Sabherwal Series: Shot #5 updated Pg24 (27/10) - Page 9

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

nice one liked it

Originally posted by: Dumpling

Wow nice update.

Thankyou for keeping betty real ,as they keep oscillating between being their normal wicked self to being sweet to their bhabhi.

With time they will change as they get to know the real anokhi and you have beautifully potrayed it.

So thank you for saying that!!

Originally posted by: lavs_157

Akshu!! 😍😍

Loved your take on Bebo and Kitty and their changing dynamics with Anokhi.
I am glad you didn’t make them have a complete change of heart and become chummy! But how with time and with interactions with Anokhi, they had a better understanding of her and also themselves.
I loved the Bebo-Anmol track got closure. Coz no matter how Bebo annoyed me, I would never wish an Anmol type of guy on any of them. Kitty always felt redeemable to me. I loved how you showed her inner feelings regarding her achievement not being given priority over her brothers

And I am glad you had Gayathri speaking up for her daughter.

It was good to see Betty growing up. Beautifully penned Akshu. 🤗

I can’t wait see how you write other characters story.

Vote for Yash and Kanchan. I want to know their dynamics and their dynamics with Shakhi.

Tum logo ke saath saath yeh meri bhi iccha thi yaar... I wanted to see more of Bebo-Kitty to understand their position and situation in the household. They seemed pampered but also very neglected. That's why I assumed that there definitely might have been some discrimination between siblings in the Sabherwal house.

True that. I would never trust a guy like Anmol, nor want his kind to be with any girl. They can die single for all I care.

You will see for sure. I am excited to post for Kanchan and Yash bcz it talks about things that really exist in marriages but aren't visible to naked eyes... I am really hopeful for a good response..

Thank you Lavs ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: wamavasant

I never found shagun's turmoil this interesting.

I wonder am I the only one who disliked both the shagun 😆. I feel nothing about shagun 1.0 or 2.0 both are same to me may be if shaguj 1.0 had continued as shagun in later half of the story I would have connected to her.

I must say your OS has brought me on a stage that I can connect to her story a little if not. I always wanted her to question shaurya that why he never supported her but doesn't bat an eye before supporting his anokhi.

It was very interesting to read her perspective after the incident.

Loved it akshuu ❤️

I personally liked both, but I didnt like Swarda much. I think the team could have done better or maybe Swarda should have done better with the expressions.

I swear! I mean Shagun 1.0 and 2.0 were both were forthcoming with their intentions and thoughts, but I always wondered why didn't Shagun feel any jealousy or anger after ShaKhi's marriage and Shaurya's unconditional support...!! 🥱

Thank you for commenting Wama!! We miss you here... Join us soon ❤️

Originally posted by: wamavasant

Sorry for being the late one and thanks for coming up with is OS series

I always wanted bebo , kitty and anokhi to have this sort of relationship neither too friendly nor as toxic as it was just a normal relationship and your OS beautifully presents that.

I loved the gradual changes how they have adjusted with each other but the core nature of bebo and kitty remains the same.

Loved all the scenes akshuu...

Arrey.. Never thank me for writing stories. After all, these are all my "mann mei dabi hui icchaye" that come out in form of fanfics 😆 Mai bhi apni wishes hi puri karti hu likh ke... I'm very fortunate that you guys like it and respond with such lovely comments...

Thank you Wama... You know how much I love the neutral aspects of such love-hate relationships 😆

Originally posted by: aumig

Kanchan and yash

Originally posted by: ShaKhi1820

Welcome to SAAKK forum and hope to interact more with you... And I promise you wont have to wait for long.

Love,

Akshu ❤️

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Lol! Anmol would never be redeemed in my eyes. Molesting a girl is something that is never an unintentional mistake. If I knew that a guy has molested/harrassed/eve-teased a woman before, I would never ever trust him again.

Yep. In the initial episodes, I noticed how the girl's studies or ambitions weren't mentioned at all. Like they spoke of Kanchan being unable to "sudharofy" Yash, but not a word for the sisters. I believed that they were raised to believe in male entitlement as well.

Kanchan and Yash coming up next!! You might not find their story as a cliche, but hopeful that you will see the intent behind it....

P.S. You know, initially, you wouldn't comment or like my stories but we used to interact a lot on EDT... I used to wonder, how do I make her read my stories.... She seems so insightful, I used to think I would get honest reviews from you😆

Can't wait for the KaYa story!!

That postscript is so sweet! You were the infamous Akshu that all the girls talked to and talked about! I'm sad we had such minimal interaction those days. And the funny part is I read everything on this forum but had a really bad habit of lurking and not really interacting with people. I wish you had just sent me a message. I'm always shy/introverted initially. BUT LOOK AT US NOW!!

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Jen!!

I always look forward to reading yur review!! It always contributes to my vocabulary, TBH 😆

Shashi Tharoor ki student ho kya? (Just kidding!)

Thank you so much for always motivating me with sure exciting words ❤️❤️

Yash and Kanchan are definitely next in the story... Watch this space, will upload the chapter on Sunday or Monday...

Actually, I have decided something for Babli. Thinking of writing it. But not sure how to exactly...

Much more love,

Akshu ❤️

Hehehe😆😆 that’s cute

I love using vocabulary excitingly

U May be kidding but truth is I love Dr. Tharoor’s works and vocabulary and a big fan of it❤️

Haan write something for her too, she deserves her own story, doesn’t she? Indeed, give it some time and think over it

Devar and Devrani Sabherwal please want their love story so as u said Sunday, it is tomorrow, I am ears to ur story now❤️

U give us quality stories that is fond nostalgia of Our show and couple, we will keep motivating you a lot, much love to u girl🤗

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Thank you so much... (Pls tell me your name!)

I think the most beautiful part of the show was gradual empowerment of Kanchan and Gayatri indirectly through Anokhi. It was very thrilling to watch Kanchan finally say "to hell with this shit, I am doing it my way!" 😆

My name is Pyia.

Yess! Although i wish we could have seen more of it on the show.

I cant wait to see what you come up with for Yash and Kanchan, if that is your next one. 😊