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i loved their raw emotions
loved it
Loved it❤❤
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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever
Beautiful update ❤️💞
Shivi once again got into a fight
Let's see how long Shivi will hide their feelings
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Love it. It was really good.
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Originally posted by: SandhiaM
Beautiful story 💜
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Originally posted by: ItsmePriya
Anu baby...Momzi loved this story❤️
I read all parts in one go...what an amazing take on Shivi...It was beautiful. Shiva Raavi finding their way back to each other without the marriage happening. I love this version of Shiva and Raavi...Soft, caring Shiva and calm and strong Raavi❤️
Loved all parts...waiting for the next part🤗
Thank you Momzi
Lets see what I will write I don't have Idea too 😆
I hope you like it
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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes
Loved it. So this was a little step back, but I think it will as one so they spring forward. Or so I hope. Shiva is being conscious of his look and seems like really wanted them to be married. Love how both of them "convince" themselves that not marrying each other was the best as they would have been living in hell.
But BJ can hopefully bring the needed change where he can make both realize what they feel for each other. And I have a feeling the first step will need to be taken from Raavi as the rejection has effected him more than Shiva likes to let on. Continue soon!❤️
Thank you so much
Lets see how much they will go forward now
But I promise this will be better than Choubey's plot
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After two weeks
It’s been whole month Krish saw Raavi at his college premises… First he tries to approach her she either smiled to him or ignore to talk to him the only thing she said to him is that he won’t tell anybody that she teach there… She is not ready yet and like to have some of her lone time…
Her reactions seems to be satisfactory to him but still he missed his friend… Looking up to her still never ever able to talk hurts him inside… Why can’t he took stand for her? Why can’t he stopped his elder brother? Even Shiva for once point out Dev but he remains silent… If he talked to her he may have let her understand the scenario… How happy she was? Even played Dandiya with her after cooking a meal to him… But he lost his friend and it hurts him really he felt bad…
Their first meeting Krish by mistake addressed her as "Raavi Bhabhi"
Raavi stood their numb as if recalling all the painful memory... After some moments she took a deep breath and smiled while looking towards him "Ab se Raavi mam kehna padega... I am your professor Krish Pandya" she ruffled his hair as she always does but pain resides in her eyes and Krish can feel it... He cursed himself a lot and that's how he lost his opportunity...
But today he made his mind no matter what he will get her apology… She can’t ignore him further he is happy to be scolded even if she wants to hit him he is ready for that but he will ask for forgiveness he won’t live with this guilt anymore… He sat outside her cabin while waiting for her but soon drifted to sleep Raavi who does not noticed anyone around locked the staff room and came out of the premises…
She was happy nowadays her work is getting fine and after much fear she decided to meet her maasima and masa pa… And even ready to acknowledge the Pandya's if they come in front of her except that Bhootnaath… For past two weeks they start their chat through wattsapp… It’s Shiva who send her an ugly duckling face and tagged Raavi in it telling her she is chudail…
Raavi tries to ignore it but later give up and find even more ugly picture for her bhootnath… They usually kept their banter on phone and talk almost every night… Raavi could not sleep yesterday because she was hell busy making fun of him… While he is fuming in anger Raavi enjoying it fullest… She came out of her shell thanks to his stupid banters but still he is the one who irritates her all the time… Can you believe the only compliment he had for her is “CHIPKALIYON KI BEAUTY QUEEN” like seriously… She had half of Somnaath guy behind her and for him she is not even beautiful… That guy really needed a reality check until unless he will say sorry to her she is not going to meet him…
“Ab agar itni hi badsurat hu to kyun dil jalaana mujhse milke Shiva”: Raavi
“Haan to main kaun sa maraa ja raha bandariya ki shakal dekhne ko… Tera mukhda dekh loon to poora din kharaab ho jaaye mera”: Shiva
“Tu mujhe kya bol raha hai… Tu khud ko dekh na bhooton ka devta”: Raavi
Their constant chats and name calling to each other is full on fire… She doesn’t know why even for fighting they just keep in touch all along…
"Aye chipkali yeh tum ladkiyan kya lagaati ho apne thopde mein jo itna chamchamaati ho"
"What do you mean? Thopda seriously face nahi bol sakta aur tujhe kyun jaanna hai yeh sab... Tune ladki pataa li hai" Raavi pouted thinking he had a girlfriend or something...
