ShiVi FanFiction // Arcane // Chapter 10 P.G 53 / 16.03.2022 - Page 21

Inaayaa the flashbacks are beautiful. There is such a depth to it

Despite this being such a long update, I can't stop myself from asking for more❤️

Inaaya girl, that was am-az-ing!!!! Loved it, I'm gonna read it through once again and then come back to comment on this, but, hopefully the next update won't make us wait so much......

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Sorry, I'm so late with my comment bub, but I had an exam that I just finished up with yesterday☺. This was soooo beautiful.... This chapter was just.. sigh....

She wants to burn him into her fingers, burn him into her hands and body and into the marrow of her bones. He is already burnt into her soul, burnt into every part of her that matters.

I swear Inaaya girl, this line, it felt like you'd reached into the depths of me before you wrote this.To me, this is what love is, always, knowing that this person is yours, knowing that you belong to your partner.....

He knows how to read her heart. Shiva can read her like her favourite book, and she has been softened by the number of times he has cracked her open and thumbed through her chapters, traced his fingers over her lines and made annotations in the margins of her pages. he has read her worst moments, and instead of turning her into persona non grata, instead of sticking her on the shelf and letting her crumble into pieces he has kept her, weaving himself into her story.

As a book lover, as someone who believes in the magic and beauty of words in real life just as much as in our imaginary worlds, this touched my soul.....

It was super emotional, but also written so sensitively, so softly I didn't even realise when I was done with the chapter....

I'm guessing the next chapter is supposed to be Krish finding out? Hopefully we can have a quicker update this time....?

Loads of love Inaaya💓❣️💓......

Jaan.....I have no words ❤

It was such a beautiful emotional hot rollercoaster ride.Babe thanks for tagging💋💋

WOW....THE ANGER THE APOLOGY....AND OFCOURSE SOME INNOCENT THARKINESS😉

Loved it babe❤❤🌹💃

I mean I was emotional soo invested from the beginning to end I forgot where I existed😆

Keep writing 👏

Love you❤🌹💃

It was beautiful.

Well well well, it was worth the wait!!!!! This is sooo cute.❤️

Although your Raavi is shown as so much mature here, she understands her Shiva so much, but still the dobiness is there....How come she doesn't realise Shiva loves her...Shiva is always action more than words. Yet, she is shocked that he loves her....that was so deliciously nice...

I love how beautifully you have shown these two growing up and their relationship evolving from friends to enemies to friends again and then to love and ultimately being the soulmates they are destined to be.

It's the little moments, the gestures, the way they express themselves, that has my heart 💖. That makes this particular FF so much.

Ohh... I don't know when you will update again, but please dear don't make us wait..

Although waiting and then you delivering us with something this great, iska maaza hi kuch aur hain...

Thank you😊🥰

wow.......this was kind of best update so far in regards to their story.......

we kept thinking about it, coz we heard it from the 3rd person........now raavi is thinking about everything .....their past, progression, feelings, confession......hurt, pretend hate, love, longing it makes it all the more special.......

i loved reading about how they felt, pretend hate, apologies and den being woth each other just like hand and glove......it was so natural for dem and family was understanding too.......

i also loved they are so habituated and domestically in line with each other.......it gives immense happiness....❤️ wanted to just keep reading.....

in short this update had everything innocence, love, care, hurt, dependability, with tadka of little tharkipan😆........would love to read more about their 1st step towards eachother......

he gave up arguing on things which didnt matter....maturity and love......

amazing update👍🏼👏

It was very long... and beautiful update👏

Loved Shivi's flashback moments❤️

Raavi is so mature here, loved how you depicted her feelings and thoughts👏

Shiva's feelings were also beautifully described👏

Loved Shivi's confession and the steamy moments☺️❤️

such a beautiful chapter!!

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

I love, love, LOVED it

waited so long & it was totally worth it 🥺❤️

thank you so much for this 🥰

Awww, thank you so much! 🥺❤️

You won't have to wait much for the next! Will update in the next couple of hours!

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Beautiful ❤️

Seeing Raavi unsure was a sad moment for me 🥺.

They have been adorable ☺️

Thank you so much! ❤️

I know, writing that was also difficult for me! but I had to