The turning of tables - RaghVi OS

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The turning of tables - A RaghVi OS


Hey guys! I was literally pissed with Mandarin trying to mess up with Raghavi’s lives so i decided to cook a khichdi where his life is messed up with. I cant wait for tht day to come soon in the show! Meanwhile we can live it in an OS 🤓


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Despite Mandaar's desperate attempts to create differences between them, everything had sorted between Raghav and Pallavi and both were back to being the usual lovebirds. Neither Mandaar nor Vijay Deshmukh's emotional blackmail could any longer stop Pallavi from going back to her house and her husband .


Mandaar couldn't tolerate that despite coming so close to bringing Pallavi back to Deshmukh House, Raghav once again succeeded in winning her trust back and could convince her to go back to the RR Mansion. He was seething for revenge. Not just because Raghav took Pallavi away, but also because he ruined his latest

plan to be close to Pallavi. As soon as Mandaar had come to know that Pallavi still visited and worked from Deshmukh Saree Emporium he insisted going to the shop on the pretext of staying busy and starting to work again. It was a demand everybody welcomed hoping he would get occupied with work but soon what he came to know shattered his hopes into a million pieces. Pallavi and Raghav decided to give the ownership of Deshmukh Saree Emporium to Nikhil and Mandaar to help Mandaar get his life back on track.


"Theek hai Pallu, Tu aur Raghav jaldi aa jao, Maine wakeel sahab ko bhi bula liya hai"


Mandaar rolled his eyes in anger listening to Sharda's conversation on phone.

"Aai iss sab ki kya zaroorat hai" he grimaced in frustration.

"Zaroorat hai Mandaar beta. Aur ismein burai hi kya hai. Woh shop Raghav aur Pallavi apni khushi se tumhein aur Nikhil ko de rahe hain. Main janti hoon woh tumse

paise nahin lenge par tum dono baraabar shop ki installment unhein dete rehna. “ Aai told Mandaar nonchalantly. He was infuriated.

"Aai aap kuch samajhti kyun nahin hai" he shrieked and threw the glass in his hand on ground. His voice was that of a scorned lover whose hopes had been battered.

Sharda was left shocked and scared at his psychotic behaviour.

"Aap samajhti kyun nahin hai ki agar Pallavi shop mujhe aur Nikhil ko de degi to woh kaise ayegi wahan"

Sharda was exasperated at her son's unreasonable words. "Mandaar Pallavi ab Raghav ki patni hai aur woh Deshmukh Saree Emporium mein kaam nahin kar sakti.

Ab usse kahan se kaam karna hai ye woh aur uska pati tay kar lenge" Sharda declared and walked away.

Mandaar threw away all the stuff on the table in anger and walked off fuming.

As soon as he came out he saw Raghav and Pallavi entering the Deshmukh house. His nostrils flared up seeing them walking in hand in hand. The smile on Raghav's face made him burn with desperate desire for revenge. He wanted to ruin that face so bad that Pallavi would never wish to see it again. In order to hide his anger he tried to avoid Raghav and Pallavi and shifted his focus to Amruta who had brought with her a dog that kept on barking.

"Please please Milo calm down...please chup ho ja" Amruta tried to calm the dog while holding his strap little scared herself.

"Amruta ye kiska dog hai itna aggressive..Aur hamare ghar kya kar raha hai" Pallavi asked as she walked in.

"Woh Pallavi ye meri friend Meenakshi ka dog hai, pata nahin subah se isse kya hogya hai but ye bahut aggressive ho raha hai. Isne Meenakshi ke dadaji pe bhi

attack kar diya aur yahan koi vet bhi nahin isliye woh isse mere paas chodke gayi hai jab tak woh doctor ko leke nahin aati tab tak. " Amruta explained.

"Woh theek hai Amruta par aisi responsibility lene se pehle tumhein ye dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha ki ye apne ghar pe bhi kisi ko attack kar sakta hai.Isse yahan lana safe nahin hai" Pallavi sighed.