While Shiva is asking because he forgot the namee of cream Rishita asked... And he knows Raavi used the same cream...
"Haan to... Hain meri 36 girlfriend... Ek jaati hai to dusri aati hai"
Raavi felt hurt, angry, sad and all other emotions at one minute... Hence she blocked his number and decided to not message him...
She entered in her home and starts doing her daily chores while her eyes are constant on her phone… It's past 11pm she unblocked him and get that he is offline... "Gadheda... Block kiya tha to call bhi kar sakta tha na itna bhaav kyun khaata hai ladka" She start feeling restless... Something is not right ...Why Bhoot naath is not disturbing her? Why he is not irritating her? Is she only at fault? Both name called each other and he is the person who started all that then why? She thought to remove his view from her mind but still it’s not easy at last she ignored every thing and decided to call him…
Shiva who is busy to find his younger sibling checking each and every house of his friends… It’s going to be 12 soon he must return till this time… He had noticed his troubled face as if he is trying to hide something in which he is not good at… Why didn’t he forced him to share his troubles? Did he get low score? Or something bad happened? While Shiva is engrossed in his thought he picked the call without checking the caller id “Dhara Bhabhi… Krish aa gaya kya? Maine sab jagah dekha pan vo kahin nahi mil rahaa… Ek baar aane do maine usse chodna nahi hai” Shiva start uttering his nonsense while his voice broke… He is scared right now Raavi can feel it… Shiva is strong man he never broke easily… But right now he is trembling in fear he saw his mother lifeless as her whole world ends right there... Dhara Bhabhi isn't eating anything even though she is pregnant she is just keep murmuring Krish name...
“Krish ghar nahi aaya… Par college se to sab bache nikal gaye the jab main nikli thi to gaya kahaan?” Raavi asked him tensely… As soon Shiva heard her voice he felt as if someone wounded his wounded heart… Tears ran through his eyes… He is hell bent scared even though Krish do mischief he love his brother a lot and even getting thought of something bad happened is killing him inside…
“Shiva kya hua… Tu pareshan hai… Kahaan pe hai tu bta mujhe?” Raavi asked him in demanding tone… And here Shiva is scared as if he would lose his brother as he lost his father he doesn’t give it much thought “Jahaan bachpan mein pareshan hone pe hota tha” He even can’t finish his sentence Raavi cut the call and without even checking herself rushed to the place… She even forgot to take her dupatta and reached at the destined location within 30 minutes…
Shiva keep calling Krish friends while Dev and Gaumbi are searching him at different locations… Since he had no idea he just sit there while trying to remember something Krish said or they missed… He isn’t someone who got scared of scolding when he get less number… Also he gave up smoking long ago no other bad habits he had… While Shiva was lost in his thought he heard voice of local goons it seems they are mistreating someone…
“Gunda ji… Are mera matlab hai mujhe aapka naam nahi pata hai na… Mujhe please jaane dijiye emergency hai” Shiva heard Raavi’s voice and without thinking much he got ready to kill all those hooligans today… As he reach there he saw Raavi standing in between 6 boys in her night suit capri till her knee and a crop top she just realizes her condition and trying to cover herself with hands… “Kya hai madam yun raat ko akele akele ghum rahi ho… Boyfriend bhaag gaya kya? Koi nahi vo chala gaya to hum to hai” One of the guy tries to reach her shoulder but stopped as soon he heard a whistle loud and clear…
“Seeti ka jawaab seeti se… Lagta hai mera waala gunda aa gaya… (Raavi saw Shiva at the side so she throw her scooty at roadside and rushed to him while Shiva held her hand authoritatively and pulled her behind him) Meri team waala aa gaya....Shiva tu aa gaya… Khada kya hai bajaa na bahut der se bhopu baj rahe hai inke” Raavi smiled while looking at him but stopped as she sensed that he is really fuming with anger and today if they get caught in his hand… Shiva might kill them all…
