FF - Forget Me Not|Part 15 updated on page 42 - Page 6

Amazing writer ho aap👏🙌..jitna show ke liye excited hi..utni hi aapke iss FF ke liye bhi..super duper hit hai ye💥..4th part pyaara sa hai.."new friendship"☺️.. isko continue kar ke rakhna please 🤝..aur next part ka Saturday ko wait rahega⏳

Chlo story par aate hai

Viru ne Bawari ka favourite breakfast kiya usko yaad karke..even Bawari ne wahi kiya.. I'm gonna declared BREAD BUTTER as national breakfast ( for PurVir fans)..upma, poha, idli bhool gayi mein🙃

Atleast Isme Pur ne apne past ko jaan ne ki koshish shuru kar di hai..merko idhr Viru ka hesitation pasand aaya....woh car mein khud se kya baate kar raha tha😆

Knife waala accha tha..chota sa funny element☺️

PurVir ki coffee date.. conversation idhr acchi thi😍..Viru 😂.. waiter ne naam pucha..ye mukhiji bta raha hai🤦..dono cuties ne kaise friendship ki☺️..awww this is cute yr❤️

D jealous hua..maza aaya..Pur ne bhi accha sunaya isko🥳.. biwi thodi hai jo haq dikha raha hai..dost reh sirf😡

Chlo merko idhr age factors mil sakta hai😌

Pratap family ke baaki members ko bhi sahi ss mil gaya👍🏼

Originally posted by: PSP07

Amazing writer ho aap👏🙌..jitna show ke liye excited hi..utni hi aapke iss FF ke liye bhi..super duper hit hai ye💥..4th part pyaara sa hai.."new friendship"☺️.. isko continue kar ke rakhna please 🤝..aur next part ka Saturday ko wait rahega⏳

Chlo story par aate hai

Viru ne Bawari ka favourite breakfast kiya usko yaad karke..even Bawari ne wahi kiya.. I'm gonna declared BREAD BUTTER as national breakfast ( for PurVir fans)..upma, poha, idli bhool gayi mein🙃

Atleast Isme Pur ne apne past ko jaan ne ki koshish shuru kar di hai..merko idhr Viru ka hesitation pasand aaya....woh car mein khud se kya baate kar raha tha😆

Knife waala accha tha..chota sa funny element☺️

PurVir ki coffee date.. conversation idhr acchi thi😍..Viru 😂.. waiter ne naam pucha..ye mukhiji bta raha hai🤦..dono cuties ne kaise friendship ki☺️..awww this is cute yr❤️

D jealous hua..maza aaya..Pur ne bhi accha sunaya isko🥳.. biwi thodi hai jo haq dikha raha hai..dost reh sirf😡

Chlo merko idhr age factors mil sakta hai😌

Pratap family ke baaki members ko bhi sahi ss mil gaya👍🏼

Thank you for liking my FF.🤗

I'm loving writing this for such lovely comments. Makes it worth it.

I caught up on the chapters these are so good ❤️

I love that he’s trying to win her heart not just jog her memory. This is what I wanted to see on the show.

Yes you brought up the age factor 👏

Their coffee date is too cute. She knows him so well that he won’t like coffee and how he likes his tea.

Even the small moments when he remembers something about Purvi is so cute

Honestly you write so well and the story is very intriguing 👍🏼

Waiting for the next part 🤗

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

I caught up on the chapters these are so good ❤️

I love that he’s trying to win her heart not just jog her memory. This is what I wanted to see on the show.

Yes you brought up the age factor 👏

Their coffee date is too cute. She knows him so well that he won’t like coffee and how he likes his tea.

Even the small moments when he remembers something about Purvi is so cute

Honestly you write so well and the story is very intriguing 👍🏼

Waiting for the next part 🤗

Thank you for liking it and the lovely comments.🤗

Yes, a lot of what I've wrote is just what I've personally wanted to see in the show.

The age factor needed to be there so then Daksh is quite assured that Dhwani could never fall for Vir. Plus that's why all of us are watching this show.

Hopefully will update the next chapter over the weekend. When we have no new episode to watch.

Awesome story telling, Fazz! Read all of them, there are so many similarities. I liked your version more than the real show.

Also, as you noted in the 1st post, I am glad you have not used Hindi dialogues because I find it hard to read hindi words written in English 😊

Can't wait to read upcoming episodes here before we watch it on TV 😊

Added later: Liked how you have incorporated Veer-Sudha's budding relationship too. I wish Saba reads this to at least learn how stories are told.

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Awesome story telling, Fazz! Read all of them, there are so many similarities. I liked your version more than the real show.

Also, as you noted in the 1st post, I am glad you have not used Hindi dialogues because I find it hard to read hindi words written in English 😊

Can't wait to read upcoming episodes here before we watch it on TV 😊

Added later: Liked how you have incorporated Veer-Sudha's budding relationship too. I wish Saba reads this to at least learn how stories are told.

Thank you. 🤗 Glad you liked it. Yeah there have been a few similarities. I guess me and Saba thought the same.😂

At first I was just going to concentrate on PurVir only but thought, use up some words using the other characters.😂

Fazz🤗🤗

All I can say is fabulous 😍😍😍

Read both the parts in a go and I forgot about the actual show and imagined this in the episode😳

Please do write more and more.. 😳

Waiting for the next part..

This such a perfect update...PurVir conversation and their small breakfast date...❤️😳

Vir remembers Purvi's favorite dish...My heart...❤️

A bit of hesitation and familiarity from Dhwani's side...The trust she has on him...Despite her not knowing him properly...Beautifully written

And finally you brought the age factor between them...Which the show hardly mentions...

Can't wait to see how Vir reacts after hearing the whole conversation of D-D...😈

And yesss...Loved the progression in Veer and Sudha's story too..

Saturday is too far...Can't wait for the update..Let Saba take some more ideas from your FF...😉😆

Fazzz, I had not read this FF up untill now, I just went through first few lines and decided to read it later once you complete it..

But yesterday everyone was talking about it, so I though let's goooo and read it...

This is faaaar better than what we see in show.. whatever you have written is real scenario..

Show ppl might have to create a drama for TV audiance and they might have to add some crap or BUILD UP .

I liked it because you kept it soo natural.. Dwani's thoughts were soo natural, any normal person will think about her past, unlike Dwani in the show, who doesn't even bother about her past.. 🙄 Vir's reactions were very genuine.. 👍👍

And the quality of your writing is realy good .

And this is tooo much of similarities to be coincidence.. 😜

Sooo please release your next chapters ASAP, just incase show maker steal your ideas..

Keep it up dear...!!!

Ayeee fazzzz🤗

I loved this chapter soo much yrr😳

Kitna pyaara tha ye, PurVir ki coffee date, baccho wala part, Veer & Sudha wala bhi( saba ne pta nhi show mei inn characters ke saath kya kachra kiya h🤣)

Mei seriously bol rahi hu your take on this track is far better than show's writer yrr💯👌👏

All the dialogues were soo good yrr👍

& Also I'm super excited for the next part..age gap wali baat aayegi next mei is what I'm sensing😳😆

Yahi hona chahiye yrr show mei bhi because yahi sabse best storyline h👍🏼 just go & take charge from saba already yrr😎😆

But on a serious note this was beautiful yrr.. specially that bread & butter part was too awesome, completely unexpected yrr👏 purvi's hesitance soo well portrayed👏

Kudos! Can't wait for the weekend now😂