ShiVi Drabble: Sharam - Page 4

Jaanu!! Meri Jaan!! Utter magic with the words! I loved love loved it!! I want to hold this Raavi and hide her from the world and tell her everything is going to be okay!!That she is stronger than what anyone gives her credit for! She has so much hurt in her my little bacchi!! I am floored at how you have gotten this emotions down so well! And yes yes yes for Shiva to feel Sharam...On screen Shiva is really pissing me off lately since he's being a total twat so I want him to regret so much how he has treated her!

Can we please have a chotu sa epilogue with Shiva begging on his knees for forgiveness for his sharamful behavior!

This is going on my re-read list. ❤️❤️

Daaamn 💔🥺

But i loved it 🤗

Ashu this is so beautiful🥺🥺❤❤ thanks for giving monologue to raavi, her pain though💔

Ashu, I loved this drabble. It was beautiful and heartwrenching. ❤️😭

The dialogues were on point. 👍🏼 Every word from Raavi was oozing out her pain.

Thanks for the tag dear. 🤗

Well written👏

And I am speechless🤣

Hello girl, loved that drabble....

I think I'd mentioned in one of the EDTs before how mental health issues do relapse more often than not and that suicidal tendencies are no joke....

I've read most of your work and have loved it all😘😘 and I really hope that they atleast take a part of this into the Shivi confrontation we're all waiting for...

Do continue this if you can, it would make for a great oneshot...

PS thank you for the tag!!!! 😁

Originally posted by: Rattus_Ruhi

Worth the wait, ashu❤ Oh! The 💔. Angsty and broken Raavi has my whole ❤.

"Doosron ke rishte mein khushi aur humare rishte mein bas khaami" 👏👏

You write such bhaari bharkam dialogues in hindi.. It's UNBELIEVABLE. Hence proved, art has no language.

thank you so much ratty 🤗

I had to get the bhaari bharkam dialogues proofread 😆 but I didn't think I would be able to say what I wanted to say in English so tried my hand at hindi 😳 I'm so so glad you liked it 🤗 love youuu

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This is beautiful aashu❤️❤️

I hope that shiva realises that in his hurt and insecurities the damage he is doing to raavi.i know they won't dwell that deep into raavi's emotions on the show, but I so wish to see this.both are in pain, PS has always showed us Shiva's side of the pain more.i so wish we get raavi breakdown.and if we get something like that I want it to be on the lines you have wrote 😍😍

Beautiful dlgs 👏👏

thank you so much pixu jaan 🤗

I think till date one of Alice's best performances was her breakdown during the wedding sequence - I hope they utilize her strength and show us some sort of breakdown from her side. I want to see her pain and I want to his pain - without the anger. They are both so so hurt and they need that outlet. Anger and ignorance is going to get them nowhere 😒

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

thank you so much ratty 🤗

I had to get the bhaari bharkam dialogues proofread 😆 but I didn't think I would be able to say what I wanted to say in English so tried my hand at hindi 😳 I'm so so glad you liked it 🤗 love youuu

I have always found Hindi to be much more expressive than English. For example, "you" in English can mean "aap", " tum" or "Tu" in Hindi.

Having said that, I can never deny the fact that all the writers on this forum have always done a commendable job at making us connect with the characters, their arcs, their words, their actions, their souls.. No matter which language you guys use.

Sooo good👍🏼..its time for someone to knock some sense into shiva...i want that someone to be Raavi🤗 loved this