kaisa yeh pyar hai ss updt. pg, 19 - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sorry for the delay.I have not been feeling well. I was not very happy from less comments or saythe lack of response that I got from my previous update. I was kinda got disappointed and a little disheartened to write further as well. Anyway, I will write as much as possible from now on. Those who have been requesting for me to write, I will not disappoint you further. From here I will also include Riya'spoint of view as well. So hope you all like this update.

Riya’s Pov:

I wanted to be with Arjun in every step of his life like a shadow as well as a partner. But fate played a cruel joke on me. You all have come to know by now that, it started the day Arjun saved us from a bunch of bullies. I admired him. I admired his friendship. I kind of got a small crush on him. You know I am an introvert by nature. I take time to open up with people. But once I crossed that phase I am totally a chatterbox. I am finding ways to thank Arjun for his favor. I am stealing glances of him oblivious to him and others. I think he knows that someone is stalking him but he just ignores it. Okay cool yar I am not a stalker of his but what to do, his personality and aura are so positive and vibrant that I could not resist. Ok, chill, now where was I? Oh yes, I am thinking to thank him, but as I said, I am a shy person to converse with a person, so I came with the idea to write a letter to him. As fresher’s party was going to happen, I got to know he is performing for us, I am thrilled. I took my time getting ready for the party. My friends insisted on wearing something western. We shopped till dropped. I arrived with all my friends looking around for his and his gang of friends. There they are, checking on the arrangement near the stage and food counter. But he is nowhere to be seen, I am anxiously waiting to see a glimpse of him. Then all of a sudden the light dims and we see an outline of a man on stage facing down and then it brightens all lights focused on him. I am so relieved to see him. His performance is phenomenal. I did not know that he has such a soulful voice.

After the performance, the party came to an end. I saw a waiter going to cross him and I called him and asked him to pass the letter to him. I know I can only admire him from far but cannot be in his life. When I see him with the letter I am assured that he will read the letter and life goes on. I am happily passing my days with my friends and glimpses of him. I am near my goal. I want to be independent. I want to achieve my goals before thinking about anything else. But my heart goes out to him. I admire him and his determination of achieving his goals that adds to my ambition. I want to make something out of myself. I want to pursue my dream of becoming a lawyer. I am working hard for it. I know I will achieve it.

One day I see him, depressed and very sad that he is venting his frustration on his friends. I can't see him like that. I know I thought to not interfere with his life. But what can I do? My heart just does not listen to my mind. I was at the tug of war between them. At last, my heart won and I wrote a letter and slipped it into his book. I know it’s totally filmy but what can I say? I am not ready to face him directly. I could see that the letter did its job and I got a new friend as well. I cannot resist falling for him.

THE END

Sorry guys, it’s not up to the mark like usual but I wanted to write it from her perspective as well. Hope you all like it and comment more as well.Colored Text

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Unisha dear

Awesome and beautiful part🤗🤗

I really liked pov of Riya & the soft attraction she is feeling was beautifully penned

Everything mentioned was like a feel of love

Waiting to know why Arjun was like that

Your pms are done 😊

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Unisha dear

Awesome and beautiful part🤗🤗

I really liked pov of Riya & the soft attraction she is feeling was beautifully penned

Everything mentioned was like a feel of love

Waiting to know why Arjun was like that

Your pms are done 😊

Continue soon 🤗🤗

thanks a lot dear.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow jis tarah se riya ka pov darshaya hai arjun ke liye uski feelings per na kahpana aur letter part sweet per yeh arjun kyu disturbed hai kya riya ka letter koi kaam kar payega all updates r fab dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey, Unisha, thanks a lot for coming back on our requests....the chapter was simply beautiful....I liked Riya's side of pov....her soft, sweet & pure admiration n attraction towards Arjun n at the same time her reluctance n shyness to face him directly because of her introvert nature. Will be waiting for the next part very eagerly... So, I hope to get to read the next chapter asap. And, thanks to @golden_aura for the pm.

Edited by naaheean - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!!! You are back 🤗

awesome loved it

thnx for pm update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey Unisha, I hope you haven’t forgotten about updating this story. Plz update it soon. Waiting eagerly .


P.S: I've just come across your another story on Ariya, that is: Dil Ka Kya Kasoor, I really found it awesome but, I got little hurt & disappointed when I found out at the end that you've left it hanging in just before it could have get a proper happy closure. If you have enough time & proper plot-ideas, I'm earnestly requesting you to complete this story & all other incomplete stories on Ariya too. I will be hoping to get a positive response from your side in this regard. Thanks in advance.

Edited by naaheean - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Well come back dear so glad to see u after a age🤗

Sad to hear abt ur health How r u feeling now?

Wow amazing chapter

Riya’s POV was beautifully written👏

She remembers her first meeting with Arjun how he saved her & her friends from ragging

All their conversations through latters whenever Arjun upset Riya’s latter always helped him😃

She always encouraged him to get his dream🤗

Riya wanted to be with Arjun every step of his life but fate play game😭

She want to become lawyer & she works so hard for it

Now just waiting for Ariya to come face to face

Continue soon

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