Pallavi was getting scared seeing how the dog was in attack mode. Raghav smiled seeing her worry. He didnt know his wife was scared of pets.

"Amruta Pallavi sahi kah rahi hai ye bahut dangerous hai tum isse woh outhouse wale kamre mein band kar do" Mandaar told Amruta.

"Kamre mein band karne se woh aur aggressive ho jayega" Raghav interrupted.

"Wah Raghav tumhein kuton ki badhi jaankari hai" Mandaar taunted.

Raghav smirked. "Bina address ke envelope, ekdum sahi kah raha hai tu, woh kya hai na aaye din paala padhta rehta hai. Aur aajkal to ek bade hi pagal kisam ka peeche padha hai. " Raghav grinned.

Mandaar balled his fists in anger that didnt go unnoticed by Pallavi but before Pallavi could say anything she saw something that melted her heart.

Raghav bent on his knee and started stroking Milo's back. While doing so he hummed something in his ear and Milo didn't bark anymore. Pallavi and Amruta were pleasently surprised.

"Wow Raghav ye kaise kiya tumne" Amruta exclaimed.

"Yahi to mere Anna ka magic hai" Farhad spoke with a big smile on his face while walking from behind.

"Woh bhabhi pehle Anna ke paas bhi do dogs the, Anna ne full training li thi unki care karne ke liye. Anna ko pets bahut pasand hain par Anna ne unhein wapas kar diya

kyunki Amma aur Keerti ko bahut dar lagta hai dogs se"

Pallavi was amazed at these new revelations. This man was an enigma to her. He had so much love in him that he gave out in ways she could only be left in awe.

"Ghamandi Rao pata nahin kab samajh paungi main tumhein" she mumbled blushing at him.

"Try karta raho tum Saree Ka Dukaan, kabhi na kabhi to succesful ho hi jayega" he teased her inviting a cute slap from her on his arm.

"Oww Aayi dekho apka beti mujhpe kaise zulm kar raha hai...Hitler ka naani kahin ka" Raghav said dramatically rubbing his bicep and Pallavi laughed at his baby face.

Color had drained off Mandaar's face. It seemed as if a masquerade had come off from Raghav and Pallavi's faces. He had never seen them like this...bickering,

teasing and being so in love. It burnt every damn cell of his body. He just wanted to inflict pain on Raghav in any possible way to make him pay for flopping all his plans.

An idea struck Mandaar as he saw Raghav tying Milo's strap to the pillar little away from enterance.

"Isko yahan pe hi rehne dete hain. Khule mein rahega to shaant rahega. Main Farhaad ko bol dega iske liye doodh aur biscuits rakh de" Raghav told Pallavi and both of them walked inside smiling.

The lawyer arrived too and Pallavi completed all formalities of transferring the ownership of Deshmukh Saree Emporium to Nikhil and Mandaar's name.

While everyone seemed happy Mandaar was busy plotting in his mind his next trap for Raghav. Pallavi had gone to the kitchen to prepare something sweet to mark the occasion of Mandaar joining work again.

"Mandaar woh jo Pallavi ka samaan shop se mangwaya tha woh Raghav ki car mein rakhwa de" Sharda told Mandaar but he didn't respond.

"Mandaar kya soch raha hai" she jerked him to bring him out of his reverie.

"Kuch nahin aayi woh main bas ye kah raha tha ki woh samaan to maine outhouse mein rakhwa diya tha"

"Outhouse mein? Par maine to tujhse woh samaan mere kamre mein rakhne ko kaha tha na"

"Han ayi par woh samaan thoda zyaada tha to apka kamra pura bhar jata isliye maine outhouse mein rakhwa diya"

"Acha to tu jakar le aa" Sharda told him.