Shiva without thinking much growled in between and start kicking their a****… The fight start getting ugly Raavi never ever saw him losing his control like this… While they were six and he is one but still he is not going to stop today and these people are never going to tease any girl in their life for sure… Raavi thought for a while and fall in ground dramatically holding her ankles “Aaaah Shiva”… And her trick worked Shiva left them all move towards her while Raavi signaled them to go from there… “Tu… Tu thik hai na Raavi? Kahaan chot lagi tujhe haan dikha” Raavi felt bad that she have to lie but for stopping him so that he won’t ask for troubles that was necessary…
“Shayad paanv mud gaya hoga… Tu bhi na Raavi matar jaisa dimaag hai tera bilkul khayaal nahi rakhti apna” While he kept checking her ankle… Raavi starts her ogling session towards the man beside he is indeed handsome she never noticed to care but when he behave so softly his inner beauty reflex at his face and it is really impossible for “Somnaath ki sabse sundar ladki” to resist his charm… She kept smiling looking towards her while Shiva really feel weird due to her behavior…
“Main… Main theek hu Shiva” Raavi said when she get she is caught admiring him like a bitch… What he must be thinking about her? Why she can’t stop? She decided to change the topic and come to the actual point “Krish ka kuch pata chala Shiva”… Shiva refuses and looked down he is hell bent scared Gaumbi and Dhara Bhabhi have each other to share their grief…. Dev can share his pain with Rishita but what about him he was feeling really low and lonely… Raavi hugged him tightly while he reciprocate like a small child his grip is strong as if she will run away too without hearing him… Raavi pat his back so that he relaxed a bit…
“Shiva… Chal ek baar na college dekh lete hai… Ho sakta hai vo bandar vahi kahin kumbhkaran ban gaya ho aur hum sab aise hi pareshaan ho rahe hai” Shiva wipe his tears and looked towards her… Shiva went to the college first even guard told him that there is no one around he checked it too… But still he think may be he will get him if he checked by himself and Raavi may get entry as she is professor there… Both Raavi and Shiva in their own vehicle goes to college indeed Guard let them go inside when Raavi seeks permission…
They kept checking every corridor, library, classroom and about to go from there dejectedly when they heard Krish voice… “Koi kholo… Raavi… Raavi tu hai yahaan” Shiva and Raavi shared a smile and went there… Raavi opened the door of staff room and here he was… Shiva hugged him tightly as if trying to check that he was really there… With him… HE slapped lightly at his head “Daraa diya tha Champu tune ek call nahi kar sakta tha… Aur yahaan kaun se pakode tal rahaa tha tu?” Shiva said and called his family members that he found Krish and coming soon… While Raavi kept looking at Krish smilingly she is so happy that he is safe and sound…
“Acha hua Raavi… Phas gaya tha main yahaan nahi to… Nahi to kabhi bhi tujhse kehne ki himmat nahi jod paata… Yaar teri chupi nahi jheli jaati mujhse… Mujhe meri dost waapis chaahiye tu kahegi na to 1000 baar sorry likh ke dunga uthak baithak bhi karunga bas tu ab aise gussa na reh” Krish apologized with heavy heart… It was difficult for him he knows how bad he feels when she ignored to talk to him… Either she went with other students or she held some Professors for long time… Raavi remembered how she reacted she is running away from him he must have came here to apologize to her… While she even doesn’t noticed him and locked the door herself tears start flowing through her eyes as she realize it’s her mistake… She locked him inside without even checking once…
