- I was worried if the confession was upto the mark😃

Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

The ending was super se bhi upar 😘😘

This made my day 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Chikki!!!!! That was such a wonderful ending..... I loved how you expressed Shiva's fear when she runs into the bedroom so much, and his anger on his mother and his bhabhi is so true to Shiva.... He is finally looking at them without the screen of his love in place🤭. ...

Loved the Shivi conversation, and that final part with Krish was like the cherry on top of the cake (chocolate 🍫 cos that's my favorite😍).....

Can we get an epilogue to this, pretty, pretty please 🥺....

Hiya I missed you these days. I am so glad you loved it ❤️❤️

I haven't thought of an epilogue but I will be back with new stories- hope you like those 😆

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Chiki.. beautiful ending! I loved how Shiva understood all of Raavi's concerns and fears and properly addressed them ❤️

Raavi willing to change for Shiva and him stopping her from doing so was all hearts

They decided to communicate all their issues with each other in future 👏

And finally a super cute confessions with emojis in their own style!

I loved it! 🤗

Aaliya🤗 I am so glad that you could connect to it. ❤️❤️ the appreciation means a lot😆

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful ending ❤️💞

Finally Shivi cleared their mus😊

Raavi's confession in the end was unique❤️💞

Loved Shivi's romance ❤️

So glad you liked it 😆

Originally posted by: wanderer102016

Hey, read all the parts in one go!

Lovely amazing story, you’ve captures their emotions and feelings so well!
Raavi behaving differently made Shiva realize how she might have felt when he did the same!
loved the ending, communication is always the key to a good relationship ❤️

Do write more 😊

Big hug 🤗

Hello there. Thank you so much. This is one of the best compliments I have received 🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Chikki!!! This was amazing!! Not sure if I commented earlier but. I loved this.. The young shiva and raavi banter, the change in her that he disliked, Rishita being supportive in the end... Everything... You're such a talented writer!! Please do keep writing more!!!

My dearest Min this comment means so much to me. Coming from you especially- I love love your writing and have always felt like this is how it is done.

I will try my best to😆

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Chikki, what an beautiful and emotional story💜

You described their feelings so beautifully 💜

Loved it 💜💜

Sandyyyyyy🤗I am so glad you liked it😆

Originally posted by: mpks1

Chikki🤗 I knew you completed this SS few days ago and it kept staring at me whenever I visited the forum. Always kept postponing to read it all in one go but was definitely going to read it at some point. Today is my lucky day and I am also upset with myself for not reading this SS sooner but finally glad that I got to it.

I would say this the best SS on ShiVi that I read which was dealt in an emotional and sensible manner. Their conversation says it all. That is exactly what you need to mend a relationship which has been written in the best way possible.

Looking forward to reading more such OS, SS or FFs from you❤️

Prema🥺🥺🥺🥺thank you...this means so much

You feel mine to be the best. Omg I will cry a bit now and then continue

Premaaa🤗Thank you again