"Woh kya hai na ayi Abhi amma ane wali hai mujhe exercise karwane ke liye. Aap Raghav ko kyun nahin bol deti waise bhi uski biwi ka samaan hai"

As Mandaar spoke these words, Raghav was taken aback a little. He could sense this loser had some plan up his sleeve.

"Raghav damaad hai iss ghar ka , woh kyun kaam karega?" Sharda retorted.

"Aayi aap aisa kyun bola kya main apka beta nahin hai" Raghav asked with such warmth in his eyes Sharda couldnt help but smile. It was strange she could feel her motherly instinct come out instantly for Raghav but she couldn't feel the same way for her son who had come back from death.

"Aisa nahin hai beta...Main to bas isliye kah rahi thi ki Mandaar ko pata hai samaan kahan hai to woh le ayega"

"It's ok aayi main Pallavi ka samaan dhundh lega...Saree ka dukan ki dukan ka ek ek kona memorise hogya tha mujhe" he grinned reminiscising his moments with Pallavi from their enemity days.

"Acha theek hai ja dhundhle" Aayi told him smilingly.

As soon as Mandaar saw Raghav walking out he too left the room from back enterance. He had made all the arrangement. He ran towards the outhosue and noticed

someone had alraedy entered the outhouse. Convinced Raghav was already in, Mandaar locked the door of the outhouse sneakily and ran away.

Few minutes later Mandaar walked back to the hall of the Deshmukh house but the floor beneath his feet slipped when he saw Raghav standing right in front of him.

He ran towards Raghav and turned him from his shoulders with a jerk.

"Raghav tum yahaan ho to samaan kaun lene gaya hai"

Raghav was surprised at his conduct.

"Ae bina address ke envelope tujhe daura padhta hai kya. Itna hyper kyun ho raha hai. Samaan Pallavi lene gayi hai. Usne kaha woh sort kar legi usse kya chahiye kya nahin"

As soon as Mandaar heard Raghav's words, he couldn't fathom what to do. His plan had backfired. Never had he imagined something like this to happen. Before he could do anything everyone heard shrieks of Pallavi that came from the direction of the outhouse. She was shouting Raghav's name in horror. Everyone ran towards the outhouse.

"Pallavi kya hua Pallavi tum theek to hai....tum aise chilla kyun raha hai....please bahar aao Pallavi" Raghav tapped harshly on the door of the outhouse scared to death.

"Raghav please darwaaza kholo....yahan iss room mein woh dog locked tha, mujhe to pata bhi nahin tha,woh bahut aggressive ho raha hai..Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai Raghav please kholo" Pallavi cried and pleased in fear.

Raghav was shocked to know the dog was locked inside the room. How could that happen when he himself tied him to that pillar. He felt petrified at the thought of Pallavi getting hurt.

"Pallavi pls relax tum daro mat...usse behlane ki koshish karo uski back pe haath phero"

"Tum paagal ho gaye ho Raghav, ye itna violent ho raha hai..Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai Raghav..please kuch karo "

As everything transpired Mandaar stood tied to his spot clueless what to do next. The family members searched for the key of the outhouse fanatically and Mandaar couldn't speak that the keys lied right in his pocket else

his truth would be out in no time. Fear gripped his features. To save Pallavi would mean making all his plans come to fore as Raghav was smart enough to gauge his ulterior motives.


"Mandaar kuch kar Pallavi ko bacha" Vijay yelped at his seemingly worthless son.

"Paani lekar aao koi aur sab peeche ho jayo yahan se" Raghav shouted and smashed the door with his shoulder.

The lock broke open within a single attempt.

"PALLAVI" Raghav shrieked as soon as the door broke open. As he ran inside he noticed the dog bark incessently and frantically at Pallavi.

It seemed impossible to tame it. Raghav grabbed the water and threw it all on the dog but it didnt budge.

"Pallavi tum daro mat main hoon" Mandaar hummed in background at a volume that seemed quite inaudible between the ear splitting barks of the carnivore.