Because of her whole Pandya house is in trouble… They were searching Krish relentlessly while she who is at fault even doesn’t know about it… She is terrible… Really worst…
“It was my mistake… I didn’t checked it… I locked the door” Raavi said and tears starts flowing through her eyes while Krish is trying to stop her sob… Shiva stood their numb Did Krish do all this for her apology? And she locked him inside did he listened it right? That’s why she is too sure that Krish is here only…
Shiva held her hand tightly “Haan hai galti teri… Teri hi galti hai… Tu samajhti kya hai khud ko? Aur dhyaan kahaan rehta tera haan… Agar Krish ko yahaan kuch ho jaata to… Chal vo chod ghar pe humaari apaahij maa hai yeh nahi pahucha yeh sun ke unko kuch ho jaata to… Gaumbi Dev Main pagalon ki tarah isse har jagah dhoond rahe aur madam isse band karke bhul gayi… Haan ab yeh magarmach ke aansoo kisse dikha rahi hai… Dhara Bhabhi pet se hai waqt mein khaana nahi khaaya to bache ko kuch ho sakta hai... Par kiske kaaran pareshan hai vo tu? Kitni baar kahaa hai tujhe pehle socha kar samjha kar phir kuch kiya kar.... Kis baat ki jaldi rehti hai tujhe... Chal aaj to Krish tha kal ko koi aur bacha hua tha... Uske maa baap chod denge tujhe... Tu na sach mein nahi janti ek maa ko kaisa lagta hai jab uska bacha bhooka hota hai, jab vo samay par ghar nahi pahuchta kaise pataa hoga... Tujhe kya pataa ek Parivaar pe kya beetti hai… Tera khud ka to koi Pariwar hi nahi hai... Maa baap bhai behan kya pataa hai tujhe?” Shiva said the words he never meant too in anger… He was too lost that he didn’t notice that she stopped crying and looking at him as a lifeless person… She threw his hand away and untangled herself while ran to go out of there… Her tears are now stopped she is hurt deep inside… His words are working as a knife in her heart and making her weak all the time…
Krish looked at Shiva in disbelief… He get the hold of him and turned him “ Kya kahaa tune haan Raavi ka koi pariwar nahi… Kehna kya chahta hai tu ki vo anaath hai… Sochta bhi hai tu Shiva ki kya bol raha hai… Tere ek phone pe bhaagte bhaagte aa gayi… Mujhe dhoondne mein tere saath khadi rahi tujhe sambhala tere dard ko samjha taqleef ko samjha… Tu usse yeh keh rahaa hai ki uska koi pariwar nahi… Parwah nahi usse Shiva… Sometimes you should really work with your anger… Dupatta tak nahi liya hai usne ? Kahin kissi lafange ne kuch…” Shiva stopped Krish before completing his sentence… How can he do that? She must be hurt a lot… He really loses his control sometimes she must be devastated… She was doing all these things selflessly for him if she had no one why did she followed him at this hour? Krish words reminded him the incident happened few hour before when some guys tries to touch her… How could he left her like this, at this hour… Shiva came out of his thought and made Krish to go home in taxi while he rushed towards her home…
Raavi is really not thinking straight… She always had abandonment issues and whenever someone trigger this point she loses her control… Even though she tried she loses her sanity… While she was driving tears covers the view and she couldn’t drive sanely… Even though Shiva took time to follow her but he soon catches her and kept calling her name so that she stopped and nothing happen to her… But Raavi kept uttering to herself “Tera koi pariwar nahai hai Raavi… Tu nahi samjhegi… Tera to koi pariwar nahi hai…” Shiva saw a truck is about to hit her while she had no idea where she is heading he called her name aloud “Raaviiiii… Sambhal ke” ....
Words that you don't want to hear
Words you hate
And if those words come from your loved ones
World stops... You start losing everything... Your sense... Your choices... And sometimes even you...
Words you don't want to speak
Words that hurt other because of you
Sometimes made you so miserable that you won't able to apologize for them
Because you have no other choice then to repent it all alone...
Lovely story progression!!🌸🤍