Mansh FF - Kal Ho Na Ho

Part 6

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Anurag and Prerna are on their way.

Anurag: Prihu, I'm sorry that I drank too much.

Prerna: You have promised me that you won't drink. I will see how much you will keep up your word.

Meanwhile, Shivansh & Mannat attend the church service.

Jhanvi's hotel had made tremendous progress which helped her to pay off her debts.

Mannat sees Jhanvi happy & smiles.

Shivansh: I have seen the smile on your face after a long time. I never knew that you have such a beautiful smile.

Mannat: It's because we got rid of that stress of paying the debts to them.

Shivansh: Say thank you to me as I helped your mother in the business. I know you stopped smiling ever since your father left the world, but the world doesn't end there. How would your father feel if he sees you sad & angry all the time?

Mannat's heart gets touched.

Mannat gets restless at night as she develops feelings for Shivansh. The next day, Mannat gets up but gets lost in Shivansh's thoughts.

Mannat finishes her breakfast & is about to leave.

Jhanvi: Is everything okay? Have you forgotten something?

Mannat: No.

While Mannat is on her way, she realizes that she left her tiffin box at home & comes to take it.

Jhanvi: I was about to call you up & tell you that you left your lunch box, but good that you were not very far away.

The song plays:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4PXP_-5LFdU

An interviewer questions Shivansh, Mannat, Anurag, & Prerna about their perspective about love.

Shivansh imagines Mannat.

Mannat imagines Shivansh.

Anurag & Prerna imagine each other.

Shivansh: Love is beautiful. It gives the feeling that all dreams come true, it gives new destinations, eyes notice colors, even red colors look nice.

Mannat goes to the shop & purchases a red dress.
Shvansh continues: The lips say the same name for every minute & second.

Anurag: Prerna

Prerna: Anurag

Mannat: Shivansh

Shivansh: Sweety (referring to Mannat)

Mannat to Soumya: Initially, I used to get pissed off with Shivansh, but now I love him. I think about him day & night. I get the feeling that Shivansh is near me. Have I lost it?

Soumya: No, that's love. I love Rudra

Rudra: I love Soumya.

Rudra calls up Soumya.

Soumya: Hi, What a pleasant surprise! Can you meet me today evening?

Soumya: Sure.

After the conversation, Soumya said, "Rudra has called me up to meet him."

Mannat: Did you confess your love to Rudra?

Soumya: Not yet, but I hope he proposes to me. You confess your love to Shivansh before it gets late.

Mannat: All the best.

Soumya: I wish you the same.

Mannat: I don't know what Shivansh feels for me.

Soumya: Be confident. Everything will be fine.

Rudra & Soumya meet in Water's Edge.

Rudra: You look gorgeous. You have become thin.

Soumya: Even you look great.

Rudra & Soumya go to the restaurant to have a cup of tea.

Gaura gets the same question on love.

Gaura: There is no such thing called love marriage. It is an arranged marriage.

The next day

Mannat meets Anurag & Prerna.

Anurag: Lovely dress.

Mannat: Even you wore a nice shirt & a tie.

Mannat: I love Shivansh, but I don't know whether he feels for me the same way.

Anurag: Only an insane person would not love you & Shivansh is a great guy.

Perena: Confess your love to him quickly.

Anurag gives her the bouquet of roses & said, "Give it to Shivansh."

Mannat: How sweet!

Anurag: I'm always there for you.

Mannat is on the way to Shivansh's house. It starts raining, but Mannat plays in the rain & reaches Shivansh's house.

The doorbell rings.

Shivansh opens the door.

The song plays:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IGlKBqKrd1I

Shivansh sees the roses in Mannat's hand & said, "Sorry, I am not interested in buying."

Shivansh pretends to close the door.

Mannat gets disheartened & is about to leave.

Shivansh: I was kidding. Come in.

Mannat enters Shivansh's house.

Shivansh: You got drenched.