Raghav had sensed it would be very tough to tame it without medical help. He had decided the last resort to save Pallavi.

"Raghav sochna bhi mat" Pallavi had read Raghav’s facial expressions, she warned him to back off.

"Please no Raghav" Pallavi ordered.

"Pallavi tum shant raho, kuch nahin hoga"

"RAGHAV PLEASE NO" she begged.

As soon as the dog leapt towards Pallavi Raghav jumped in front of it protecting Pallavi from all sides. He took her in a tight embrace exposing himself to the dog and gaurding her away from it.

Pallavi saw Raghav shriek as he fell on top of her. There were warm drops of blood she could feel on her saree. Raghav had been bitten by the dog on his leg.

Tears brimmed Pallavi's eyes as she saw Raghav wince in pain. Soon the vet arrived and the dog was sedated. Raghav cupped Pallavi's face, tears brimming his eyes.

"Pallavi tum theek hai na, tumhein kahin chot to nahin lagi na" he checked her arms and face frantically for any scratches.

She couldn't believe he was himself in so much pain and all he could think of was her well being.

"Main theek hoon Raghav par tumne aisa kyun kiya. Kitni chot lagi hai tumhein!! Kitna dard ho raha hoga" she started sobbing like a baby.

He couldn't help but take her in a bone crushing hug, totally unaware to the Deshmukh clan that gawked on, some with smiles and some in jealousy.

"Pallavi tumhein aise itni dangerous situation mein dekh ke pata hai main kitna dar gaya tha. Agar tumhein ek khanroch bhi aa jata to main kabhi khudko maaf nahin kar pata. Mujhe tumhein yahan akele aane hi nahin dene chahiye tha"

"Tum pagal ho Raghav, tumne apni jaan ko khatre mein daal diya mujhe bachane ke liye.Please aisa dobara kabhi mat karna. Aur mere liye to bilkul nahin" she scolded him gripping his torse more tightly within her arms as if he would run away somewhere.

"Pallavi agar dobara aisa hua to main promise karta hai main tab bhi yahi karega. Raghav Rao ke samne Pallavi pe ek khanroch bhi aajaye, ye kabhi nahin ho sakta

aur na hi main kabhi hone dega" he whispered in her ear , planting a kiss on her neck.

Mandaar stood rooted to his spot shocked as if he had seen a ghost. It seemed like all his world had come crashing down, all his plans failing at once.

As Pallavi and other family members escorted Raghav inside, they walked past Mandaar as he didnt exist.

He walked back and the sight in front of him was nothing less than a nightmare.


Everyone roamed around worriedly for this man who was a nobody to them. Milind kaka tried calling the doctor and Aayi prepared haldi milk for Raghav.

Amruta was busy googling first aid after dog bite for her jiju while Pallavi removed Raghav's socks and was helping him wash his wound with soap and water. The concern that glaced her eyes

flowed in the form of unstoppable tears.

"Saree ka dukaan agar tum aise hi rota raha na to main abse tumhein paani ka tanki bulayega" he teased and she slapped him on his arm lovingly.

"Chup ho jao tum pata nahin kya kya karte rehte ho aur bas har samay apne aap ko chot laga lete ho. Pata hai na tumhein nahin dekh sakti tumhein dard mein" she snuggled in his chest.

"Acha baba I promise aage se main apna poora dhyaan rakhega..ab to please chup ho jayo" he lovingly rubbed her upper arm trying to calm her as she cried hugging his chest.

"Raghav maine doctor se baat kar li hai, unhone kaha hum abhi aa sakte hain" Milind informed.

"Par Hospital jane ka kya zaroorat hai. Dr. Ramya aaya tha na woh hi dekhlega mujhe" Raghav hit a sixer at this one.

He had long back sensed there was some issue with that doctor , he just never got a chnace to put her in a trap.

"Woh Raghav amma kaise dekh sakti hain tumhein" Mandaar stammered.