He gets the towel & wipes her hair.

Shivansh: Sit down.

Both sit with each other on the sofa.

Mannat: I want to tell you something.

Shivansh: Yes, tell me.

Mannat: I...

Shivansh: Say fast.

Mannat gets nervous.

Suddenly she sees Zoya's photo.

Mannat: Who is that lady?

Shivansh: She's my wife. Her name is Zoya. We got married three years back, but there was no coordination between us & one day, we had a tiff & she moved to New York.

Mannat gets shocked & broken-hearted. The tears start rolling out of her eyes.

Shivansh: Hey, everything will be fine. Zoya said she needs time to reconsider coming back & she will return.

Mannat continues to cry.

She gets up & said, "I am leaving."

Kalyani & Shivani come there.

Shivansh: What about these flowers.

Mannat: It's not for you.

She gives the flowers to Shivani.

Both hug each other emotionally.

Mannat goes near the door.

Shivansh: It's raining outside.

He gives her his jacket & said, "Wear it."

Mannat: No thanks.

She goes home crying.

At Oberoi House

Kalyani: Do you love her?

Shivansh: Who? No, I don't love Naina.

Kalyani: I didn't take her name, and I am your granny who took care of you after the demise of your parents. I know you pretty well, so you can't lie to me.

Shivansh sobs: Yes, I love her, but what can I do? I never loved any girl in my life before and have many things to tell her, but my heart is weak. When you are unable to digest even after knowing everything, then how can she digest it? How can I tell her that lady in that pic is not my wife but is my friend? Dr. Zoya and Dr. Aditya are couples, and they are treating me.

Flashback.

Shivansh goes in consultation with Dr. Aditya & Dr. Zoya.

They performed my diagnosis & said, "We have conducted some tests & wish to talk to you on some serious issues."

Zoya: You have only three months remaining, and you need to avoid stunts that will cause exertion to your heart.

Flashback ends.

Shivansh: Dadi, you tell me what I should do?

Kalyani: Technology has improved a lot, and today heart surgery has become common. I am sure that Mr. and Mrs. Hooda have the hope of saving your life. Meet them once.

Shivansh: You are my granny and can't lie to me.

Kalyani: No, I am not lying. Come with me.

Kalyani shows her the examples of many heart patients and said, "Do you remember our ex-neighbor, Gauri?"

Shivansh: Yes.

Kalyani: Her condition was worse than yours. She told the truth to Omkara before marrying him, and the latter refused to give up on her. He took all the trouble to get her heart transplanted.

Shivansh: If you say, I will meet Zoya.

The next day, Shivansh meets Zoya.

Zoya: There's a piece of good news for you. I got a ray of hope to have a heart transplant for you to lead a normal life.

Shivansh: That's really a piece of good news.

Zoya: But, before that, I need to check whether your system would be able to withstand the surgery.

Zoya takes his test.

Loved it dear🤗🤗 Kavita

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Part 6

excellent update

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Will Mannat ever learn the truth? Shivansh hid it because he thinks he has very little time.

Anupre scene was hilarious.Liked shivansh saying that the world doesn't end there.mannat loving shivansh was nice.but I wish you had described the song sequence kuch to hua scene by scene like you usually do.when the word love was mentioned mansh n anupre thinking of each other was romantic.shivansh's dialogues on love were romantic. Mannat telling soumya about loving shivansh was nice.rumya scene was nice.waiting for rumya confession.anupre encouraging mannat to propose shivansh was nice.shivansh saying that he doesn't want to buy flowers was funny. Sad that though shivansh loves mannat he lied to mannat that he is married to zoya. Poor mannat.shivansh sobbing before dadi was painful.surprising that gauri was their neighbour who had heart disease n omkara saved her by doing her surgery.will rikara enter the story?glad to know that adiya are shivansh's doctors n they are also thinking of his surgery.superb pics.i wish you had put the pics of zoya n anupre in their scenes.

Part 6

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