"Kyun tumhara amma jaanwaron ka doctor hai kya"

"Itni chot lagi hai phir bhi badtameezi nahin khatam ho rahi tumhari" Mandaar fumed irritating Pallavi this time.

"PLease Mandaar tumhein dikh nahin raha Raghav kitne dard mein hai. Usse behes karne se acha hai jaake Dr. ramya ko bulayo" Pallavi ordered pushing Mandaar in a fix.

"Woh Pallavi Amma chali gayi hain, unhein kuch kaam tha" he tried to divert the topic.

"Wah waise to woh har samay yahan baithi rehti hain aur ab jab unki zaroorat thi to chali gayi" Pallavi told in frustration.

"Pallavi tum unpe kyun gussa ho rahi ho"

"Tum rehne do Mandaar tumhari aur tumhari amma ki baatein aajkal meri samajh se bahar hain. Kaka hum Raghav ko hospital hi leke chalte hain" Pallavi suggested and all of them left

with Raghav leaving a furious Mandaar, a dumbfounded Vijay and resentful Sulochna behind.

At the hospital Pallavi constantly stood by Raghav's side as the doctor looked after his wounds.

Mandaar also reached hospital behind them to keep on eye on what cooked. His blood boiled witnessing what all happened in front of his eyes.

Raghav couldnt stop smiling to himself as Pallavi held his hand tightly throughout worrying for him, especially when he was given his anti rabies shots.

Or the way she kept on asking tiniest of questions to the doctor about taking care of Raghav's wound.

Or when she teased him for being a sulking baby on getting his tetanus shot on the bum rather than his arm.

Raghav had her undivided attention in every form of love possible and this was the most bitter medicine Mandaar had to swallow.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was such an amazing OS with proper balance of fun, love, jealousy, humour and pain. Totally loved it 🤗🤗


You have completed two of my wishes in this OS. I always wanted to see Raghvi bickering in front of D family and being lovey dovey couple in front of Mandar 🥳🥳. So thank you so much ❤️

You have done a great job by developing story mainly from Mandar's POV. Expecting more amazing writings from your side.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww this was so cute to read


I hope we see scenes like this now

It is possible, Mandar planned to drug Raghav and Pallavi ate that kheer

The plan turned already against him 😂

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Marvelous one shot 💞

Mandaar tasted the bitter medicine of his own planning and plotting.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was so good. Loved it🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for this one and I mean it because this is the only OS I have read yet which had M in it. 😆

Can't stand that character in show so how can I in stories too? So I usually avoid but this was different so tried for obvious reasons.

It was well written too. ❤️

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Originally posted by: Amnnaa

This was such an amazing OS with proper balance of fun, love, jealousy, humour and pain. Totally loved it 🤗🤗


You have completed two of my wishes in this OS. I always wanted to see Raghvi bickering in front of D family and being lovey dovey couple in front of Mandar 🥳🥳. So thank you so much ❤️

You have done a great job by developing story mainly from Mandar's POV. Expecting more amazing writings from your side.


Hey Amnaa thankyou so much for the sweetest feedback. Glad I could fulfill any of your RaghVi wishes:) Dying to see both these wishes cone true on the show

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivyaaaV

Aww this was so cute to read


I hope we see scenes like this now

It is possible, Mandar planned to drug Raghav and Pallavi ate that kheer

The plan turned already against him 😂


Yeahh I an still unsure why would he drug Raghav unless it was something too harmful. In that case Raghav wont eat it and it would be a hit and miss.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: _symphony


Yeahh I an still unsure why would he drug Raghav unless it was something too harmful. In that case Raghav wont eat it and it would be a hit and miss.


To create misunderstandings between them

Maybe? Idk Mandar must be thinking Raghav and Pallavi’s relationship is so weak that he’ll lash out at her and blame her

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just loved it...superb...I really hope that in the serial Pallavi behaves like this

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